Date: December 18, 2003 09:27 AM
Author: NI SHERWOOD
Subject: sant's house has all kids
I really like your story and i think your mom and dad will like it and they will say you did a good job ry.I really think you could do more than that you have now ry.
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Date: January 05, 2004 02:00 PM
Author: CH SHERWOOD
Santa's incredibal house has all kinds of bright ideas all around the heuds house. His house is a mansion with tons of rooms for the oh so very nice elves. Somewhere in Santa's house there's a special room where he keeps all the childrens toys. They're so neat. On the outside there's a gigantic tree and it has every flavor candy cane. There's lights too.All kinds of lights. There's even a star on top of the Christmas tree. It's always shining bright yellow and it has points. Best of all Santa's got a velvet red sleigh and attached to that sleigh there's eight miniature reindeer with one with the reddest and brightest nose of all. On the outside there's a skating rink and it's packed with elves every where. There's elves making snowdeer and there's snowmen with brooms, sticks, carrots, and raisins. Oh I heard there's an ice slide that goes into hot bubbling water so they can have a little fun through the whole entire year.
I think your writeing was asum
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Date: December 08, 2003 03:27 PM
Author: SA(SHERWOOD)
Subject: setting
Santa Setting
Santa lives in the North pole. It is pertly cold for him.
Santa has a walk sap and I'll bet it's pretty messy. In Santa's room there is a big bed and a big brown dresser and in his room the walls are green and red.
In santa's living room there are 4 couches with Christmas trees on them.
Santa's kitchen is full with cookies and greedy little elves.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:07 PM
Author: An L SHERWOOD
Subject: reply SANTA SETTING
IT IS A GOOD WORK FOR YOU.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:35 PM
Author: An L SHERWOOD
Subject: reply SANTA SETTING
IT IS A GOOD WORK FOR YOU.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:35 PM
Author: An L SHERWOOD
Subject: reply SANTA SETTING
IT IS A GOOD WORK FOR YOU.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:35 PM
Author: An L SHERWOOD
Subject: reply SANTA SETTING
IT IS A GOOD WORK FOR YOU.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:40 PM
Author: An L SHERWOOD
Subject: reply SANTA SETTING
IT IS A GOOD WORK FOR YOU.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:40 PM
Author: An L SHERWOOD
Subject: reply SANTA SETTING
IT IS A GOOD WORK FOR YOU.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:41 PM
Author: An L SHERWOOD
Subject: reply SANTA SETTING
IT IS A GOOD WORK FOR YOU.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:41 PM
Author: An L SHERWOOD
Subject: reply SANTA SETTING
IT IS A GOOD WORK FOR YOU.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:41 PM
Author: An L SHERWOOD
Subject: reply SANTA SETTING
IT IS A GOOD WORK FOR YOU.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:41 PM
Author: An L SHERWOOD
Subject: reply SANTA SETTING
IT IS A GOOD WORK FOR YOU.
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Date: December 08, 2003 03:27 PM
Author: SA(SHERWOOD)
Subject: setting
Santa Setting
Santa lives in the North pole. It is pertly cold for him.
Santa has a walk sap and I'll bet it's pretty messy. In Santa's room there is a big bed and a big brown dresser and in his room the walls are green and red.
In santa's living room there are 4 couches with Christmas trees on them.
Santa's kitchen is full with cookies and greedy little elves.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:55 PM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: Reply to north pole
I think your settting was good because it had lots of discription and it had good words. I think you can improve your story by putting more stuff on your story.
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Date: December 15, 2003 03:01 PM
Author: Ba SHERWOOD
Subject: Santa
I think you should stop outing s on most of the words.
But it looks okay
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Date: December 15, 2003 03:01 PM
Author: Ba SHERWOOD
Subject: Santa
I think you should stop outing s on most of the words.
But it looks okay
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Date: December 15, 2003 03:02 PM
Author: Ba SHERWOOD
Subject: Santa
I think you should stop outing s on most of the words.
But it looks okay!
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Date: December 15, 2003 03:06 PM
Author: NI SHERWOOD
Subject: reply were santa lives.
I think that is a good story to read to or mom or dad or to your self.I think you could do more writing.
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Date: January 05, 2004 01:51 PM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Santa Setting
Santa lives in the North pole. It is pertly cold for him.
Santa has a walk sap and I'll bet it's pretty messy. In Santa's room there is a big comphy purple bed and a big brown dresser with a smooth layer of text and in his room the walls are green and red with flowers.
In santa's living room there are 4 wonderful couches with Christmas trees on them.
Santa's kitchen is full with chocolate chip cruble cookies and greedy little elves.
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Date: January 06, 2004 10:10 AM
Author: Patricia(Dovercourt)
Subject: Reply
I think your setting was really good, but I think you should add that his workshop is always busy and all those other things that you see in those movies about santa. well not all the details just a little more. otherwise I think it is very good.
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Date: January 06, 2004 10:10 AM
Author: Patricia(Dovercourt)
Subject: Reply
I think your setting was really good, but I think you should add that his workshop is always busy and all those other things that you see in those movies about santa. well not all the details just a little more. otherwise I think it is very good.
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Date: January 05, 2004 03:03 PM
Author: NI sherwood
Santa Setting
Santa lives in the North pole. It is pertly cold for him.
Santa has a walk sap and I'll bet it's pretty messy. In Santa's room there is a big bed and a big brown dresser and in his room the walls are green and red.
In santa's living room there are 4 couches with Christmas trees on them.
Santa's kitchen is full with cookies and greedy little elves.santa is big and he wear red and wite. he does not live in a house he lives in a work shop.and his wif wears red wite and the elfs wear red and green.
I just made your story more interesing.
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Date: December 08, 2003 03:30 PM
Author: an (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Setting
Santa's lives in the North Poie. Santa's house is white and red .Sartas workshop is to make lots of Toys. In Santa's bebroom his bed is red and white. In Santa's house is his closet. In it are SANTA'S clothes and hats.
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Date: January 05, 2004 07:07 PM
Author: LA SHERWOOD
Subject: santa
You did good writing. Can you use another way to start some sentences?
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Date: December 08, 2003 03:31 PM
Author: JU(SHERWOOD
Subject: Setting2
The North Pole is as cold as the snowy mountains. This Pole is big. Santa's house is big and brown. Santa's sled is small and red. Santa's TV is small and scratched up. Santa's reindeer are big and Ruldoph is small.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:45 PM
Author: NI SHERWOOD
Subject: reply for the north pole.
I think your story is a nice story to read to your family.
I think you could do morethan that. That is a really nice story to read to your self.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:52 PM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: Reply to north pole
I think your writing about the setting in the north pole was good because you dicribe it really good and. I think you can improve it by putting more words into it and doing more stuff.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:34 AM
Author: AM SHERWOOD
> I think your writing about the setting in the
> north pole was good because you dicribe it really
> good and. I think you can improve it by putting
> more words into it and doing more stuff.
I like how you write the story.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:38 AM
Author: AM SHERWOOD
I like how you write the story.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:13 AM
Author: NI SHERWOOD
Subject: reply to the north pole
I really like your story and you can read this story to your family and they will like your story.I think you can od more than that.
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Date: January 05, 2004 03:03 PM
Author: CH.sherwood
The North Pole is as cold as the snowy mountains. This Pole is very big. Santa's house is very big and brown. Santa's sled is small and red. Santa's TV is small and scratched up. Santa's reindeer are big and Ruldoph is small.
YOU DID A VERY FANTATIC JOB
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Date: December 18, 2003 08:45 AM
Author: MRS. R SHERWOOD
Subject: BIO-POEMS
Students from Sherwood will be posting their biographical poems here
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:13 AM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: Bio Poem
DIN SOE LA
I am a skater and a hockey player
I wonder why there is markings on my wall I think some ones haunting me
I hear my dog coming to greet me
I see dinosaur bones in Drumheller
I want lots of money when I grow up
I am a skater and a hockey player
I pretend to be a bad guy
I feel a dream of Christmas and me opening my presents
I touch my dog's messy warm fur
I worry about animals
I cry when someone in my family dies
I am a skater and a hockey player
I understand the planets
I say there's a heaven
I dream about being rich
I try my best in my work
I hope I get a good job
I am a skater and a hockey player
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