Thoughts from Laura Renneberg's Students |
| 1) Please send me your students' feedbacks about the project. e.g. things they really like about the project; things they would change or improve etc. Liked - helped me pick stronger words in my writing - sending messages to other people was fun - liked reading other people’s writing - got ideas form other people’s writing that could help me with my writing - learn more ideas for writing - learned more description words - liked to read the letters giving suggestions for my writing - liked making good comments about other’s writing - found excellent, amazing ideas from others - liked how we could change writing at the end because we knew what to change from what the messages said - looking at how others changed their own writing - liked how you get lots of feedback on the story you wrote - liked looking at how others described things in their writing - liked how others gave me more information on my writing - liked how the people taught me how to make my story better - liked when others suggested words we didn’t know or more interesting words when they were giving us information to improve our writing - we could find out what new words mean - liked working on the computers - Would Change: - write more - use a thesaurus online to help pick more excellent words - it took a long time to type in the stories |
[Evaluation of Tools4Writing Project]