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Ocean Settings:


Tyra (grade 3)

Ocean Setting

In an ocean I can see and smell and taste and feel and touch and hear. In the ocean I can see is a whale and fish and seaweed and I can see people swimming as I can see dolphins. I see big and small fish and I can see boat sailing. I can see surfers and see my friends and I see my family. In the ocean I can smell water. I can smell fish. I can smell sand. I can smell flowers. I can smell birds. I can smell the fish sun. I can smell the seaweed. I can smell people. I can taste in the ocean fish. I can taste salt water. I can taste sand. I can taste seaweed.



Tasha (grade 3)

Ocean Setting

In the ocean I see palfins and I see fish and I see whales and I see sharks. I see star fish. I see seeweed. I see shells. I see sea horses.

I hear the sounds of the ocean. I hear fish jumping out the water. I hear people throwing rocks into the water. I hear birds. I could hear pallfins. I could hear whales. I cound hear sharks. I could hear people talkng out loud.

I taste the salt in the water. I could taste fish. I could taste crab. I could taste lobster. I could taste Jake fish. I could taste crab fish. I could taste salt water. I could see weeds.



Roman (grade 4 )

Ocean Setting

I see sharks and crabs, fishes, lobsters, starfish, sea turtles and dolphins. I hear birs chirping, dolphins urping, crabs claws going clack. Shars growling, waves spashing, wind making oooo sounds. The sand going put,put. I taste the sand, salty ocean water, the wet sand, dead crab, sea wee, fish, starfish, little squid. Texture, a rock with no corners, slimy seaweed, turtles eggs, seagulls droping, turtles shells, whates blubber, crab shell, sand. I feel happy when seeing eels, catching a whale, real big fish, seeing a jellyfish, catching a pinefish, catching a shark, getting a ride on a dolphin and a ride from a whale.



Sonya (grade 4)

Ocean Setting

I was at the ocean with some friends and family.

I just love the sound of the ocean waves and people laughing and I love one more sound the sound of hte cool breeze and I love the sound of fish jumping. And I love to see people getting along, playing happily and talking together and having fun.

I love the taste of cold apple juice and ice cream and eat cold popcicles and pop. I love the smell of the ocean water and ice cream and cold pop and sand.



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Ocean Setting by Navaneet (Grade 4)

One day at the ocean, there was a boy swimming in the ocean and he heard a sound. It was a whale. The boy heard a jelly fish. The boy heard a sound. It was an octapus. The next thing he heard was a starfish. The next thing the boy heard was a fish. The next thing the boy heard was a cracker. The next thing the boy heard was a shark. The next thing the boy heard was a turtle. The next thing the boy heard was a sea monster. The next thing the boy saw was the ocer. The next thing the boy saw wa a shark. The next thing the boy saw was a sea creature. The next thing the boy saw a penguen. The next thing the boy sawwas a poplar bear. The next thing the boy saw was a duck. The next thing the boy saw a frog. The next thing the boy saw a...




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