Date: January 05, 2004 07:12 PM
Author: LA
Subject: bio-poem
You did a good job. I wonder why you put the part about the writing on the wall. It does not really tell about you.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:14 AM
Author: AL SHERWOOD
Subject: BIO POEM
A.J
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I wonder why my mom is coming to my school next week.
I hear my puppy Pepper barking outside in the back yard.
I see an Irish Water Spaniel on Halloween.
I want to be a cop to save the would.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I pretend to be an angel with my god sister Jessica.
I feel that I'm 1000 years old, but I'm not. I'm12 years old.
I touch my YU-GI-OH cards and they feel like they are new.
I worry that my mom will never get better.
I cry when my grampa passed away.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I understand when my godpa pass away because it was his time to go.
I say that my sister are mean and nice to me sometimes.
I dream that one day me and my family will move away to Newfoundland.
I try to be nice all the time but I sometimes get out of hand
I hope that my godma will not pass away next.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
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Date: January 05, 2004 07:13 PM
Author: LA other
Subject: bio poem
You did a good job on your writing. How can you be a polite person and a mean person too?
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:14 AM
Author: CO SHERWOOD
Subject: BIO - POEM
DMX
I am a boy who loves to hockey.
I wonder about my imaagination.
I hear the sound of the sea splashing.
I see the light from the lighthouse.
I want a snowboard.
I am a boy who loves to play hockey.
I pretend that I'm a monster.
I feel that i am being followe.
I touch god's beautiful hands.
I worry that I'm going to die at a young age.
I cry when my great grandpa died
I am a boy who loves to play hockey.
I understand that when it is time for some one to passed a way.
I say that I believe in GOD!
I dream that I was the strongest man in the world.
I try my hordest in reading.
I hope that I will become a lawyer.
I am a boy who loves to play hockey.
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Date: January 05, 2004 07:17 PM
Author: LA other
Subject: biopoem
I like the way you did your writing. What do you think you should change to make this better?
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:15 AM
Author: AM SHERWOOD
Subject: BIO POEM
AM
I am a kid who likes playing soccer.
I wonder if I'm going to graduate.
I hear a girl scream at halloween.
I see myself as monkey because sametimes I'm crazy.
I want to be a millon aire.
I am a kid who likes playing soccer.
I pretend to be a dad with my little sister.
I feel like a fat pig .
I touch my cat when it is sleeping.
I worry adout my mom when she's late.
I cry adout when my fish died.
I am a kid who likes playing soccer.
I would if samebody ded in my family.
I say we are a monkey.
I dream adout my million dollrs.
I try playing with my friends.
I hope I get to scare my teacher.
I am a kid who like playing soccer.
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Date: December 18, 2003 10:07 AM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: Reply to bio poem
I think you did a good job. I think you can do better by doing emontions and you can say how you felt and I think you can add more stuff and biggger words. Have a merry Chrismas.
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Date: December 18, 2003 10:15 AM
Author: JO SHERWOOD
Subject: BIO-POEM AM
I like the way you described your writing but you made a mistake in the back of the one you said I would you misd a worde and I like the way you inclouid your family.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:15 AM
Author: ME SHERWOOD
Subject: BIO-POEM
ME
I am a soccer and a basketball player
I wonder when we are going to have gym
I hear when my dog barks at someone
I see my brother crying because my dog scratched him
I want to go play at the park
I am a soccer and a basketball player
I pretend to be my brother because he copies me and Copy him back
I feel Like going to my friends to play
I touch A CRYSTAL ball filled with color and pretend I'm a princess
I worry that my mom is hurt from the car accident
I cry when something is sad
I am a soccer and a basketball player
I understand when mom goes to work
I say I believe in ghost
I dream about my dog
I try to make a effort in math
I hope my friend can come over
I am a soccer and a basketball player
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Date: January 05, 2004 07:20 PM
Author: LA other
Subject: bio
I like your writing. When you say you hope your friend can come over it does not fit with the rest. All the rest is more important. What else do you hope?
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:15 AM
Author: BASHERWOOD
Subject: BIO-POME
BA
I am a girl who loves Christmas.
I wonder why I get in trouble.
I hear the beaches, waves and the wind blowing.
I see the whole city happy.
I want to go to a school with no help.
I am a girl who loves Christmas
I pretend that I am a little cozy bunny.
I feel I that when I close my eyes I see wonderful things.
I touch the water and in numbs my hand.
I worry about going to junior high.
I cry when something happens that I don't like.
I am a girl who loves Christmas.
I understand that life is not fair.
I say that the world should have peace.
I dream of having a sister.
I try not be bossy.
I hope I could change my attitude.
I am a girl who loves Christmas.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:34 AM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: Reply to bio poem
I think your bio poem was good because it had what you were worried about and how you feel about things. I think you can improve your Bio poem by putting emontions in it but you had a little.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:16 AM
Author: JO SHERWOOD
Subject: BIO-POEM
LA Dog Dog
I am a basketball and foot ball player
I wonder about who I'm facing at my game
I hear the crowd cheering at the game
I see the crowd jumping up and down when we win
I want to win the final
I am a basketball and foot ball player
I pretend I was the best basketball player in the wold
I feel good beating a bunch of zombies at football
I touch the floor of the football field before every game
I worry that won't get to the final
I cry that my mom won't get to see me play my final game
I am a basketball and football player
I understand why my mom can't see me play
I say I will win
I dream I will be the best basketball player in the world
I try to play my best at my games
I hope I can be strong enough to win
I am a basketball and football player.
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Date: January 05, 2004 07:26 PM
Author: LA other
Subject: Bio
I really liked your poem. You talked about your sports in all of the poem. You did a good job.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:16 AM
Author: Be SHERWOOD
Subject: Bio-poem
la bo sm
I am a hockey player and a story teller.
I wonder if I had a dog if it would do tricks
I hear somebody knocking on the door.
I see a nice brown dog.
I want a nice brand new book
I am a hockey player and a story teller.
I pretend to be a nice teacher.
I feel nice and happy.
I touch a metal bar
I worry that my brother would bother me.
I cry when my neighbors dog died
I am hockey player and a story teller
I understand by telling the truth that I 'm sorry
I say sorry to my friends
I dream about making up stories
I try new things
I hope that I would be able to see my grandmother
I am a hockey player story teller
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Date: January 05, 2004 07:29 PM
Author: LA other
Subject: bio
I think you did a good job. Why do you touch a metal bar? That does not sound special.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:16 AM
Author: AN SHERWOOD
Subject: BIO POEMS
Jenley
I am a kind girl and a good dancer.
I wonder if I have frends.
I hear Rook music.
I see a diamomd ring.
I want to be a Rook star.
I am a kind girl and a good dancer.
I pretend to be a Rook star.
I feel like a Rook star.
I touch a leather coat.
I worry about my sister bagging me.
I cry when my friend moved to another city.
I am a kid girl and a good dancer.
I understand that my friend is gone.
I say that I believe in Angels in thakorley is the sky.
I dream that I'm like an Angel in the sky.
I try to do my best in my homework.
I hope I hope I win the hockey game.
I am a kid girl and a good dancer
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Date: January 05, 2004 07:31 PM
Author: LA other
Subject: bio
You did a good job writing. Why do you touch a leather coat? Why is it special?
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:16 AM
Author: AN SHERWOOD
Subject: BIO POEMS
Jenley
I am a kind girl and a good dancer.
I wonder if I have frends.
I hear Rook music.
I see a diamomd ring.
I want to be a Rook star.
I am a kind girl and a good dancer.
I pretend to be a Rook star.
I feel like a Rook star.
I touch a leather coat.
I worry about my sister bagging me.
I cry when my friend moved to another city.
I am a kid girl and a good dancer.
I understand that my friend is gone.
I say that I believe in Angels in thakorley is the sky.
I dream that I'm like an Angel in the sky.
I try to do my best in my homework.
I hope I hope I win the hockey game.
I am a kid girl and a good dancer
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:17 AM
Author: AN SHERWOOD
Subject: BIO POEMS
Jenley
I am a kind girl and a good dancer.
I wonder if I have frends.
I hear Rook music.
I see a diamomd ring.
I want to be a Rook star.
I am a kind girl and a good dancer.
I pretend to be a Rook star.
I feel like a Rook star.
I touch a leather coat.
I worry about my sister bagging me.
I cry when my friend moved to another city.
I am a kid girl and a good dancer.
I understand that my friend is gone.
I say that I believe in Angels in thakorley is the sky.
I dream that I'm like an Angel in the sky.
I try to do my best in my homework.
I hope I hope I win the hockey game.
I am a kid girl and a good dancer
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:30 AM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: Reply to bio poem
I think your note was good because it had emontions and it told what you were like.I think you can improve your bio poem by putting more emontions or even putting different beginings.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:17 AM
Author: CH SHERWOOD
Subject: BIO POEM
Billy
I am a kid who likes to read lots
I wonder why my brother get mad lots
I hear the wind cry
I see lotsof brids go south
I want to fly in a jet
I am a kid who likes
I pretend to be a book
I feel like a book with a exploring adventure
I touch a lot of books
I worry if one of my books riped
I cry when my ganmapa died
I am a kid who likes to read lots
I understand some movies that are true stories
I say Jesus and God are real
I dream of reading lots of books
I try really hard to read hard books
I hope to have my own pet
I am a kid who likes to read
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Date: January 05, 2004 07:33 PM
Author: LA other
Subject: bio
You did a good job writing. What kind of a pet do you want?
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:18 AM
Author: KESHERWOOD
Subject: BIO-
pee wee
I am a hockey player and a soccer player
I wonder if a boy can be a king
I hear music coming outside the window
I see kids in my mind
I want to have a really really good Christmas
I am a hockey player and a soccer player
I pretend to be a millionaire
I feel my mind moving around
I touch a kid in my mind
I worry a kid bothers me
I cry because my grandma died
I am a hockey player and a soccer player
I understand a kid is hurt by a bully
I say people like kids a tot
I dream about a dog playing catch
I try to help kids but i keep messing up
I hope you will be nice to a kid
I am a hockey player and a soccer player
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:59 AM
Author: MA SHERWOOD
Subject: Reply
I relly like the part when you said you are a hokey player
and socer player.You can add a little more to it.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:18 AM
Author: MASHERWOOD
Subject: BIO-
M T
I am a hockey player and I play defense
I wonder why the puppies keep crying.
I hear the birds sing and it makes me happy.
I see a pack of wolves eating a deer.
I want a paint ball gun.
I am a hockey player and Iplay defense.
I pretend I am a rapper.
I feel a wolf before.
I touch a fish before.
I worry when my mom is hurt.
I cry when my little brother died.
I am a hockey player and I play defense.
I understand when the teacher says no.
I say to my mom I am not messy kid.
I dream I am pirate stealing treasures
I try to become a better reader.
I hope I become a better reader.
I am a hockey player and I play defense.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:49 AM
Author: AN SHERWOOD
Subject: BIO POEMS
I like all of Your DESCRIPTIONS ABOUT
PLAYYOU NEED TO TILL WHAT TAME YOU ARE ON AND TILL WHAT PLASE
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:24 AM
Author: SA SHERWOOD
Subject: BIOPOEMS
SA
I am scared of a vicious dog.
I wonder of I can go to the mountains.
I hear wind as I walk.
I see the mountains.
I want to live in the mountains.
I am scared of a vicious dog.
I pretend to play school.
I can feel my face being frozen at the dentist.
I touch furry cats it purrs.
I worry about getting a D in my report card.
I cry when my mom gets mad at me.
I am scared of a vicious dog.
I understand that my forehead is big.
I say that I am beautiful.
I dream I can swirl with the wind.
I try to be friendly to my class mantes.
I hope I can live in the mountains.
I am scared of a dog.
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Date: December 18, 2003 10:11 AM
Author: BASHERWOOD
Subject: DESCRIPTION WHATE I LIKE
YOU SHOULD MAKE IT BETTER AND YOU JUST PUT A LITTLE BET
MORE INFORMATIOM!
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Date: December 18, 2003 10:11 AM
Author: BASHERWOOD
Subject: DESCRIPTION WHATE I LIKE
YOU SHOULD MAKE IT BETTER AND YOU JUST PUT A LITTLE BET
MORE INFORMATIOM!
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Date: January 05, 2004 03:05 PM
Author: AN SHERWOOD
am scared of a vicious dog.
I wonder of I can go to the mountains.
I hear wind as I walk.
I see the mountains.
I want to live in the mountains.
I am scared of a vicious dog.
I pretend to play rock star.
I can feel my face being frozen at the dentist.
I touch furry dogs it purrs.
I worry about getting a D in my report card.
I cry when my mom gets mad at me.
I am scared of a vicious dog.
I understand that my forehead is big.
I say that I am star.
I dream I can swirl with the wind.
I try to be friendly to my class mantes.
I hope I can live in the mountains.
I am scared of a dog.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:33 AM
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