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Descriptions of Characters by Sherwood School Students
Mrs. Renneberg's Class




Sherwood School Collaborative Writing.

Welcome to great writing ideas from Sherwood School students.
Here, students have written descriptions of different characters.
Feel free to use their ideas to help you with your writing.



Character Sketches

The Puppy
By AL

It has bright brown eyes.
The puppy has curly blond hair.
There is a white heart on it’s stomach.
On the back of it’s tail it has a gray stripe.
Around the neck it has a navy blue collar.
She has a pink, red nose.
Her name is Brightly.


Bear Noel
By BA

Bear Noel loved to eat fish, berrys, bananas, and water.
The Bear has 8 friend. Bear Noel is a Christmas Bear he loved Christmas. in the north pole. Bear noel would sit and drink his hot chocolate with his friend.
It is Chrsitmas Eve in the north pole. Snow white against a darkening. Sky. It shimmers and sparkles on the trees. Snows blankets everything.


Rosle the Racoon
By AN

Rosle’s has a mask around the eyes.
Role’s has a white and; brown tail.
Rosle’s has brown eyes.
Rosle’s has a white face.
Rose’s has black hands.
Rose’s has white and black years.


Santa
By BA

Santa has a big stomach and a merry jolly laugh
inside of him.
When Santa trims his beard has a small and cute fuzzy beard.
Plus as you put your finger through his beard
you can feel magic going through your fingers!
Santa is an old saint that represents Christmas.
Santa worked really hard in his life.
One of the things he did is go around during Christmas time and
he would put gifts on peoples porches.
And then when the children would wake up they
would run downstairs and open the door and they
would see the presents lying there and their faces would brighten
up!



My Mom
By AM

My mom is nise.
My mom love me.
My mom give me a home to live in.
My mom buys me clothes.
My mom give me maney.
My mom gave me life.
My mom gives me food.



Santa
By RY

He has a big belly with a black belt and a gold buckle in the middle his belt keeps his belly from not hanging out. When he laughs he laughs ho ho ho his cheeks turn red and he shakes like a bowl full of jelly. Kids can sit on his lap and tell them there list
he has a red sack full of presents with a bright red sled with 9 reindeers one thats noise helps Santa see during journey.


Sean Paul
By ED

Sean Paul likes to wear his hair in little braids!
Sean Paul likes to sing hiphop music!
People can`t understand what he is saying when he sings!
Sean Paul`s girl friend`s name is Beyonce Noles!
Sean Paul always looks mean in all of his pictures!
Sean Paul is friends with other famous singers!


Vance
By CH

Vance is very tall.
Vance super grumpy in the morning.
Vance is the biggest in the house.
Vance is sometimes funny.
Vance is sometimes road like burping and not say exsqume.
Vance has a pa,2. and a playstaytion,1 playstaytion,2 game cube and a TV.
Most of all Vance has a dart.



Tip
By SA

Tip is a playful dog.
Tip can sometimes be annoying.
Tip is brown and white dog.
Tip likes to play ball.
Tip is very funny.



Bill
By KE

Bill is a bully .

He likes to bully kids.
Bill skips shcool and hates his teacher.
he never respects his parents our his elders.
He olso shop lift toys and gum.
one day bill got caught by the police.
Bill was in jail for six month.



BLOSSAM
By ME
This CHARACTER in this story was Blossam. She had red hair with a pony in it. Her closes are pink and black. Her eyes are pink and white. She has white and black shoes. One more thing she has 2 best friends.


Garfeld
By MA

I’m talking about Garfeld.
He is funny cat.
Garfeld is an orange cat.
He also has stripes like a tiger.
He is afraud of every thing.
Him and Odie ran away from home.
He got chased



Archie
By Josh

The book I’m writing about is my Archie book. The character’s is name Archie. Archie like two girls that like him. Archie has a friend name Jughead and a few others. Archie has red haire and freckles
Jughead and Archie go on a lot of adventures. Archie has a red convertable. He really likes his car. Archie is smart. He reads a lot of books and he is funny


Santa
By KE

Santa lives at the North Pole.
He as a white mustache.
The colour of his clothes are red and white.
He rides on reindeer.
He carrys a big bag on his back.
He is big and fat and he says “Ho ho ho! Merry Christmas!”



Basketball and Me
By JO

I am best at basketball because I started playing when I was in grade four with my older brother and his friends. I like playing basketball because it is fun and because it is exciting when you win that way. I like basketball.





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