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| Date: September 24, 2003 04:41 PM Author: Mr. Lummis Subject: Greetings! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 07, 2003 05:32 PM Author: Mrs. Suen (SHERWOOD) Subject: Sherwood Chat Space Hi Sherwood Students, Please chat with each other regarding your assignments. If you wish to let your fellow students know how you like their writing, click on the reply button and let them know. You can also tell them how you like this project so far. Thank you, Mrs. Suen (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1633) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 10, 2003 12:42 PM Author: kylie ,sam M. (SHERWOOD) Subject: message to mrs.suen Have a Merry Christmas! we love writing stories. Hope you get lots of presents. bye, samantha M. & kylie (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1685) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 10, 2003 12:42 PM Author: Tracy and Tyra (SHERWOOD) Subject: message to Mrs. Suen Merry Christmas Mrs. Suen you are the best teacher any body could ask for. We love computer club because its fun. Me and Tracy are thinking that writing story is better then any thing else that we know. From:Tracy and Tyra! (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1686) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 18, 2003 10:14 AM Author: ME SHERWOOD Subject: MRS .S LETTER Hi'I think you our writing is very good. but you can do more better then that to convince mrs.s to lit you be in computers club. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1910) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 10, 2003 12:42 PM Author: Shawn (SHERWOOD) Subject: Message to Mrs.suen Hi Mrs.Suen I do like computer club and I like story. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1687) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 10, 2003 12:42 PM Author: Helen and Dalen (SHERWOOD) Subject: Message to Mrs.Suen Dear, Mrs.Suen i like to write storys on the computer. merry chismas mrs .suen (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1688) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 10, 2003 12:42 PM Author: paigekatelynn (SHERWOOD) Subject: message to mrs .suen HI Mrs . Suen I like the coputer club and I AM 7 YEARS OLD BY PAIGE AND KATTELYNN (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1691) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 10, 2003 12:42 PM Author: Alex Ilyas (SHERWOOD) Subject: Message to Mrs.suen Hi Mrs.suen, I am Ilyas and my Little best friend Alex great to be in computer club (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1692) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 10, 2003 12:42 PM Author: Devan (SHERWOOD) Subject: message to mrs.suen Hi Mrs.suen, I like computer club.thank you. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1695) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 20, 2004 11:42 AM Author: Christina and Madison GHL Subject: Our Writing at George H. Luck School http://209.115.204.118/telecollaborat/tools.htm http://209.115.204.118/telecollaborat/functional.htm http://209.115.204.118/telecollaborat/narrative.htm Please look at our writing on our class webpages. We love your writing because it has lots of detail and description. Christina (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2170) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: September 27, 2003 10:08 AM Author: Catherine (Sherwood) Subject: Greetings from Mrs. Catherine Suen Welcome to tools4writing! Please remember to to post a message with your first name and School name after the word "author". When you wish to respond to some of the writing posted on the message board, please remember that your could also respond to the writing on the web site "tools4writing". The "website" is intended to be used by you as tools for writing. Happy writing! From, Mrs. Suen Sherwood School (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1284) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: October 03, 2003 01:29 PM Author: Raelyn (Sherwood) Subject: Web site Mrs. Suen, Will we be able to make our web site on this project? (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1286) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: November 26, 2003 04:45 PM Author: Tyra (Sherwood) Subject: Ocean Setting In a ocean I can see and smell and taste and feel and touch and hear. In the ocean I can see is a whale and fish and seaweed and I can see people swimming as I can see dolphins. I see big and small fish and I can see boat sailing . I can see surfers and see my friends and I see my family. In the ocean I can smell water. I can smell fish. Ican smell sand. I can smell flowers. I can smell birds. I can smell the sish sun. I can smell the seaweed. I can smell people. I can taste in the ocean fish. I can taste salt water. Ican taste sand. I can taste seaweed. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1562) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 15, 2003 01:29 PM Author: Mrs. R (Sherwood) Subject: reply to ocean I like the way that you used all your senses to tell about the ocean. It might be more interesting to read your writing if you started the sentences in different ways. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1743) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 15, 2003 02:50 PM Author: AM SHERWOOD I love how you did all of those describing all of those sentence.I hope you can do more writing.please???????(6) (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1791) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 13, 2004 01:47 PM Author: Daniel(Talmud Torah] Subject: Ocean I liked the setting of your story. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2161) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 23, 2004 02:05 PM Author: samantha sala (sherwood) Subject: replying to tyra To tyra, i like your story and i am going to chage a little bite. In the ocean i can hear the wind blow. In the ocean i can hear the water swish.In the ocean i can hear the birds cherp. I can taste the sandwiches. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2332) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 28, 2004 01:24 PM Author: Keren(Talmud Torah) Subject: Great! I love what you wrote, your a great writter! (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2357) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 28, 2004 01:24 PM Author: Keren(Talmud Torah) Subject: Great! I love what you wrote, your a great writter! (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2358) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 28, 2004 01:27 PM Author: Jake(Talmud Torah) Subject: Amazing, So Amazing I love it! (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2359) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: November 26, 2003 05:54 PM Author: Tyra (Sherwood) Subject: Desert Setting What I see in the desert is lots of rattle snakes and some snakes. I also see is some red ants and some spiders and some scorpions and also a spider web and when I see a spide web I just walk away from it. what I hear is rattle snakes and also scorpions and ants marching to get my food and I can also hear spiders and birds chirping all around me also nests with body birds chirping for food to eat and sankes hissing at me and also scorpions. I can smell hot air go into my nose and I can smell the desert and the trees and also sand hot sand with the odour coming out. I can also smell grass that is very hot and I can smell the hot air and at night I can smell coldness at night. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1566) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: November 26, 2003 05:54 PM Author: Paige (Sherwood) Subject: Ocean Setting In a ocean I can see and smell and taste and feel and touch and hear. In the ocean I can see is a whale and fish and seaweed and I can see people swimming as I can see dolphins. I see big and small fish and I can see boat sailing . I can see surfers and see my friends and I see my family. In the ocean I can smell water. I can smell fish. Ican smell sand. I can smell flowers. I can smell birds. I can smell the sish sun. I can smell the seaweed. I can smell people. I can taste in the ocean fish. I can taste salt water. Ican taste sand. I can taste seaweed. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1567) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 10:19 AM Author: Sam M SHERWOOD Subject: Winter Setting Winter Wonderland by Sam M As I walk down the snowy side walk, I see people hanging decoration up outside, people shovelling their walks. I see people tobboganing down the hill, people taking home their Christmas tree. I see people giving change to the Santa, people helping others with presents. I see people carrying home the presents and I see people in a good spirit.I hear people laughing as they tobbogan, kids singing Christmas carols for people. I hear sleigh bells jingling, horses click clacking through the snow. I hear my boots crunching through the snow, peoples' boots crunching through the snow. I hear kids running through the snow and peoples' presents banging in the boxes. I taste snowflakes on my tongue, grandma's freshly baked cookies. I taste candy canes people are giving me, chocolates people are giving me for me and my family. I taste peoples' freshly baked cookies they're handing out, hot chocolate I bought from the store, and I taste some sweet popcicles. I smell smell sweet candie canes, fresh hot coco. I smell fresh baked cookies, fresh new chocolates. I smell cold air, eggnog that people are drinking. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1594) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 21, 2004 01:50 PM Author: Tracy (sherwood) Subject: reply to Sam M Hi Sam M, I love your story and now I am going to change this into a different story. There was a girl named Leanne and she was playing with the snow. She was also getting wet by the snow. Leanne was cold when she was playing so she went home to get her mittens and her snowsuit! So when she went back to the snowy place all the snow was gone. Leanne also said why is the wind blowing so hard, well I think that I should be walking home so that's what Leanne said and then she would never go out when the wind is blowing harder then an elephant! (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2176) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 10:33 AM Author: Tasha SHERWOOD Subject: Ocean Setting Ocean Setting by Tasha Grade 3 In the ocean I see palfins and I see fish and I see whales and I see sharks. I see star fish. I see seeweed. I see shells. I see sea horses. I hear the sounds of the ocean. I hear fish jumping out the water. I hear people throwing rocks into the water. I hear birds. I could hear pallfins. I could hear whales. I cound hear sharks. I could hear people talkng out loud. I taste the salt in the water. I could taste fish. I could taste crab. I could taste lobster. I could taste Jake fish. I could taste crab fish. I could taste salt water. I could see weeds. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1595) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 15, 2003 02:41 PM Author: AL SHERWOOD You have did alot of writing with your SETTING .I think that you can do longer andf better? I hope you do more things on your writing please? (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1785) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 09, 2004 03:13 PM Author: TYRA SHERWOOD Subject: reply to sam.m sam.m you are the best kide in the school and thats why I like you are the best and thats why I like you. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2066) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 09, 2004 03:13 PM Author: TYRA SHERWOOD Subject: reply to sam.m sam.m you are the best kide in the school and thats why I like you are the best and thats why I like you. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2067) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 21, 2004 01:44 PM Author: tyra and sam m from sherwood school. Subject: Reply to Samm and Ilike how you can be the best kid in school and well also I am going to change your story a bit ok. and well, lucia is the best too, just like you sam m. and that's why Ilike you as my best firend. Just like lucia your best friend. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2174) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 10:43 AM Author: Roman (SHERWOOD) Subject: Ocean Setting Ocean Setting by Roman Grade 4 I see sharks and crabs, fishes, lobsters, starfish, sea turtles and dolphins. I hear birs chirping, dolphins urping, crabs claws going clack. Shars growling, waves spashing, wind making oooo sounds. The sand going put,put. I taste the sand, salty ocean water, the wet sand, dead crab, sea wee, fish, starfish, little squid. Texture, a rock with no corners, slimy seaweed, turtles eggs, seagulls droping, turtles shells, whates blubber, crab shell, sand. I feel happy when seeing eels, catching a whale, real big fish, seeing a jellyfish, catching a pinefish, catching a shark, getting a ride on a dolphin and a ride from a whale. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1596) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 13, 2004 10:06 AM Author: Leanne[Dovercourt] Subject: Ocean Setting This story is incredible mr.Roman! Your story feels like me and my family going on vacation by the ocean. I can almost imagine how it feels like to be by the ocean. Your story is just great you should send it to the publishing company. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2113) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 11:42 AM Author: Sonya (SHERWOOD) Subject: Ocean Setting Ocean Setting by Sonya (Grade 4) I was at the ocean with some friends and family. I just love the sound of the ocean waves and people laughing and I love one more sound the sound of hte cool breeze and I love the sound of fish jumping. And I love to see people getting along, playing happily and talking together and having fun. I love the taste of cold apple juice and ice cream and eat cold popcicles and pop. I love the smell of the ocean water and ice cream and cold pop and sand. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1597) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 15, 2003 01:48 PM Author: RY(Sherwood) Subject: reply to ocean I think you story was awsome it was talking about neat stuff that you would never know about if you didn't listen or consontrate.I think you can improve.I think you can improve your story by adding differrent endings like you put I I I almost all the time if you would not have your story would be better than it was already. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1752) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 11:49 AM Author: Ashley (SHERWOOD) Subject: Winter Setting Winter Setting by Ashley (Grade 3) I see snow outside. I see people skating outside. I see people snowboarding outside. I see people playing outside. I see birds flying outside. I see people making igloos outside. I see people walking outside. I see people walking thier dogs outside. I hear birds chirping outside. I hear dogs barking outside. I hear cats meowing. I hear kids playing . I hear kids singing. I hear people humming. I hear people talking. I hear people whistling. I taste snow. I taste icecream. I taste ice. I taste cool whip. I taate igloos. I taste fruitloops. I taste grass. I feel rocks I feel bars. I feel dogs. I feel snow. I feel ice. I feel trees. I feel shoes. I feel cats. I feel coats. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1598) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 15, 2003 01:58 PM Author: RY SHERWOOD Subject: reply to winter I think your story was good because it had all the stuff you can do in the winter and it had how you did it too.I think you can improve your story by putting differrent starting instead of I I I all the time. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1762) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 12:02 PM Author: Alex (SHERWOOD) Subject: Summer Setting Summer Setting by Alex (Grade 3) I see people riding. I see people playing. I see people swimming. I see people walking. I see people drawing outside. I see people sleeping. I see people driving. I seepeople taking pictures. I see people learning. I feel funny. I feel sad. I feel fine. I feel sick. I feel helpful. I feel mad. I feel bad. I hear birds. I hear footsteps. I hear cars. I hear dogs. I hear wind. I hear pelople splashing. I hear whistling. I hear people cheering. I taste popsicles. I taste hotdogs. I taste snacks. I taste cookies. I tate hambuger. I taste sandwiches. I taste fried fish. I taste chicken. I taste icecream. The walls are rough. The rocks are rough, the water is soft. The light bulb is hot. The floor is fine. The backpack is fine. The book is fine. The car is fine. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1599) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 12:12 PM Author: Navaneet (SHERWOOD) Subject: Ocean Setting Ocean Setting by Navaneet (Grade 4) One day at the ocean, there was a boy swimming in the ocean and he heard a sound. It was a whale. The boy heard a jelly fish. The boy heard a sound. It was an octapus. The next thing he heard was a starfish. The next thing the boy heard was a fish. The next thing the boy heard was a cracker. The next thing the boy heard was a shark. The next thing the boy heard was a turtle. The next thing the boy heard was a sea monster. The next thing the boy saw was the ocer. The next thing the boy saw wa a shark. The next thing the boy saw was a sea creature. The next thing the boy saw a penguen. The next thing the boy sawwas a poplar bear. The next thing the boy saw was a duck. The next thing the boy saw a frog. The next thing the boy saw a... (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1600) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 23, 2004 02:05 PM Author: Raj Nav (Sherwood) Subject: Reply to Navaneet I'm going to change your story. One day there was a boy Ray in the ocean. He heard a killer whale in the ocean. Ray saw a shark eating a fish. He tasted gravel down where the seaweed was. Ray felt a whale in the ocean. Ray smelled a crab coming towards him. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2333) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 12:24 PM Author: Sams (SHERWOOD) Subject: Summer Setting Summer Setting by Sams The people are riding the skateboards, roller blades. People are running after the ice cream when the ice cream truck was coming. People want ice cream and the iec ream costs one or five dollars for one ice cream. I smell the fresh flowers from the flower shop even from the garden, even from the hot sune.The doys being washd from their owners. The ice cream melting from the sun. The people baking popcorn for a movie in their homes, ym, yum. It was the ice cream melting in my mouth, yum, yum. I taste fresh popcorn in my mouth. I taste the meat from my mouth. I taste teh pears from the pear tree, yum, yum. I taste apples from my tree. I hear the icecream truck's song from the icecream truck. I hear people screaming in front of the ice cream truck. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1601) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 12:33 PM Author: Obaid (SHERWOOD) Subject: Winter Setting Winter Setting by Obaid (Grade 3) I see old snow and snow is cold and winter is good and winter sound like winner and it sounds like wined is iguna puch your back and very very cold and I taste the snow it taste like somthing cold and snow dogs can walk in snow and Huskeys can too and texture and texture again and texture the snow it taste like cold very cold and I texture the cold wall and my hands freezed and sometimes I like cold bye. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1602) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 12:37 PM Author: Shanissa (SHERWOOD) Subject: Summer Setting Summer Setting by Shanissa (Grade 4) In the summer I can see birds, floweres, grass, squirrels, worms, ants, beetles, trees. In the summer I smell floweres, honey, ferfume, leaves, water, cookies, icecream, animals. In the summer I can hear birds, wind, catmeowing, dogs,squirrels, screaming talking wispering. Int he summer I can taste ice cream, hot dogs, cookies, pefume, hon, wind, fruit, berries. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1603) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 27, 2004 01:33 PM Author: chadd(Talmud Torah) Subject: summer i liked that you used some sences and i love ice cream! (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2354) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 12:55 PM Author: Samirah (SHERWOOD) Subject: Summer Setting Summer Setting by Samirah (Grade 4) At summer I can see kids playing, people walking, excersizing, sun shinning kids yelling. At summer I can smell B.B. Q humbergers, food, chips snack, wtermellons, apple, orange, fish, vegetables. At summer I can taste pizza, candy, mc donal's icecream, tarcy, beef, noodles, apple. At summer, I can texture hot walls, the water, cake, food air, my friends, tree, ice cream. At summer I can hear birds soning, kids yelling puppies, dogs, people, bell ring, kids play. At summer I can feel the sun, the rainbow, rain, the air, the wind, feet tapping people and funny, sad, hapy water, the sun shinning. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1604) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 01:04 PM Author: Rajneel (SHERWOOD) Subject: Winter Setting Winter Setting by Rajneel (Grade 3) I see lots of snowflakes falling down for the sky. I see snow on the ground. I see people having a snowball fight. I see people going down hill with their sled. I hear icicles breaking. I hear people skating on the ice. I hear people covering people with snow. I hear an avalanche up in the mountain. I smell smoke at the top of the chimny. I smell cool burryses in the air. I smell the cold snow. I smell the coldness. I taste the clean snow. I tasted the snow on the tree. I tasted the soft snow. I t asted the snow that makes snowman. I tasted the snow that was really cold. I tasted the really white snow. I touched the cold snow. I touched the cold sidewalk. I touched cold fence. I touched the snow that was fallen from the sky. I feel cold in the snow. I feel cold when I go in the snow. I feel cold when I feel the smooth snwo. I feel cold on the top of the mountain. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1605) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 01:08 PM Author: Chris (SHERWOOD) Subject: Desert Setting Desert Setting by Chris I see a tarantella. I hear the rattle snake come closer. I smelled a piece of poop. I taste a piece of sand. I touched the real sanke on me. I feel happy and sad. I see a camel. I saw a pie. I hear a car. T touch a car . I feel sad a lot. I see a cat. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1606) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 01:20 PM Author: Tracy (SHERWOOD) Subject: School Setting School Setting by Tracy One early morning a girl named Lily Tran came to school on Monday morning. She also had lots of friends in that school that were nice to her. When she went in her class she felt very scared and when she walked to her desk she felt something groose. So she went to her friend and when she was alsmot there she heard a sound and it was a fighting sound from her friend Dakota and Kimberly. They were fighting about a desk that was very nice. So then she said stop to them so they stopped. Then Mr. Wei said that they both can't sit there and somebody else could. Then Lily saw nobody going there so she tuck her things and went to the nicest desk in the class. When she sat down she saw somebody sitting in the desk she was in before she came to the nice desk then she thought the the desks in her classroom are all nice. And Mr. Wei said that she was being nice so she got grape and it tasted good. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1607) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 01:29 PM Author: Anthony (SHERWOOD) Subject: Spring Setting Spring Setting by Anthony You see butterflies flying there the air. You see floweres blooming. And bird sing a nice song. Grasshoper jumping up and down. You can see cars going by you. I can hear the wind. I can hear the birds sing. You can hear te wind pushing the grass. I can hear foot steps on the ground. I can smell stew from inside of my house. I can smell fresh berries on a tree. I can smell nice hair. I smell flowers. I smell air. I can smell garbaage. I smell myself. I smell choke. I smell the grass. I can taste the stew. I can taste the berries. I can taste the grass. I can taste the honey. I can taste the myself. I can taste my hair. I can taste the my shirt. I can taste the air. I can feel a bag. I can feel my hair. I can feel some choke. I can feel the ground. I can feel the air. I can feel myself. I can feel the grass. I can feel a bug. I feel good. I feel happy. I feel bravy. I feel sleepy. I feel like for some more school. I feel for some more yelling at. I feel like I am in heaven. I feel great. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1608) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 01:36 PM Author: Ilyas (SHERWOOD) Subject: Winter Setting Winter Setting by Ilyas (Grade 3) I see snow. I see people skating. I see people walking. I see people talking to their friends. I see people throwing snow balls at their friends. I see people making snow angles. The sound. I hear is people stepping in the snow. I hear people talking with their friends. I hear people talking with their frineds. I hear pelple calling my name Ilyas. I hear people calling my friends name Obaid, Nav, Raj my friend. Taste. I taste snow, my mom taste snow. My aunt bradys taste snow. I feel the snow flying down. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1609) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 01:45 PM Author: Steven (SHERWOOD) Subject: Castle Setting Castle Setting by Steven The floor creeks and the bars screech and the amour screecks. The ghosts-a-booing. I see the pictures, I see the walls, I see the dark, I see the desks. I smell the dust and the skeleton's blood who used to be slaves. I smell the walls. I smell the dungeon. I smell old things. I smell rust. I smell the bones. I smell the mold. I feel spoked. I feel scard. I feel weird. I feel funny. I feel afraid. I fellalone. I feel dead. I feel pale. I taste the air. The walls tate awful. Rhe floor tastes awful. The stones taste awful. The bones taste awful. The bars taste awful. The cement taste awful. The mold taste awful. I feel walk. I feel mold. I feel mush. I feel bars. I feel bones. I feel cement. I feel paper. I feel stone. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1610) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 15, 2003 02:01 PM Author: RY SHERWOOD Subject: reply to castle I think your story was good because it was using your sences and it was interesting. I think you can improve your story by not putting I I I in the begining. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1764) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 23, 2004 01:54 PM Author: Tracy! (sherwood) Subject: reply to steven! Hello steven, I liked your story and it was amazing. I also clicked in here because I like stories about castles! The main character was very beautiful and her name was Chelsea. Chelsea was very scared in the castle because it was like a maze and she couldn't find her way out. She thought she was trapped in the castle, but then she heard a voice come from the top of the tower. She walked close to the tower and when she was about to walk the stairs she saw a little chocolate cupcake. She ate it she said that it tasted like blood. She dropped it on the floor and saw a light. She kepted on walking and then she saw her way out! (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2302) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 01:55 PM Author: Lucia (SHERWOOD) Subject: Summer Setting Summer Setting by Lucia I see birds, kids, pools and squirrels. I can see kids riding their bikes. I see families going to the beach. I see kids buying ice cream. I see kids swimming in their little pools. I see kids playing. I hear birds singing , squirrels talking, kids talking. I hear kids splashing in their little pools. I hear kids yelling. I hear the ice cream truck. I taste cool water, popsicles, ice cream, cool lemonade. I taste juice. I smell flowers, food, air. I smell garbage. I smell fire. I smell wood being burnt. I feel ice cream melting. I feel popsicles melting on my fingers. I feel water on my body. I feel wind. I feel cold ice. I feel happy. I feel glad that winter is gone. I feel hot. I feel great. I feel grateful. I feel amazed. I feel cheerful. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1611) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 21, 2004 02:08 PM Author: tyra and lucia sherwood school. Subject: reply to lucia. lucia you are the best friend in the wold and that's why i like you as my best friend. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2188) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 21, 2004 02:14 PM Author: tyra and lucia sherwood school. Subject: reply to lucia. lucia you are the best friend in the wold and that's why i like you as my best friend. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2197) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 21, 2004 02:14 PM Author: tyra and lucia sherwood school. Subject: reply to lucia. lucia you are the best friend in the wold and that's why i like you as my best friend. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2198) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 21, 2004 02:14 PM Author: tyra and lucia sherwood school. Subject: reply to lucia. lucia you are the best friend in the wold and that's why i like you as my best friend. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2199) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 21, 2004 02:14 PM Author: tyra and lucia sherwood school. Subject: reply to lucia. lucia you are the best friend in the wold and that's why i like you as my best friend. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2201) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 08:51 PM Author: Ronnie (SHERWOOD) Subject: Jungle Setting Jungle Setting by Ronnie (Grade 3) Once upon a time I went to a jungle. I heard gun shots, animals, vehicles, wind, ocean, birds, plants. I saw people, birds, plants, vehicles, trees, house, oceans, bikes, spiders. I ate soup, macaronie, cereal, bird seeds, birds. I felt sand, water, birds, moneys, cats, dogs, plants, trees, people. I smelt the ocean, the trees, the dogs, the cats, plants, people. I felt happy, scared, shy, sad, elated, mad, angry. I went home and slept after that vacation. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1612) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 09:04 PM Author: Gabby (SHERWOOD) Subject: Jungle Setting Jungle Setting by Gabby In the jungle I can see an elephant thumping. In the jungle I can see an sister centerpiece walking around. In the jungle I can see a lion sleeping. In the jungle I can see a snake slithering. In the jungle I can see big trees. In the jungle I can see cubs playing. In the jungle I can see nice deer blue water. In the jungle I can see monkeys going oo'ah'ah. In the jungle I can see gorillas playing. In the jungle I can see Tarzan. In the jungle I can see Jorge of the jungle swinging on the trees. In the jungle I can see an lovely waterfall with blue water and all of the animals drinking it. In the jungle I can see an cat. In the jungle I can smell rotton leaves. In the jungle I can smell all of the animals In the jungle I can hear elephants thumping. In the jungle I can hear lions roaring. In the jungle I can hear baby lions hissing. In the jungle I can hear zebras crying. In the jungle I can hear all of the animals. In the jungle I can taste cookies. In the jungle I can taste berries. In the jungle I can taste apples. In the jungle I can taste all of the animals. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1613) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 13, 2004 10:06 AM Author: Bobby[Dovercourt] Your setting is magnifecent, and thats all I can say. Your story is great! (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2115) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 09:15 PM Author: Shawn (SHERWOOD) Subject: Jungle Setting Jungle Setting by Shawn (Grade 3) I saw a bear, tiger, lion, porkcupines, turkey, horse, grizzle bear and snakes. I hear the bear yawn and the tiger yelling. I hear the lion roar and I hear the porkcupine walk and I heard the turkey saying coo-do-do and I heard the horse leaping. I heard the grizzle bear running. I heard the snake crawling. The bear smelled bugs. The tiger smelled candy. The lion smelled mad. The porkcupine smelled apples. The turkey smelled cheese. The horse smelled grass. the grizzle bear smelled oranges and the snake smelled cookies. The bear tasted ice cream and the tigher tasted gum. the lion tasted kit kat and the porkcupine tasted hudabad. the turky tasted sour and the horse tasted skittles. the grizzle bear tasted chips and the snakes tasted cookies. The bear touched metal. The tiger touched grass. The lion touched cookies. the porkcupine touched desks. The turkey touched chalk. The grizzle bear touched water. The snake touched gears. The grizzle bear beels happy. The lion feels sad. The tiger fees mad. The porkcupine feels excited. The turky was sad. The hourse feels angry. The grizzly bear feels surprised. The snake was really mad. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1614) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 09:24 PM Author: Tyra (SHERWOOD) Subject: Character Character by Tyra (Grade 3) -She looks like a with a little red T shirt. -that you can see very good things around the world. -that she is good at flying and also seeing. -that she likes to se other things that she haven't seen before. and well rowan don't like to see red rode dogs that are very mean. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1615) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 08, 2003 06:47 PM Author: Samm (SHERWOOD Subject: Responding to Tyra's Character Responding to Tyra's Character By Samm Grade 4 Cloe and the Misssing Ring One day a 16 year old girl was at the mall with her friend named Clover when her powder kit started vibrating. Cloe said, "Clover, what is happening in your purse?" "Um, I got to go to the bathroom. I'll meet you at the food court in six hours. So you go have fun Okay?" "Sure, See ya!" They both ran off. When Cloe got to the bathroom she opened her kit, it was Leisa. "There is something wrong a the jewlery store. You better get there soon. "OKay." So she pushed 2 buttons and she was in her suit, a sparklely red tan-top and black leather pants. Then she pushed buttons and she got her gadgets there was laser lip stick, freeze fum, see through glasses, and a jet pack. She was off and she had 5 hours still. When she got there the police were already there. "What Happened?" "One girla and three boys from her gang stole the rubby ring but we got the girl." "May I see her?" "Yes, you may. She is in the car." Cloe ran out to the car opened the door and to her surprise there with tears in her eyes and cuffed and mugged sat Clover. Clover looked up. "Oh my gosh!" yelled Cloe. "You stole the ring?" Cloe took off the tape. "No, I didn't . I was there buying a pear necklace for my mom! Then suddenly the three boys came out of nowhere and knocked her unconscious. Uh! When she woke- up, she was tied to a chair with boys all around and the ring in the middle of the table. When they went she used her laser lipstick to get free. Then when they came back she kicked, she punched, she flipped and they were down. She got the ring and went to the jewlery store gave the ring. I hour until the skating show starts she ran and then was there in time it was nice. Clover won a gold medal! But that was not all she got the ring back and the boys were arested. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1665) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 09:32 PM Author: Jolene (SHERWOOD) Subject: Descriptions of a Character Descriptions of a Character by Lucia (Grade 4) Lizey looks beautiful. She has blond hair. She wears a pink dress. She likes to put makeup on. She likes red lipstick. Lizey has curly hair. Lizey has curly eye lashes. The color of her eyes are baby blue. Lizey has six friends. She is rich. She likes wearing jewellery. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1616) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 09:38 PM Author: Lucia (SHERWOOD) Subject: Descriptions of a Character Descriptions of a Character by Lucia (Grade 4) Lizey looks beautiful. She has blond hair. She wears a pink dress. She likes to put makeup on. She likes red lipstick. Lizey has curly hair. Lizey has curly eye lashes. The color of her eyes are baby blue. Lizey has six friends. She is rich. She likes wearing jewellery. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1617) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 07, 2003 07:05 PM Author: Jolene (SHERWOOD) Subject: Responding to Lucia's character By Jolene Grade 4 One day Lizey was sitting on her bed thinking about what she should do today. Then her mom came in. "What's on your agenda today Lizey?" her mom said. "I do not know" "Well, since you are not doing anything, how about we go to the mall?" "OK" But in the mall Lizey got lost in one of the stores. She looked and looked for her mom. She went in Zellers, Sears, Fido, everywhere but she couldn't find her mom. Three days later her mom came back to the mall and finds Lizey and takes her home. Three hours later, Lizey wakes up and finds herself in her rooom . She runs downstairs and hugs her mom and kisses her and she said, "I would never go off without telling you again!" (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1645) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 09:43 PM Author: Sams (SHERWOOD) Subject: Descriptions of a Character Descriptions of a Character by Sams (Grade 4) On the day that she was born, Junie B. Jones had hair, brown hair. She had green eyes and the colour of her dad's skin and the colour of her mom's lips. When she was 5 yearyears old she had funny clothes. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1618) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 08, 2003 07:05 PM Author: Lucia (SHERWOOD Subject: Responding to Sams's Character Responding to Sams's Character By Lucia Grade 4 One day Junie B Jones woke up. She was 17 years old. She got ready for school. First she put on make-up. Then she put on a yellow shirt and a orange skirt. Junie had a sister. She is ten years old. Sarah was her name. June had another sister. She was a baby. Her name is Linzey. Thy also had a brother Nikey. He is also 17 years old. When Junie ws going to put on her earrings, Nikey came in and stole one of her earrings. "Aaa!" June yelled. "Nikey," she yelled again. Nikey was hiding hehind the door. Junie always said he was a pain in the neck. After school when Junie came back home with her brother and sister, they found a box. Sarah opened the box lid... (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1666) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 09:50 PM Author: Ashley (SHERWOOD) Subject: Descriptions of a character Descriptions of a character by Ashley My character is a fighter. she has other nice friends. She has dark blond hair colour. She likes to fight boys or girls. She usually wears a full red or black suit or a dark dark blue pair of pants. She likes to sleep but she likes to jight more. My character is 24 years old. She has a brother named Joe-Joe. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1619) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 08, 2003 07:17 PM Author: Tyra (SHERWOOD Subject: Responding to Ashley's Character Responding to Ashley's Character By tyra My character is a fighter. She has othe nice friends. She has dark blond hair colour. She likes to fight boys or girls. She usually wears a full red or black suit of a dark dark blue pair of pants. She likes to sleep but she likes to fight more than sleeping because there are lots of robbers that can steal people of kids. That's who always steal people of kids. Just like the same robbers that can steal lots of stuff, almost like different ones. That's why she never goes to sleep but when she is done she goes right back to her house and goes to sleep and in the morning she looks outside and sees if there is any danger and if there is she will go and save the world from danger and she was looking around and there was a problem because the world was not good because the robbers went to other peoples house to steal their rings and also their necklaces so she went and fisched every body's house and she gave all the peoples rings back and also their necklaces back and went to the robbers and said, "Do you want to be caught by the police?" They said, "No." so she said, "Then stop stealing other peoples stuff cause that's just stealing like" After people do and that means they are more and she said , "All well my job is done." Just when they come back she will just go back to sleep. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1667) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 15, 2003 01:48 PM Author: SA (Sherwood) Subject: character I like your charcter but you didn't tell how the girl name. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1753) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 09:53 PM Author: Paige (SHERWOOD) Subject: Descriptions of a Character By Paige Rayan has brown hair and blue eyes. He has light skin. He wears one shirt with a skole head and another on top. He wears jeans pants. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1620) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 08, 2003 07:26 PM Author: Paigepa (SHERWOOD Subject: Resoponding to Paigepro's Characher Resoponding to Paigepro's Characher By Paigepa Once upon a time there was a boy and the boy's named Ryan . But his friends call him Ray. But his hair is brown and blue eyes and Ryan has light skin. He wears a shirt is blue and black pants with a red strip and Ryan socks are blue. When he went to school his friens made fun of him after lunch he went to the baby park and the babies made fun of Ryan and one is a bad baby called him a baby. It is from his mom. She told him that he goes to his gramas and called them Nana and his grandpa Papa. But then he went ot a different school . And never came back to that school again. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1668) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 09:57 PM Author: Raj (SHERWOOD) Subject: Descriptions of a Character By Raj The character's name is Captain Underpants. He looks like a super hero and he is. He is bold he wears a cape on his back. He wears no shoes he can fly. He fights bad guyys and criminals. he is a super hero and he looks cool. He drinks super juice. And he likes super juice it makes him strong. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1621) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 08, 2003 07:40 PM Author: Samirah (SHERWOOD Subject: Responding to Raj's Character Responding to Raj's Character By Samirah Captain Underpants Once there was a man his name is Captain Underpants. People call him Captain Underpants because he is bold, he is powerful and he is strong. he is stronger than a daddy elephant. He is faster than a brand new scotter. he can jump over the highest chair in the world. If his power doesn't work that good, he drinks super power juice then it makes him strong. He wears a cape on his back so he can fly. He doen't like to wear shoes. He just wears a cape and a underpants. One day he saw a house baring and when he got there the problem was he didn't drink the super power juice. So he can't go there to save the people. He was so far from the shop he bays the juice. So he went it got one hour to get there. Then he drinks the juice and fly away to go and save the people when he got there it was two hours late.The house was bard but good thing the people was safe. He picked the all peole in two hands. The people was safe so he said tralaaa. He made that up and it means Good Bye! Then he wants to eat because he was hungry. He had a dog name La La tra. La La Tra was a powerful dog just like Captain Underpants because Captain Underpants gave him som of the juice too. They both fly high in the sky. La La Tra saw a baby crying. La La tra went to the baby and made some faces at the baby and the baby began to laugh. Captain Underpants was so proud of his dog La La Tra. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1669) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 21, 2004 02:07 PM Author: Roman (Sherwood) Subject: Reply to Raj Dear Raj, I hope you like my changes. The adventures of captain underpants. One day, George and Harold were bored. So they snaped their fingers by Mr.Krupp. Poof, captain undrepants.(part one)talking toilets. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2185) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 21, 2004 02:08 PM Author: Roman (Sherwood) Subject: Reply to Raj Dear Raj, I hope you like my changes. The adventures of captain underpants. One day, George and Harold were bored. So they snaped their fingers by Mr.Krupp. Poof, captain undrepants.(part one)talking toilets. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2186) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 21, 2004 02:08 PM Author: Roman (Sherwood) Subject: Reply to Raj Dear Raj, I hope you like my changes. The adventures of captain underpants. One day, George and Harold were bored. So they snaped their fingers by Mr.Krupp. Poof, captain undrepants.(part one)talking toilets. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2187) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 21, 2004 02:08 PM Author: Roman (Sherwood) Subject: Reply to Raj Dear Raj, I hope you like my changes. The adventures of captain underpants. One day, George and Harold were bored. So they snaped their fingers by Mr.Krupp. Poof, captain undrepants.(part one)talking toilets. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2189) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 21, 2004 02:08 PM Author: Roman (Sherwood) Subject: Reply to Raj Dear Raj, I hope you like my changes. The adventures of captain underpants. One day, George and Harold were bored. So they snaped their fingers by Mr.Krupp. Poof, captain undrepants.(part one)talking toilets. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2190) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: January 21, 2004 02:08 PM Author: Roman (Sherwood) Subject: Reply to Raj Dear Raj, I hope you like my changes. The adventures of captain underpants. One day, George and Harold were bored. So they snaped their fingers by Mr.Krupp. Poof, captain undrepants.(part one)talking toilets. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=2191) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 10:00 PM Author: Anthony (SHERWOOD) Subject: Descriptions of a Character By Anthony Max was special because he helps people. He is good at playing basket ball. He likes to do school work. Unusal- doe not be bad. He likes to help people. He is good at reading. He likes to read. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1622) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 08, 2003 07:52 PM Author: Obid (SHERWOOD Subject: Responding to Anthony's Character Responding to Anthony's Character By Obaid Arnold and Max were in Japan they were doing Karate there was strong Japanese guys there strong too and Arnold was going to fight first with Japanese the Japanese named was Luk Kun and there was 20 Japanese guys and the first one was Luk Kun and another one was scorpion and Sacvo and mortola and rain and Kano and Kaboll and sab zero and Zelda and James and James Bond and Doctor-Lala and Jojo and Sonya and Boss. Sonya has a sword it dot that sonya it Sonya from game and Sonya from game she is girl and Sonya has a gun too Sonya shot Arnold but noting happened Arnold killed the bad guys and Arnold's birthday came and Arnold could every off his friend and Crzan came and everybody came to Arnold birthday next morning it was Max's birthday they all eat the Kac bye. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1670) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 10:02 PM Author: Tracy (SHERWOOD) Subject: Descriptions of a Character By Tracy Katelynn is a little girl that is my friend! She looks like my cousin. She is nice, beautiful and kind. She is good at being nice. She likes to play with friends. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1623) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 09, 2003 07:55 AM Author: Tasha (SHERWOOD Subject: Responding to Tracy's Story Responding to Tracy's Story By Tasha Grade 3 I have a friend named Katelynn she has orange hair. She is nice all the time.She lives out in Newfoundland me and her used to go to school with each other. We were best friends. I used to go over to her house for sleepover. And we stayed up all night eating candy. And playing tell seven in the morning. We used to go swimming with each other. We used to go and give every Christmas presents to each other. It was very fun. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1671) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 06, 2003 10:06 PM Author: Samm (SHERWOOD) Subject: Descriptions of a Character By Samm Snowflake There once was a girl named Snowflake. She had blue eyes long blond hair with brown and other color streaks, lips that shined like the morning sun and fingernails that glittered like snow with the sun shining in winter. She was an A plus student and loves doing hair. She is good at drawing and helping people. She likes to walk in the park and swing on her porch swing. But the unusual things about her is she likes to play in the mud and gets all dirty. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1624) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 09, 2003 08:18 PM Author: Shanissa (SHERWOOD Subject: Responding to Samm's Character Responding to Samm's Character By Shanissa There was a little girl named Snowflake and she had a friend named Tyra but Tyra didn't want to be her friend any more. So Snowflake just walkd away. Tyra was very sorry but she had another friend to play with. Snowflake waw disappointed so she went to the park. Tyra went to the park to say sorry and Snowflake said it's OK! (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1672) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 07, 2003 08:45 AM Author: Steven (SHERWOOD) Subject: Descriptions of a Character By Steven (Grade 4) Max is a star basketball player, he wins every game. Max sometimes is funny. Sometimes he brakes, although not that much. Sometimes he tells hystericle jokes. Max is also smart, and since he is so tall he can do slam dunks. He has a basketball hoop outside and in his room. He is so lucky! (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1625) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 07, 2003 08:54 AM Author: Rajneel (SHERWOOD) Subject: Responding to Steven's Character Raj Responding to Steven's Character Max is a blader and he has teamates and thy are called the bladebrakers and they are the world champion bladers and Max has a bit beast and his name is Driseyiland. He and his team were in the third round and Max had a problem when his grand machain broke and Max saw a bit beast and he put the bit beast on his bayblade and he asked his bit beast to win the hole badle and his team were really happy that they won. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1626) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 10, 2003 07:54 AM Author: Raj (SHERWOOD) Subject: Responding to Steven's Character Responding to Steven's Character By Raj Max is a blader and he has teamates and they are called the bladebrakers and they are the world champion bladers and Max has a bit beast and his name is driseyiland he and his team were in the third round and Max had a problem when his grandmachain broke and Max saw a bit beast and he put the bit beast on his bay blade and he asked his bit beast to win the hole blade and his team were really happy that they won. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1678) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 07, 2003 09:20 AM Author: Shawn (SHERWOOD) Subject: Descriptions of a Character By Shawn Ted is the main character. Ted has short and spiked hair . He is cool and he has brown eyes, a brown nose and a red and pink lips. Ted has a bike and with the bike he could do oils, and a catwalk. Ted has no brothers or sisters so when he can't do anything he goes and plays with his friends. Ted has a PS2 and he plays his favourite game vice site. So that's why you should always have a main character. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1627) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 08, 2003 05:31 PM Author: Alex (SHERWOOD Subject: Responding to Shawn's character Responding to Shawn's character By Alex (grade 3) Ted was the best at riding. His friends decided to race him to his house. his friends could not catch up so they went home. Sometimes Ted was lonley. But that was okay because he had a PS2 and played his favorite game. He could not stop playing games. But one time he didn't because ha was sleeping over. Whe he won on his game, he pated his spiked hair. He loved doing the cat walk on his bike Once he bought a phone he liked it much as he likes his PS 2. But his problem was he had no food. He went to a store but all they had was for breakfast. All he had was fun stuff. He had money but it was 6 toonies. He did exercize. He had chicken but it was gone. He got a idea he went to one of his friends. He said, "Do you have some food?" "Yep," said his frined. "Yay!" (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1664) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 07, 2003 09:24 AM Author: Helen (SHERWOOD) Subject: Descriptions of a Character By Helen Michelle is a girl. She looks like a Chinese girl but she is not. She has a brother and a sister. She is smart at doing things like Math and all kins of stuff. She has a nice heart and plus she has lots of friends and she has a best friend too. She has a nice family who loves her. Her eyes are brown. Her hair is black and a little bit dyed. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1628) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: December 07, 2003 08:08 PM Author: Tracy (SHERWOOD) Subject: Responding to Helen's Character Responding to Helen's Character By Tracy Grade 3 Michelle Michelle is a generous person that has more than ten friends. Michell really looks like a Chiness person but she isn't Chinese. But she does speak Vietnamese and English. Michell has brown eyes and her hair is black and there's a colour in there that makes her look like she had dyed her hair. She has a great and really wonderful voice to everyboday she knows. MIchelle has a brother that's in grade four and a sister that is in grade two. She is the most smartest kid in the world that anybody would call her smart girl. But the problem was that she sometimes yells at people because she really is excited about something. She also has a very good heart plus she's the greatest that everybody wants her as a sister. (http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1650) |
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