Descriptions of Characters
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Descriptions of Characters by Sherwood School Students
Mrs. Renneberg's Class
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Welcome to great writing ideas from Sherwood School students.
Here, students have written descriptions of different characters.
Feel free to use their ideas to help you with your
writing.
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Character Sketches |
The Puppy
By AL
It has bright brown eyes.
The puppy has curly blond hair.
There is a white heart on it’s stomach.
On the back of it’s tail it has a gray stripe.
Around the neck it has a navy blue collar.
She has a pink, red nose.
Her name is Brightly.
Bear Noel
By BA
Bear Noel loved to eat fish, berrys, bananas, and water.
The Bear has 8 friend. Bear Noel is a Christmas Bear he loved
Christmas. in the north pole. Bear noel would sit and drink his hot chocolate
with his friend.
It is Chrsitmas Eve in the north pole. Snow white against a darkening.
Sky. It shimmers and sparkles on the trees. Snows blankets
everything.
Rosle the Racoon
By AN
Rosle’s has a mask around the eyes.
Role’s has a white and; brown tail.
Rosle’s has brown eyes.
Rosle’s has a white face.
Rose’s has black hands.
Rose’s has white and black years.
Santa
By BA
Santa has a big stomach and a merry jolly laugh
inside of him.
When Santa trims his beard has a small and cute fuzzy beard.
Plus as you put your finger through his beard
you can feel magic going through your fingers!
Santa is an old saint that represents Christmas.
Santa worked really hard in his life.
One of the things he did is go around during Christmas time and
he would put gifts on peoples porches.
And then when the children would wake up they
would run downstairs and open the door and they
would see the presents lying there and their faces would brighten
up!
My Mom
By AM
My mom is nise.
My mom love me.
My mom give me a home to live in.
My mom buys me clothes.
My mom give me maney.
My mom gave me life.
My mom gives me food.
Santa
By RY
He has a big belly with a black belt and a gold buckle in the middle
his belt keeps his belly from not hanging out. When he laughs he laughs
ho ho ho his cheeks turn red and he shakes like a bowl full of jelly.
Kids can sit on his lap and tell them there list
he has a red sack full of presents with a bright red sled with 9
reindeers one thats noise helps Santa see during journey.
Sean Paul
By ED
Sean Paul likes to wear his hair in little braids!
Sean Paul likes to sing hiphop music!
People can`t understand what he is saying when he sings!
Sean Paul`s girl friend`s name is Beyonce Noles!
Sean Paul always looks mean in all of his pictures!
Sean Paul is friends with other famous singers!
Vance
By CH
Vance is very tall.
Vance super grumpy in the morning.
Vance is the biggest in the house.
Vance is sometimes funny.
Vance is sometimes road like burping and not say exsqume.
Vance has a pa,2. and a playstaytion,1 playstaytion,2 game cube and
a TV.
Most of all Vance has a dart.
Tip
By SA
Tip is a playful dog.
Tip can sometimes be annoying.
Tip is brown and white dog.
Tip likes to play ball.
Tip is very funny.
Bill
By KE
Bill is a bully .
He likes to bully kids.
Bill skips shcool and hates his teacher.
he never respects his parents our his elders.
He olso shop lift toys and gum.
one day bill got caught by the police.
Bill was in jail for six month.
BLOSSAM
By ME
This CHARACTER in this story was Blossam. She had red hair with a pony
in it. Her closes are pink and black. Her eyes are pink and white. She
has white and black shoes. One more thing she has 2 best friends.
Garfeld
By MA
I’m talking about Garfeld.
He is funny cat.
Garfeld is an orange cat.
He also has stripes like a tiger.
He is afraud of every thing.
Him and Odie ran away from home.
He got chased
Archie
By Josh
The book I’m writing about is my Archie book. The character’s is name
Archie. Archie like two girls that like him. Archie has a friend name
Jughead and a few others. Archie has red haire and freckles
Jughead and Archie go on a lot of adventures. Archie has a red
convertable. He really likes his car. Archie is smart. He reads a lot of books
and he is funny
Santa
By KE
Santa lives at the North Pole.
He as a white mustache.
The colour of his clothes are red and white.
He rides on reindeer.
He carrys a big bag on his back.
He is big and fat and he says “Ho ho ho! Merry Christmas!”
Basketball and Me
By JO
I am best at basketball because I started playing when I was in grade
four with my older brother and his friends. I like playing basketball
because it is fun and because it is exciting when you win that way. I
like basketball.
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