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Winter Wonderland by Samm (grade 4)

As I walk down the snowy side walk, I see people hanging decoration up outside, people shovelling their walks. I see people tobboganing down the hill, people taking home their Christmas tree. I see people giving change to the Santa, people helping others with presents. I see people carrying home the presents and I see people in a good spirit.
I hear people laughing as they tobbogan, kids singing Christmas carols for people. I hear sleigh bells jingling, horses click clacking through the snow. I hear my boots crunching through the snow, peoples' boots crunching through the snow. I hear kids running through the snow and peoples' presents banging in the boxes.
I taste snowflakes on my tongue, grandma's freshly baked cookies. I taste candy canes people are giving me, chocolates people are giving me for me and my family. I taste peoples' freshly baked cookies they're handing out, hot chocolate I bought from the store, and I taste some sweet popcicles.
I smell smell sweet candie canes, fresh hot coco. I smell fresh baked cookies, fresh new chocolates. I smell cold air, eggnog that people are drinking.



Winter Setting by Ashley (grade 3)

I see snow outside. I see people skating outside. I see people snowboarding outside. I see people playing outside. I see birds flying outside. I see people making igloos outside. I see people walking outside. I see people walking thier dogs outside.

I hear birds chirping outside. I hear dogs barking outside. I hear cats meowing. I hear kids playing . I hear kids singing. I hear people humming. I hear people talking. I hear people whistling.

I taste snow. I taste icecream. I taste ice. I taste cool whip. I taate igloos. I taste fruitloops. I taste grass. I feel rocks I feel bars. I feel dogs. I feel snow. I feel ice. I feel trees. I feel shoes. I feel cats. I feel coats.



Winter Setting by Obaid (Grade 3)

I see old snow and snow is cold and winter is good and winter sound like winner and it sounds like wined is iguna puch your back and very very cold and I taste the snow it taste like somthing cold and snow dogs can walk in snow and Huskeys can too and texture and texture again and texture the snow it taste like cold very cold and I texture the cold wall and my hands freezed and sometimes I like cold bye.



Winter Setting by Rajneel (Grade 3)

I see lots of snowflakes falling down for the sky. I see snow on the ground. I see people having a snowball fight. I see people going down hill with their sled. I hear icicles breaking. I hear people skating on the ice. I hear people covering people with snow. I hear an avalanche up in the mountain. I smell smoke at the top of the chimny. I smell cool burryses in the air. I smell the cold snow. I smell the coldness. I taste the clean snow. I tasted the snow on the tree. I tasted the soft snow. I t asted the snow that makes snowman. I tasted the snow that was really cold. I tasted the really white snow. I touched the cold snow. I touched the cold sidewalk. I touched cold fence. I touched the snow that was fallen from the sky. I feel cold in the snow. I feel cold when I go in the snow. I feel cold when I feel the smooth snwo. I feel cold on the top of the mountain.



Winter Setting by Ilyas (Grade 3)

I see snow. I see people skating. I see people walking. I see people talking to their friends. I see people throwing snow balls at their friends. I see people making snow angles.

The sound. I hear is people stepping in the snow. I hear people talking with their friends. I hear people talking with their frineds. I hear pelple calling my name Ilyas. I hear people calling my friends name Obaid, Nav, Raj my friend.

Taste. I taste snow, my mom taste snow. My aunt bradys taste snow. I feel the snow flying down.



Winter Scene by M. Grade 1

When I was walking home, I saw snow flakes falling down and then I knew winter was here. I see snow. I see a mountain with snow on top. I see chimney smoke. I see people skating on ice. I hear a crash from my sled. When I go down on my sled it makes a crushing sound. I feel cold when I put my hand in the snow. I feel happy when I play in the snow. I feel hot when I drink hot chocloate. I feel mad when my brother threw snow at me.



Winter Scene by A. Grade 1

I know when it is winter when some shite stuff falls from the sky. I see an owl in the winter, it hooted In the winter I see a train . The train makes a sound like this chugu chugu chugu choo choo. when I went outside, I saw a rabbit, I heard silence. This is what is in winter.



Winter Scene by Br. Grade 1

When I put my feet in the snow, I feel winter. When I see a car sliding in the snow, I worry because it can crash into another car.

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Winter Scene by R. grade 1

One day, a cloud was coming, I felt winter was here. When you throw a football on a mountain and it makes a er sound, you make the sound bang. When you drink hot chocolate, you go blurp. When a man chops trees down with an ax,it makes a chomp sound. In the winter, when yu are driving a car and the sounds are full of ice. The car crashes. When you clap sometimes it warms you up. When winter it makes icicles and they drip on the ground. They make the dripping sound. When you play in the snow, you can flip in the snow. When you fall on the ground, you make the flop sound. When yu eat a cake, you make the crunch sound. When you stomp on the sidewalk , you make the boom sound. When you slip in the ice, you make the sound splat.This is what I think winter is all about.



Winter Scene by Br. grade 2

When the trees have no leaves, I know winter is here. When you step on thin ice, it makes a cracking sound. When winter is really over, the icicles start to make a drip drop sound. I do not hear the bees buzzing no more. When it is cold outside and you are not really warm enough, you make a br -br-br sound. I feel good about winter.



Winter Scene by H. grade 2

One day I jump on the side walk, I heard a crunch crunch sound. I knew winter was here. When someone jumps on the side walk, it makes a boom boom sound. When you walk on the ice, it makes a click, clack, clack, sound. When someone drinks hot chocolate, they might burp. When someone falls, it makes a clunk sound. When people skate, they make a sss sound. When the ice is melting, it makes a drip drop sound. When someone takes a shower, it makes a swish swish. When someone does their jacket, it mmakes zip,zip sound. When someone jumps on the ice, it'll make a kerplunk sound. This is what I like about winter.



Winter Scene by Am grade 2

One time I put my leg in the snow and I felt a crack sound and I knew winter has arrived. When I was walking in the snow I heard a click clack sound. When I get out of my house I saw ice melting and I h heard a drip drop sound. After I was shovelling I went inside for hot chocolate. I drank it and I heard a gleg glug sound. When I was skating I didn't know the ice was thin and after one minute I fell into the cold water and it made a kersplash sound. Some people go int the woods they cut wood and it makes a chomp chomp sound. After you drink hot chocolate, you burp and say "excuse me". Sometimes when people drive a car you slip and crash into another car. One day I was sleeping and I saw an owl hooting at me. After I was shovelling, I went inside for a delicious meal, I heard a crunch crunch sound. When I was opening my door I heard a screech sound. When I was being bad my mom sometimes snap her fingers and I heard a shop snap sound. When I needed to go to the bathroom, someone was banging on the door and I heard a banging sound. When I zipper up my zipper, I can hear a zip sound. When I stomp on the side walk, I hear a thump, thum sound. When I left water in the pool, it froze. I jumped in. I hurt myself in shorts and the ice broke. I fell into the water and it made a loud spash and also I shivered. (Conclusion) This is what winter is all about.




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