Date: December 18, 2003 09:33 AM
Author: Be SHERWOOD
Subject: Bio-poem
la bo sm
I am a hockey player and a story teller.
I wonder if I had a dog if it would do tricks
I hear somebody knocking on the door.
I see a nice brown dog.
I want a nice brand new book
I am a hockey player and a story teller.
I pretend to be a nice teacher.
I feel nice and happy.
I touch a metal bar
I worry that my brother would bother me.
I cry when my neighbors dog died
I am hockey player and a story teller
I understand by telling the truth that I 'm sorry
I say sorry to my friends
I dream about making up stories
I try new things
I hope that I would be able to see my grandmother
I am a hockey player story teller
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Date: January 05, 2004 02:27 PM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
la bo sm
I am a hockey player and a story teller.
I wonder if I had a dog if it would do tricks.
I hear somebody knocking on the door.
I see a nice brown whittte dog.
I want a nice brand new book.
I am a hockey player and a story teller.
I pretend to be a nice evil teacher.
I feel glad and praud.
I touch my computer.
I hope thhat you can do a muuuuuuuuuuch bbbbbeeeetrtttttttterrrrrrrr job
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Date: January 05, 2004 02:27 PM
Author: AN SHERWOOD
la bo sm
I am a hockey player and a story teller.
I wonder if I had a dog if it would do tricks.
I hear somebody knocking on the door.
I see a nice brown whittte dog.
I want a nice brand new book.
I am a hockey player and a story teller.
I pretend to be a nice evil teacher.
I feel glad and praud.
I touch my computer.
I hope thhat you can do a muuuuuuuuuuch bbbbbeeeetrtttttttterrrrrrrr job
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:15 AM
Author: Natalie[dovercourt]
Subject: bio poem
hi!your poem was real cool, interesting and no offence but your poem was a bit different like really weird. from natalie
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:40 AM
Author: BA SHERWOOD
Subject: DESCR IPTION LASONEYA
YOURS IS VEREY GOOOD IT HAS LOTS OF MEANING.MAYBE YOU SHOULD TALK MORE ABOUT YOUR LASNOEYA !
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:40 AM
Author: BA SHERWOOD
Subject: DESCR IPTION LASONEYA
YOURS IS VEREY GOOOD IT HAS LOTS OF MEANING.MAYBE YOU SHOULD TALK MORE ABOUT YOUR LASNOEYA !
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Date: December 18, 2003 08:46 AM
Author: MRS. R SHERWOOD
Subject: DESCRIPTIONS
Students from Sherwood will be posting their descriptions here.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:17 AM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
DESCRIPTION
I love to eat pepperoni, pineapple and cheese pizza with Pepsi to drink. The cheese is so greasy and stringy. The pineapple if you suck the juice out it will be the best juice you had. The pepperoni is so crunchy it makes you want to take another bite. The crust is so crunchy and gold the crust you save for last to eat. The tomato sauce gives the flavor. If there was no tomato sauce on the pizza it would taste bland. It would be so dry you might choke on it. The Pepsi is so fizzy when you drink it fast you burp or have an upset tummy because the bubbles of fizz are trapped in you.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:38 AM
Author: ME SHERWOOD
Subject: DESCRIPTION
I think you did a very good job .But you can use descrption more often inour work.
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Date: December 18, 2003 10:00 AM
Author: SA SHERWOOD
I like your descripttons I thet it was fanny.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:17 AM
Author: JU SHERWOOD
Subject: Blo POEM
BIOGRAPHY Ju
I am a good boy .
I wonder if I can READ books and look at books.
I hear dogs barking .
I see dogs laying down in the dog house.
I want a shark fish.
I am a good boy.
I pretend I am a cat.
I feel like a bear.
I touch the globe as the dust goes through my fingers
I worry about my mom.
I cry to my mom when I am mad.
I am good boy .
I understand when my mom is talking to me.
I say to my mom to get a game system.
I dream about my mom cooking.
I try my best to write.
I hope I can go to gym.
I am a good boy.
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Date: December 18, 2003 10:02 AM
Author: CH SHERWOOD
Subject: BIO POEM
I really like your bio poem because I like the part
when you talk about books.
GOOD JOB
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Date: December 18, 2003 10:05 AM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: Reply to bio poem
I think the things you can do are amazing. I think you can improve bio poem by putting emontions.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:25 AM
Author: AN SHERWOOD
Subject: DESCRIPTTONS
Description
By AN
I LOVE to eat oranges because they are
full with vitamins. It makes you grow and
once you take a bite sour juice sprays
out on your face.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:44 AM
Author: CH SHERWOOD
Subject: DESCRIPTIONS
I like when you said sour juise sprays out on your face and sted of juice sprase in your face.
GOOD JOB.
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Date: December 18, 2003 10:09 AM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: reply to discriptino
I think you did a good job. I think you can improve how it stings when it hits your skin and i like your dicription . Have a merry Chrismas.
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Date: January 05, 2004 02:26 PM
Author: AM SHERWOOD
I like when you told juise sprays out on your face and sted of juice sprase in your face.
GOOD JOB.
And you did good job
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Date: January 05, 2004 02:26 PM
Author: AM SHERWOOD
I like when you told juise sprays out on your face and sted of juice sprase in your face.
GOOD JOB.
And you did good job
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Date: January 05, 2004 07:42 PM
Author: LA other
Subject: description
This is good writing. Can you tell more about what the orange tastes like and tell what it smells like?
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:25 AM
Author: AN SHERWOOD
Subject: DESCRIPTTONS
Description
By AN
I LOVE to eat oranges because they are
full with vitamins. It makes you grow and
once you take a bite sour juice sprays
out on your face.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1841)
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Date: December 18, 2003 10:12 AM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: reply to discription
I think your bio poem was great. I think you can improve yours by adding more writing and putting discription.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:27 AM
Author: BA SHERWOOD
Subject: DESCRIPTION
I am Mrs. Claus. The reason why I hate Christmas!
is because there are lots of snow and too much blizzard. When I go outside to shovel
snow I come home all soaking because the snow got onto me and now I am really
wet . The reason why hate Christmas is because our living room is to small.Pluse you have to spread the leafs out and put the lights on and I have to hang the stoking and I have to put the ornaments on the tree and oh it is harder then going to work and at least working for 5 hours when Santa comes home he always needs a bath and hot chocolate to go which it and when he done he would like to watch Christmas movis
and more hot chocolate to go with it.And then he would go to bed and thats why I hate
Christmas because you have to WORK.And on Christmas you don't work.
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Date: January 05, 2004 07:36 PM
Author: LA other
Subject: description
you have good ideas. You need to read and see if you can day the part of the tree and working better.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:27 AM
Author: CH SHERWOOD
Subject: DESCRIPTIONS
Journal
Descriptive
By CH
I love to eat lasagne because how the cheese melts and burns in my mouth.
It makes my teeth sharp like a dragon who shoots fire out of my mouth.
the souce looks like it's going to attack me and jump all over my face the mean pasta and furious meat trys to get away from geting eaten.
Journal
Descriptive
By CH
I love to eat lasagne because how the cheese melts and burns in my mouth.
It makes my teeth sharp like a dragon who shoots fire out of my mouth.
the souce looks like it's going to attack me and jump all over my face the mean pasta and furious meat trys to get away from geting eaten.
Journal
Descriptive
By CH
I love to eat lasagne because how the cheese melts and burns in my mouth.
It makes my teeth sharp like a dragon who shoots fire out of my mouth.
the souce looks like it's going to attack me and jump all over my face the mean pasta and furious meat trys to get away from geting eaten.
Journal
Descriptive
By CH
I love to eat lasagne because how the cheese melts and burns in my mouth.
It makes my teeth sharp like a dragon who shoots fire out of my mouth.
the souce looks like it's going to attack me and jump all over my face the mean pasta and furious meat trys to get away from geting eaten.
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