Tyre (grade 3 )
Setting
What I see in the desert is lots of rattle snakes and some snakes. I also see is some red ants and some spiders and some scorpions and also a spider web and when I see a spide web I just walk away from it.
what I hear is rattle snakes and also scorpions and ants marching to get my food and I can also hear spiders and birds chirping all around me also nests with body birds chirping for food to eat and sankes hissing at me and also scorpions.
I can smell hot air go into my nose and I can smell the desert and the trees and also sand hot sand with the odour coming out. I can also smell grass that is very hot and I can smell the hot air and at night I can smell coldness at night.
(grade 5)
Desert Setting by Chris
I see a tarantella. I hear the rattle snake come closer. I smelled a piece of poop. I taste a piece of sand. I touched the real sanke on me. I feel happy and sad. I see a camel. I saw a pie. I hear a car. T touch a car . I feel sad a lot. I see a cat.
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