Lizey looks beautiful. She has blond hair. She wears a pink dress. She likes to put makeup on. She likes red lipstick. Lizey has curly hair. Lizey has curly eye lashes. The color of her eyes are baby blue. Lizey has six friends. She is rich. She likes wearing jewellery.

Responding to Lucia's Character

By Jolene Grade 4

One day Lizey was sitting on her bed thinking about what she should do today. Then her mom came in. "What's on your agenda today Lizey?" her mom said. "I do not know" "Well, since you are not doing anything, how about we go to the mall?" "OK" But in the mall Lizey got lost in one of the stores. She looked and looked for her mom. She went in Zellers, Sears, Fido, everywhere but she couldn't find her mom. Three days later her mom came back to the mall and finds Lizey and takes her home. Three hours later, Lizey wakes up and finds herself in her rooom . She runs downstairs and hugs her mom and kisses her and she said, "I would never go off without telling you again!"

Character by Tyra (Grade 3)

-She looks like a with a little red T shirt.
-that you can see very good things around the world.
-that she is good at flying and also seeing.
-that she likes to see other things that she haven't seen before.
and well rowan don't like to see red rode dogs that are very mean.

On the day that she was born, Junie B. Jones had hair, brown hair. She had green eyes and the colour of her dad's skin and the colour of her mom's lips. When she was 5 yearyears old she had funny clothes.

Responding to Sams's Character

By Lucia Grade 4

One day Junie B Jones woke up. She was 17 years old. She got ready for school. First she put on make-up. Then she put on a yellow shirt and a orange skirt. Junie had a sister. She is ten years old. Sarah was her name. June had another sister. She was a baby. Her name is Linzey. Thy also had a brother Nikey. He is also 17 years old. When Junie ws going to put on her earrings, Nikey came in and stole one of her earrings. "Aaa!" June yelled. "Nikey," she yelled again. Nikey was hiding hehind the door. Junie always said he was a pain in the neck. After school when Junie came back home with her brother and sister, they found a box. Sarah opened the box lid...

My character is a fighter. she has other nice friends. She has dark blond hair colour. She likes to fight boys or girls. She usually wears a full red or black suit or a dark dark blue pair of pants. She likes to sleep but she likes to jight more. My character is 24 years old. She has a brother named Joe-Joe.

Responding to Ashley's Character

By Tyra Grade 3

My character is a fighter. She has othe nice friends. She has dark blond hair colour. She likes to fight boys or girls. She usually wears a full red or black suit of a dark dark blue pair of pants. She likes to sleep but she likes to fight more than sleeping because there are lots of robbers that can steal people of kids. That's who always steal people of kids. Just like the same robbers that can steal lots of stuff, almost like different ones. That's why she never goes to sleep but when she is done she goes right back to her house and goes to sleep and in the morning she looks outside and sees if there is any danger and if there is she will go and save the world from danger and she was looking around and there was a problem because the world was not good because the robbers went to other peoples house to steal their rings and also their necklaces so she went and fisched every body's house and she gave all the peoples rings back and also their necklaces back and went to the robbers and said, "Do you want to be caught by the police?" They said, "No." so she said, "Then stop stealing other peoples stuff cause that's just stealing like" After people do and that means they are more and she said , "All well my job is done." Just when they come back she will just go back to sleep.

Rayan has brown hair and blue eyes. He has light skin. He wears one shirt with a skole head and another on top. He wears jeans pants.

Resoponding to Paigepro's Character

By Paigepa

Once upon a time there was a boy and the boy's named Ryan . But his friends call him Ray. But his hair is brown and blue eyes and Ryan has light skin. He wears a shirt is blue and black pants with a red strip and Ryan socks are blue. When he went to school his friens made fun of him after lunch he went to the baby park and the babies made fun of Ryan and one is a bad baby called him a baby. It is from his mom. She told him that he goes to his gramas and called them Nana and his grandpa Papa. But then he went ot a different school . And never came back to that school again.

The character's name is Captain Underpants. He looks like a super hero and he is. He is bold he wears a cape on his back. He wears no shoes he can fly. He fights bad guyys and criminals. he is a super hero and he looks cool. He drinks super juice. And he likes super juice it makes him strong.

Responding to Raj's Character

By Samirah

Captain Underpants

Once there was a man his name is Captain Underpants. People call him Captain Underpants because he is bold, he is powerful and he is strong. He is stronger than a daddy elephant. He is faster than a brand new scotter. He can jump over the highest chair in the world. If his power doesn't work that good, he drinks super power juice then it makes him strong. He wears a cape on his back so he can fly. He doen't like to wear shoes. He just wears a cape and a underpants. One day he saw a house baring and when he got there the problem was he didn't drink the super power juice. So he can't go there to save the people. He was so far from the shop he bays the juice. So he went it got one hour to get there. Then he drinks the juice and fly away to go and save the people when he got there it was two hours late. The house was bard but good thing the people was safe. He picked the all peole in two hands. The people was safe so he said, "tralaaa". He made that up and it means Good Bye! Then he wants to eat because he was hungry. He had a dog name La La tra. La La Tra was a powerful dog just like Captain Underpants because Captain Underpants gave him som of the juice too. They both fly high in the sky. La La Tra saw a baby crying. La La tra went to the baby and made some faces at the baby and the baby began to laugh. Captain Underpants was so proud of his dog La La Tra.

Max was special because he helps people. He is good at playing basket ball. He likes to do school work. Unusal- doe not be bad. He likes to help people. He is good at reading. He likes to read.

Responding to Anthony's Character

By Obaid

Arnold and Max were in Japan they were doing Karate there was strong Japanese guys there strong too and Arnold was going to fight first with Japanese the Japanese named was Luk Kun and there was 20 Japanese guys and the first one was Luk Kun and another one was Scorpion and Sacvo and Mortola and Rain and Kano and Kaboll and sab zero and Zelda and James and James Bond and Doctor-Lala and Jojo and Sonya and Boss. Sonya has a sword it dot that sonya it Sonya from game and Sonya from game she is girl and Sonya has a gun too Sonya shot Arnold but nothing happened Arnold killed the bad guys and Arnold's birthday came and Arnold could every off his friend and Crzan came and everybody came to Arnold birthday next morning it was Max's birthday they all eat the cake bye.

Katelynn is a little girl that is my friend! She looks like my cousin. She is nice, beautiful and kind. She is good at being nice. She likes to play with friends.

Responding to Tracy's Character

By Tasha Grade 3

I have a friend named Katelynn she has orange hair. She is nice all the time.She lives out in Newfoundland me and her used to go to school with each other. We were best friends. I used to go over to her house for sleepover. And we stayed up all night eating candy. And playing tell seven in the morning. We used to go swimming with each other. We used to go and give every Christmas presents to each other. It was very fun.

Snowflake

There once was a girl named Snowflake. She had blue eyes long blond hair with brown and other color streaks, lips that shined like the morning sun and fingernails that glittered like snow with the sun shining in winter. She was an A plus student and loves doing hair. She is good at drawing and helping people. She likes to walk in the park and swing on her porch swing. But the unusual things about her is she likes to play in the mud and gets all dirty.

Responding to Samm's Character

By Shanissa

There was a little girl named Snowflake and she had a friend named Tyra but Tyra didn't want to be her friend any more. So Snowflake just walkd away. Tyra was very sorry but she had another friend to play with. Snowflake waw disappointed so she went to the park. Tyra went to the park to say sorry and Snowflake said it's OK!

Max is a star basketball player, he wins every game. Max sometimes is funny. Sometimes he brakes, although not that much. Sometimes he tells hystericle jokes. Max is also smart, and since he is so tall he can do slam dunks. He has a basketball hoop outside and in his room. He is so lucky!

Raj Responding to Steven's Character

Max is a blader and he has teamates and thy are called the bladebrakers and they are the world champion bladers and Max has a bit beast and his name is Driseyiland. He and his team were in the third round and Max had a problem when his grand machain broke and Max saw a bit beast and he put the bit beast on his bayblade and he asked his bit beast to win the hole badle and his team were really happy that they won.

Ted is the main character. Ted has short and spiked hair. He is cool and he has brown eyes, a brown nose and a red and pink lips. Ted has a bike and with the bike he could do oils, and a catwalk. Ted has no brothers or sisters so when he can't do anything he goes and plays with his friends. Ted has a PS2 and he plays his favourite game vice site. So that's why you should always have a main character.

Responding to Shawn's character

By Alex (grade 3)

Ted was the best at riding. His friends decided to race him to his house. his friends could not catch up so they went home. Sometimes Ted was lonley. But that was okay because he had a PS2 and played his favorite game. He could not stop playing games. But one time he didn't because ha was sleeping over. Whe he won on his game, he pated his spiked hair. He loved doing the cat walk on his bike Once he bought a phone he liked it much as he likes his PS 2. But his problem was he had no food. He went to a store but all they had was for breakfast. All he had was fun stuff. He had money but it was 6 toonies. He did exercize. He had chicken but it was gone. He got a idea he went to one of his friends. He said, "Do you have some food?" "Yep," said his frined. "Yay!"

Michelle is a girl. She looks like a Chinese girl but she is not. She has a brother and a sister. She is smart at doing things like Math and all kins of stuff. She has a nice heart and plus she has lots of friends and she has a best friend too. She has a nice family who loves her. Her eyes are brown. Her hair is black and a little bit dyed.

Responding to Helen's Character

By Tracy Grade 3

Michelle

Michelle is a generous person that has more than ten friends. Michell really looks like a Chiness person but she isn't Chinese. But she does speak Vietnamese and English. Michell has brown eyes and her hair is black and there's a colour in there that makes her look like she had dyed her hair. She has a great and really wonderful voice to everyboday she knows. MIchelle has a brother that's in grade four and a sister that is in grade two. She is the most smartest kid in the world that anybody would call her smart girl. But the problem was that she sometimes yells at people because she really is excited about something. She also has a very good heart plus she's the greatest that everybody wants her as a sister.

Amanda is a girl and she is very nice and cool. She is nice to different kinds of children. Amanda is very very healthy and she is clean. Amanda is very very very good at secrets and she has lots of friends. Every report card she gets A and she has brown hair and with light skin. she wears a pink shirt and a purple sweater. It says pissese. She wears blue pants and she also has pink pants.

Responding to Paigepa's Character

By Ashley Grade 3

Amanda is a girl and she has dark eye lashes. She has a different color of eyes-black and she's very nice. She has long, black hair with red striks in it. She has a pink tie, a diamond necklace. She has a blue T-shirt and black silky pants. She has tall black high heel shoes. Amanda is very healthy. Amanda has tons of friends. Amanda is clean. Amanda lives in a big house. She has a child named Casey. Casey likes her so much. Amanda loves to go to the park or the water park. Amanda is good at making juice. At school Amand gets an A on her reportcard. Her teacher gets proud of her more and more. Amanda was getting proud of herself. All of a sudden Mrs. Carly came in and said, "Hey, Amanda, your car broke down." "What?" Shouted Amanda, "Oh no, what are we going to do?" "Call your mom I guess." "No, She's at work. OK I'll get my brother to fix it. What's wrong?" "It broke down." "That was easy. It just needed gas."

This girl in my school was a special kind of girl. She had blond hair, brown eyes, and golen earrings. She was very nice whenever somebody need help she was there. When somebody get hurt whe was there. Dava is a very kind person.

Story edited and changed by Sonya

Hi, this is a true story about a very good friend.

One day in the year 2002 a girl came to our shcool she had one brother that is in grade six.

She was from Russia one day she was hanging around by herself so me and my cousin went to her and asked her if she wanted to play with us.

She couldn't speak too much English so she just said yes.

Then she found kids her own age that would play with her and be friend with her. Then she started to speak English. Her brother became friends with my cousin Raymond and Dava became friend with my cousin Rose. Then she started to talk English.

Dava is in grade four but now Dava is ain grade five.

Dava plays soccer with me in the summer and plays with fer friends in the summer too.

Dava loves to play soccer in the summer.

When I need something Dava is there for me.

She is a very nice girl.

Ali is a boy. He can do magic. He wants to be a teacher. He wants to show his magic to the student when he got a job like a teacher. Once he showed his magic for some of his friends and they like it. Later more people like it. He doesn't like Art. He doesn't like painting. He doesn't like some girls. He doesn't like to be a principal.

Once upon a time there was a wizard. He wanted to be a teacher. But when he got his job, all he would teach was magic. All the kids were getting sick and tired of it so they told him, "We are getting sick of it." So that day they only did art, painting and started to like girls. And said hi to the principal. At the end of the day he said, "Goodbye. See you in the morning." That very next day he said, "Yesterday was the most funest day of my life. Santa Claus is funny."

By Chris (Grade 5)

My character looks like a bat. He is black. He likes to eat bugs. He is good at catching bugs and seeing in the dark. He likes to do a lot of stuff like playing and flying. He is unusual because he likes the dark and sees in the dark. He sleeps in the day and flies around at night. He is small and black

Tyson

One day there was a boy named Tyson. Like the normal people Tyson was wearing a hat, a vest, a T shirt, pants and shoes. Well, Tyson had a lot of problems with his friend. They kept on fighting until they wern't friends anymore . They will not talk any more. Tyson has new friends. His friend had to be all alone by himself and Tyson and his other friends will never fight any more.

Responding to Nav's Character

By Roman

Tyson

One day there was a boy named Tyson he looked like the normal person. He had a top called a beyblade an ancient creature called a bitbeast was in his beyblade. It came from a sword past from generation to generation. Ever since Tyson got that bitbeat he's been a fierce beyblader and has never lost a beybalade battle. Now the only person who can save the earth is Tyson. Fom the evil beybladers the demolition boys! Then Tyson had to battle tala the battle was intense but the winner was Tyson! Champion beyblaade and his team!

Crash Bandi Coot

A creature called Crash he is Bandi Coot who can talk. He looks like a fox. Blue pants, two ears and wears shoes. Something about Crash is he can jump high as a trampoleen. Can run faster as a car. Crash can spin a tornado strong. And finally he has a bazooka. Crash can jump over a building can body slam so hard the world would shake!!!

Responding to Roman's Character

By Navaneet

Crash Bandi Coot

Crash Band a Coot was on a mission to find the legendary gold key and the silver key well Crash had to defeat a lot of evil villian, power laser gun. Crash laser gun was so powerful break a building down. Crash heard something in the jungle. It was a gorilla. The gorilla was so strong that Crash to took out his laser gun that it destroyed the gorilla. His gun killed the villans were dead he ran fast and he made it. Crash had to beat the boss in one shot the boss was killed he got the gold key and the silver key Wille Crash was walking he had a heart vinese he did not know how to solve the problem in ten days he will die the ten days were over he died and that's how he solved his mission.

Once upon a time there was a man named Dean and he is as strong as an ox and he can lift the world. He can go through walls. He can breathe under water. he can break walls. He can climb on walls. He can turn into leck wood metal.

Responding to Dean's Character

By Ilyas

Once upon a time three was a boy named Ilyas and he is strong as an ox and he can lift two cars is one finger he can go through people pet he had problem with coming back from samebody is stomach and he can't break down somebody was missing his teeth is name was war is den. Ilyas came from his mouth.

My character is Spiderman and Hulk and Venom. He is good at fighting. I like to do play because I love him. He is strong and he can fly and he is cool and he is very strong and his name is Spiderman. I see his books and movies and I see his movies lots of times and book and I like him.

Responding to Obaid's Character

By Steven Grade 4

Spiderman was in a battle against green-goblin pow Spiderman dodged. Then Spiderman launched his sword and that goblin dodged, then he launched again what a hit swung him to te ground then goblin got up, called the levetation thing and got on without remembering he had the wepon pow to the floor he was knocked out. When he woke up he was hanging down from the top of the building he struded then fell and the green goblin was never seen again.

Santa was getting ready for Christmas. He liked Christmas. It was his favorite thing. He is good at delivering presents. He doesn't like sports. He is interested in Christmas. He has a beard and he is chubby.

They were my friends. They went to the same school as me. There were weird. We went on a fieldtrip. We got bit by. I turned into spiderman. Nav turned into Hulk. Alex turned into a huge spider but not spiderman. It was cool. We got back to school. Our teacher told us to go home because she was scared. It was so fun. We lived together.

Hi my name is Kitten AA. the two A's stand for Ashley Anderson but my friends just say AA. Let me tell you a little about me. OK?

I have blue eyes and blond hair. But I have blue steaks in it. I weigh about 69 pounds and foot 3. I am 13 years old and I am in the 7th grade. I love to hang out at the mall with Tacha, Kate. Ashley and Angel and I like to get into trouble at school . I am more of a boy than a girl sometimes. My mom says I am a boy because I am good at socccer storst and I like bugs. Well I have to go to class now. Bye.

Mat could do math. He could even count to one billion. But most of all he loved tricks. For Christmas he sent a letter to Santa and he wished for a pokemon trainer kit. There were two kinds, pokemon trainer and master trainer.

My character is Mrs. Ellet. She is a girl who cleans houses to make money. She can sometimes be rude. She has green hair, purple dress and she is a mermaid. I use the word mermaid because she's a maid. Now you might think it's real but this story is fake.

By Sams

My character is Misses Hilery. She is a girl who likes to clean the house all the time. She can sometimes be nice. She has long brown hair. She usually likes to skip rope. She hates to work so much. She hates cats. She loves dogs.

by B. J. (Sherwood School)

After the storm struck the crew of fisherman went home. One of them had a wooden leg. His name was Captain Kory. The other one had a patch over his eye. His name was Lance.The other one had a hook on his hand; his name was Hook Hand.

By L. (Sherwood School)

So the four crew of fisherman had to survive on a stranded island. One of the fishermen's names was Kyle. He had short blond hair, blue eyes and always got treated very well by girls. There was Bryce and he had brown hair and brown eyes. Bryce love to dance at night clubs. No one forgot about the twins, Frank and Flair. Everyone thought they were so uncool.

By grades 4 and 5 classes (Sherwood School)

Alone upon a volcanic tropical island, there's a man who's lived there all his life. He has bones in his hair, green eyes, his favorite color is red and his name is Jeffrey. He's trying to get out of the mountains but he's never found his way. He has seen so much lava he's not afraid of it. When he was a baby he burnt his foot off because he never knew what lava was. He's 26 years old.

By Intermediate Opportunity class (Sherwood School)

At the end of the tunnel Tony sat forlornly rocking in comfortable rocking chair, being careful not to rock on his tail. He wiggled his whiskers while he rocked back and forth and back and forth. The mouse did at have any friend; he knew it was because of his nose. Tony gazed around at the cozy home he had made in the abandoned train. I wonder why my nose always glow in dark? sighed Tony. I hate my nose! I wish I could cut it off!” Suddenly, an idea popped into to his head. “I will paint my nose!” He exclaimed. “I can’t cut it, my nose, off, so I will paint it black!” So, he scurried quickly out into the dark tunnel. “Well at least I don’t need a flashlight.” He chuckled as he raced to find some paint.

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