There was a girl she was on a hike on the biggest mountain but she got lost.

Responding to Sonya's Story Problem By Lucia

One day when Amanda woke up she got all excited. Amanda is 16 years old. Amanda was excited because she was going hiking. She was camping. When everyone was done eating breakfast they set off. It was so cloudy on the mountain. It was so cloudy that Amanda didn't notice her parents and her little brother Mike taking a break. Then when she turned around she saw her family was gone. "Oh no what do I do," she said. "Help! Amanda yelled. "Mom dad!" said Amanda. she was lost. Amanda started to cry when she heard someone call her name. "Amanda!" Amanda started to get cold. Out of the clouds came her mother. Amanda's mom saw her. She picked up Amanda and told them she found Amanda. They all went back to the cabin. Amanda was all right. She told her friends at home what happened.

Once upon a time there was a little girl named Magon she was going downstairs to eat dinner she was having spaghetti She loved spaghetti she had a new clean dress and a brother oh look Magon's at the table a splat of spaghetti went on her new dress. You are a brat brother.

Responding to Ashley's Story Problem

By Jolene Grade 4

One day Magon went down to the supper table but when she got to the table no one was there so she made herself some maccoroni the same thing happened every night Then one night she wanted to go look for diamond she found her diamonds frozen in the ice She came home and got a hammer and aizle and got her mom and dad out.

Once upon a time there was a boy named OB. He was leaving from this school and they were moving from Sherwood School. I will miss him, that is the problem.

Responding to Ilyas's Story Problem By Kyle Grade 4

One day Ilyas's best friend Ob moved away from Sherwood community and then Ilyas was really sad and he was crying. Then Ilyas went home after school. On his way home he walked by Ob's house and he wanted to see if Ob was still there. Ilyas knocked and there was no one there and then Ilyas was really sad. The next day Ilyas and his mom went to the mall and at the mall Ob was there. Ilyas said, "Hey Ob". And then they spend the rest of the day with each othere laughing and playing with each othere and the moms talked and then said, "Every weekend we will all apend time with each other." Ilyas was really really happy about that.

One day the spider was hungry but there were no bugs to eat.

Responding to Sams Story Problem By Ronnie

Another day the spider was about to die but thirteen bugs got stuck in the web. So the spider ate them. It was hngry still So I was about to eat it. It came up and bit my arm. Two days later I was spiderman. It was cool I was like so fast that I was amazing. I got printed in the paper. I was like Tarzan but I was red and blue and I could draw very good. I drew myself spinning my web.

A girl had a fish named Angel but the next day the fish was hungry but the girl had no food for the fish.

Responding to Tasha's Story Problem by Tyra Grade 3

A girl had a fish named Angel but the next day the fish was very hungry. But the girl had no food for the fish and then she went to the store and then she forgot to feed the fish and the fish almost died. So she went and dropped a piece of bread in the fish tank by accident. But the fish was still alive and then she dropped another piece of bread in the fish tank by purpose so the fish would stay alive. So then she stopped dropping things in the tank. But the fish was still hungry. So she was all alone but she just wasn't all alone. She had her fish as her pet and she was never alone by herself. But the fish was still hungry. So she kept on feeding up till he was very very full from eating all that bread and the fish was very full. When he ate lots already and the girl was very hungry. So she went to get somethings to eat and then when she went to bed,the fish was so fat and in the morning she saw the fish was so very very fat. She thought she gave Angel too much food to eat last night and she thought she gave Angel her fish just a little bit food to eat. But she was very wrong. She gave her fish Angel a lot of food to eat and so she went and feed the fish and the fish was still full and then she was very sad

There was a big problem and there were three bionic boogers chasing Geroge Harold, Captain Underpants and Melvin. They had been chased by three bionic boogers but Melvin's hamster put the three bionic booger in his mouth and spit the three bionic boogers to space.

Responding to Raj's Story Problem

There was a big war against Captain Underpants and the bionic boogers. It was all Melvin's fault because he got mad at Harold and George. So he made a icecream with buttons on it. Melvin turned himself into a giant booger. Then Captain Underpants beat the giant booger into many parts.

Lights Out

One day Liza and her mom were watching T.V., the lights flickered and the whole house was pitch black. No other houses in the city..

Responding to Samm's Story Problem by Shanissa Grade 4

One day Liza and her mom were watching T.V., the lights flickered. Now the city was dark they could not watch T.V. so they went to check the switches. They were all off. Her mom turned them on and the lights and T.V. went back on. I thought I would never gt to watch T.V. any more.

Once upon a time there were two cats and five dogs. But there was a problem, the dogs picked on the cats and they had no food. They lived in a trailer that was broken.

Responding to Ronnie's Story Problem By Paigepal

Once upon a time there were two cats and five dogs. But there was a problem the dogs did not have food. and the cats had food and the cats shared the food with the dogs. and the two cats and five dogs lived in a broken trailer.

There was a girl named Mrs. Riddle and Captain Underpants gave her a wedgy.

Responding to Tracy's Story Problem by Steven Grade 4

One day there were two boys named George and Harold. They were really bad and they did something to the football team and the fooball team did not know and Mr. Krupp, their mean principal got proof. So they got a hypro ring and hynotized him into Captian Underpants. Then they destroyed the evidence and then they said everytime someone snaps their fingers you turn into Captain Underpants and they said, "Give Mrs. Riddle a wegie." She said, "What's that?" Just as Geroge snapped his fingers, Mr. Krupp! So they said, "No more school until tomorrow because I have to have a word with Mr. Krupp." So whenever someone snaps their fingers, you know it's going to come.

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Samirah. One day she had to leave her school but she did not want to.

Responding to Shanissa's Story Problem by Sams

Once upon a time there was a girl named Samirah was a new girl in the school. She wanted to go to her old school. She did not want to go to her new school but she moved anyways. She did not know anyone but when Tyra came and Tyra said,"Hi, I am Typra. You must be new." Then Samirah said, "Yes, I am new to this schol." Then she wanted to stay at that school and did not want to leave.

Responding to Obaid's Problem by Alex Grade 3

I tried to save my dog becuase hunters are coming. I said I think think I hope this works I put money in the phone but no what should I do I've got it I whistle and he know what to do but the hunters are here. The hunters said, I want to shoot him. I got a flash light. He pointed it at the hunter and said please don't shoot him but he could not hear. He had disc music on. Maybe I tell the other hunter to don't shoot him. I did and he said yes.

A girl named Sarah has a problem. She has somehting under her bed and someone is stealing her things like jewellery, candy, make-up and jewellery box.

Responding to lucia's Problem by Samm Grade 4

The Thief

One hot Summer day Sarah went out to J.P. outdoor pool. She was the best swimmer because she liked to practice. Her mom always said to her practie makes perfect so that's what she did. But while she was gone someone broke in and stole her jewelry, money, candy, make-up,jewelry box and her most pride possession her marriage ring! When she got home everything was a mess. When she went to get her marraige ring from her secret drawer, it was gone! She sat up on her bed and started to cry. Then she picked up her phone and dailed 911. She told them everything they said they would watch 6 months later they caught the theives but they hd murdered on of her friends Emily. But at least they caught the thieves so they can't murder anyone else.

Max could do math it was his computer. It would not turn on the push the switch but it did not work. He had lunch but it still won't work. Max said, "Darn when does it gokng to work? maby I will return it."

Responding to Alex's Problem by Tracy Grade 3

Max had a problem and his problem was that Max's computer didn't turn on. But Max didn't know why his computer wasn't working. So after they had supper Max was mad because when nobody does their homework they will be sent to the detention room. When Max was sleeping he had a dream that the detention room was taken care by Mrs. Riddle the crazy woman. So the next day when he went to school the nicest teacher in Sherwood Elementary was going to teach them for the day. When Mrs. Sisi the nice teacher started taking homework everybody who did not do homework won'thave to go to the detention room any more!

Tyson Ray Max and Ka had a big problem. The problem was they had to beat team Spiders. The bigger problem was they had to beat their bitchip by using thier final attack. And they beat them and they won.

Responding to Nav's Problem by Shawn Grade 3

Tyson, Ray, Max and Kai had a big problem. They had to vers the paskic. They wanted to beat their bitchip. They had strong bitchips. Max was first to battle. Max tried to hang in but their bayblade was too strong and then Max lost. Kai was up next he has good skills but I don't think Kai could beat his next battle. Kai used his bitchip and he won. Ray was up next he used all his strength and then it was a tie. Tyson is the world champion and his bay blade went so fast that he knocked out the bayblade out of the stadium and then they won. Tyson was real happy that he won.

When Victoria woke up she was so happy she went to shcool she was happy but when she got to school her friend told her that she was moving but Victoria did not believe her until her teacher said she was moving Then she started to cry and then when she went home she lost her brother. She went everywhere to find her brothr when it was begin to get dark she went home her mom said, "We will look for your brother tomorrow OK."

Responding to Jolene's Problem by Ashley Grade 3

When Victoria woke up she was so happy because she was going to school but she couldn't because she was sick but her friend told her that she was moving but Victoria did not believe her until her friend told her that she was moving.

Hurry up, quickly through the jungle, protect the head ahhh oh no hairy yikes we have to get to the gate house, ahhh, not you Fred, ahhh oh no we might have to jump into the lava, no we can't, we don't have a choice Your're right ahhhh!!!

Responding to Steven's Problem by Roman Grade 4

Hurry up, quickly through the jungle, protect the head ahhh oh no hairy yikes we have to get to the safe house, ahhh, not you Fred, ahhhoh no we maight have to jump into the lava, no we can't we don't have a choice youre right ahhhh!!!

I was going to the store and I oh no there is Jame and his gun he was the bully of the school. Once he told me to do bad things. But I did not do it and I told my mom and she told his mom and he got into very big trouble.

Responding to Paigepal's Problem by Ilyas Grade 3

I was going to my friend's house and I saw somebody klaing a box name Ob and I saved him and the girl who kelh his name was Sa and she was trying to kel me the problem was she was trying to as and keh as and I fall and she call me.

One morning Ryan got up and wnet to school. After the morning it was lunch time. At lunch there was a problem there were rats in the food. Everyone was wondering where they came from. Ryan said he will get to the bottom of this.

Will Ryan get to the bottom of this? Will Ryan have to eat anchovese? Stay tuned...

Responding to Kyle's Problem by Sonya Grade 4

Ryan quickly run home made his lunch and ran back. Then when he got to school he took out his note book and started to investigate. He knew the person with the rat food in the kids pocket. So he ran to the cafeteria and found rat food crumbs. But the crumbs ended at room 6 door so Ryan knew somebody from room 6. So he went in and saw Anthony feeding rat. Then Ryan told the principal and he had D.T. for a whole month and helping the janitor.

It was somebody's birthday he had to take a cab home they had so much fun and forgot a cab had to pick them up when they went outside the cab left.


One day there was a boy and it was his birhtday he took a taxi so he could go home but the boy was too shy to tell the taxi driver where to go and he whispered to the taxi driver and when the taxi dropped him him he saw all of the house light and the inside and the door was not locked and went inside he looked back and the cab was gone and he looked inside and their family and friends said happy birthday and the boy went inside.H3>

Once upon a time a guy named Spiderman was a hero who fights crime. Shocker was zapping Spiderman. Pow bam aaaaaa Shocker threw Spiderman in the water.

Responding to Roman's Problem by Navaneet Grade 4

Once upon a time Peter Packer who was Spiderman. Spiderman was looking for Shocker. Shocker was behind Spiderman threw his web. Shocker missed Spiderman and then he threw a web at Shocker. Spiderman threw Shocker in the water. Spider man went home.

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