Journal
Descriptive
By CH
I love to eat lasagne because how the cheese melts and burns in my mouth.
It makes my teeth sharp like a dragon who shoots fire out of my mouth.
the souce looks like it's going to attack me and jump all over my face the mean pasta and furious meat trys to get away from geting eaten.
Journal
Descriptive
By CH
I love to eat lasagne because how the cheese melts and burns in my mouth.
It makes my teeth sharp like a dragon who shoots fire out of my mouth.
the souce looks like it's going to attack me and jump all over my face the mean pasta and furious meat trys to get away from geting eaten.
Journal
Descriptive
By CH
I love to eat lasagne because how the cheese melts and burns in my mouth.
It makes my teeth sharp like a dragon who shoots fire out of my mouth.
the souce looks like it's going to attack me and jump all over my face the mean pasta and furious meat trys to get away from geting eaten.
Journal
Descriptive
By CH
I love to eat lasagne because how the cheese melts and burns in my mouth.
It makes my teeth sharp like a dragon who shoots fire out of my mouth.
the souce looks like it's going to attack me and jump all over my face the mean pasta and furious meat trys to get away from geting eaten.
Date: January 05, 2004 08:07 PM
Author: LA other
Subject: description
This is great writing. I like the way you described everything. I wonder why the pasta is mean? Can you think of a better way to tell about the pasta?
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:29 AM
Author: AL SHERWOOD
Subject: DESCRIPTION
A.J
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I wonder why my mom is coming to my school next week.
I hear my puppy Pepper barking outside in the back yard.
I see an Irish Water Spaniel on Halloween.
I want to be a cop to save the would.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I pretend to be an angel with my god sister Jessica.
I feel that I'm 1000 years old, but I'm not. I'm12 years old.
I touch my YU-GI-OH cards and they feel like they are new.
I worry that my mom will never get better.
I cry when my grampa passed away.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I understand when my godpa pass away because it was his time to go.
I say that my sister are mean and nice to me sometimes.
I dream that one day me and my family will move away to Newfoundland.
I try to be nice all the time but I sometimes get out of hand
I hope that my godma will not pass away next.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.Je
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I wonder why my mom is coming to my school next week.
I hear my puppy Pepper barking outside in the back yard.
I see an Irish Water Spaniel on Halloween.
I want to be a cop to save the would.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I pretend to be an angel with my god sister Jessica.
I feel that I'm 1000 years old, but I'm not. I'm12 years old.
I touch my YU-GI-OH cards and they feel like they are new.
I worry that my mom will never get better.
I cry when my grampa passed away.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I understand when my godpa pass away because it was his time to go.
I say that my sister are mean and nice to me sometimes.
I dream that one day me and my family will move away to Newfoundland.
I try to be nice all the time but I sometimes get out of hand
I hope that my godma will not pass away next.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.I'm as tall as a tree and I'll dance with the wind and swirl with the sparkly, shimery, shiny rain drops and sleep in the crystal snow bed.
The best part of school is when I read a book it is very interesting and I tell the teacher and she got so happy that she started to laughed and her face turned very red.
She said that it was so good that she will give me a candy because I was the only one that is done first? The teacher told that she will lent me go outside every day even if I'll be bad every day. My teacher Mrs, Renneberg said that she will give all of her candy too all the kids in the school?I told her too say that because she is being nice to all of the kids in Sherwood school.Je
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I wonder why my mom is coming to my school next week.
I hear my puppy Pepper barking outside in the back yard.
I see an Irish Water Spaniel on Halloween.
I want to be a cop to save the would.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I pretend to be an angel with my god sister Jessica.
I feel that I'm 1000 years old, but I'm not. I'm12 years old.
I touch my YU-GI-OH cards and they feel like they are new.
I worry that my mom will never get better.
I cry when my grampa passed away.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I understand when my godpa pass away because it was his time to go.
I say that my sister are mean and nice to me sometimes.
I dream that one day me and my family will move away to Newfoundland.
I try to be nice all the time but I sometimes get out of hand
I hope that my godma will not pass away next.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.Je
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I wonder why my mom is coming to my school next week.
I hear my puppy Pepper barking outside in the back yard.
I see an Irish Water Spaniel on Halloween.
I want to be a cop to save the would.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I pretend to be an angel with my god sister Jessica.
I feel that I'm 1000 years old, but I'm not. I'm12 years old.
I touch my YU-GI-OH cards and they feel like they are new.
I worry that my mom will never get better.
I cry when my grampa passed away.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
I understand when my godpa pass away because it was his time to go.
I say that my sister are mean and nice to me sometimes.
I dream that one day me and my family will move away to Newfoundland.
I try to be nice all the time but I sometimes get out of hand
I hope that my godma will not pass away next.
I am a polite person and a mean person sometimes.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:30 AM
Author: ME SHERWOOD
Subject: DESCRIPTION
I love to eat cream. why?Because like the many different flavours.The chocolate tastes like a very cold chocolate bar.I like vanilla because it tastes like a jersy steaming hot choclate.Finally for the last flavour strawberry! it tastes strawbeery bubble gum I like it when I swallwo the ice cream because it feels like you are drinking something when it goes down your throat.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:37 AM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: Reply to bio poem
I think your dicription was good becaause it had how it felt going down your throat maybe you could of made it better by putting how cold it was and how it felt.
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Date: January 05, 2004 08:09 PM
Author: LA other
Subject: description
This is good writing. Can you tell about more flavours of ice cream?
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:31 AM
Author: JU SHERWOOD
Subject: Description
I love to eat ,,, lemon because it is sour. It squirts on my tongue. It is so sour it
makes my tongue want to sgueeze in to a little ball. The rest of my mouth feels like
lickins the lemon a gain I shake my head side to side because it is so sour.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:44 AM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: reply to discriptino
I like your discription because it was a good one how u made your tounge into a ball and it was big. I think you can improve it by saying how sour it was.
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Date: January 05, 2004 10:26 AM
Author: Jenna and Danielle
We thought you did a great discription of eating a sour lemon. It made us feel like we were eating a lemon as sour as the one you wrote about.We liked how you said your tongh cirled up into a ball because the lemon was so sour.
From,
Jenna and Danielle
G.H.L.
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Date: January 05, 2004 01:45 PM
Author: Mrs. R SHERWOOD
I love to eat a yellow juicy lemon because it is so sour. It squirts on my tongue. It is so sour it
makes my tongue want to sgueeze in to a tight little ball at the back of my mouth. The rest of my mouth feels like
licking the lemon a gain because I want more of that sour taste. I shake my head side to side because it is so sour.
I think this writing is better now because I helped you with more interesting words.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:31 AM
Author: MASHERWOOD
Subject: Description
The best part of school is gym because it is fun.We can play with the balls. We can play catch and we can play floor hockey and play badminton and play on scooters we can race We can also play doctor dodge ball
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Date: December 18, 2003 10:01 AM
Author: KESHERWOOD
Subject: Description
I like when you said about the floor hockey it was really good. If you put a little more description it will be really good.
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Date: January 05, 2004 02:00 PM
Author: ke SRHERWOOD
The best part of school is gym becaus we have fun.We can play with the balls. We can play catch and we can play floor hockey and play badminton and play on scooters we can race We can also play doctor dodge ball.
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Date: January 05, 2004 02:26 PM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
The best part of school is gym because it is enrgy wasting fun.We can play with the platic balls balls. We can play catch and we can play floor hockey and play badminton and play on scooters we can race We can also play doctor dodge ball
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:31 AM
Author: KESHERWOOD
Subject: Description
Descriptive
By Ke
I love to eat tacos because you can feel the greasy chicken in your mouth. The cheese will melt in your mouth you wiil like it so much. Hot sauce is good because the hot sauce burns your mouth so bad the spice will make the hot sauce burn your mouth like a big fire.
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Date: December 18, 2003 10:03 AM
Author: AM SHERWOOD
Subject: Description Ke
I like how you write the story.
And I think you should described more.
And I like your story too.
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Date: January 05, 2004 02:47 PM
Author: An sherwood
I love to eat pazza because you can feel the greasy pepperonie in your mouth. The pepperonie will be hot in your mouth you wiil like it so much. Hot sauce is good because the hot sauce burns your mouth so bad the spice will make the hot sauce burn your mouth like a big fire.
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Date: January 05, 2004 03:08 PM
Author: Ju . sherwood
I love to eat pazza because you can feel the greasy pepperonie in your mouth. The pepperonie will be hot in your mouth you wiil like it so much. Hot sauce is good because the hot sauce burns your mouth so bad the spice will make the hot sauce burn your mouth like a big fire.your eyes will go red and cry
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Date: January 05, 2004 02:53 PM
Author: Ju .sherwood
I love to eat tacos because you can feel the greasy chicken in your mouth. The cheese will melt in your mouth you wiil like it so much. Hot sauce is good because the hot sauce burns in your mouth so bad the spice will make the hot sauce burn in your mouth like a big fire. your eyes go red and cry.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:36 AM
Author: JO SHERWOOD
Subject: DESCRIPTION
DESCRIPTION
Ilove to eat pumkin pie with whipped cream on the topo. It is so goodIwont to eat it again and again. The wsoft flavvour inside, the hard cruat outsite, and the soft whipped cream at top gives it a little taste of heaven. It will make any body happy. It
tastes so good you will wont to eat it again and again. The first time I tried it I had 3
slices in a row. I love to eat pumkin pie because it is so good.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:49 AM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: Reply to bio poem
I think your discription was good because it was talking about good discription and it was amazing. I think can by talking and reviewing your story and putting discription in and I think you can put more in I think you did a great job hope you have a good Chrismast merry Chrismast.
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Date: December 18, 2003 10:00 AM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: Reply to bio poem
I think your bio poem was good because it was filled with emontions. I think you can improve your exelent bio poem by putting more stuff in and how you feel about those markings do they scare you? What tricks can you do on your board. What position do you play in hockey. I think you will have a good Chrismas I wish you a Merry Chrismas.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:55 AM
Author: BA SHERWOOD
Subject: DESCRIPTION PUMKIN PIY
HI JOSH. LOVED YOUR PUMKIN PIY STORY IT WAS REALLY GOOD
YOURS IS REALLY WELL DONE! YOU SHOULD WRIT MORE!
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:55 AM
Author: ME SHERWOOD
Subject: DESCRIPTION
HI;I think you our writing was very good i won't some pumkin pie. I think you should go back and change it's oar people will not no what it means.
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Date: December 18, 2003 10:15 AM
Author: SA SHERWOOD
IH JO I LOVED IT YOU SHOOD RAET MAER.
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Date: January 05, 2004 02:36 PM
Author: Ju .sherwood
Ilove to eat pumkin pie with whipped cream on the topo. It is so goodIwont to eat it again and again. The wsoft flavvour inside, the hard cruat outsite, and the soft whipped cream at top gives it a little taste of heaven. It will make any body happy. It
tastes so good you will wont to eat it again and again. The first time I tried it I had 3
slices in a row.my mom said you pig! I love to eat pumkin pie because it is so good.
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:09 AM
Author: Lena[Dovercourt]
Subject: I love to eat pumpkin pie
I really loved your story Ju i is very intresting it made me feel like eating it too! But you got some mistakes you could read it over and you will find out!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:13 AM
Author: Lena[Dovercourt]
Subject: I love to eat pumpkin pie
I really loved your story Ju i is very intresting it made me feel like eating it too! But you got some mistakes you could read it over and you will find out!
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Date: January 05, 2004 02:44 PM
Author: RY sherwood
Ilove to eat pumkin pie with whipped cream on the top.
It is so good I won't to eat it again and again till I get full.
The soft flavour inside the hard crust outside the soft whipped cream at top gives it a little taste
of heaven yummys It will make any body happy.
tastes so good you will wont to eat it again and again.
The first time I tried it I had three
slices in a row till my belly hung.
I love to eat pumkin pie because it is so yummy.
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Date: January 05, 2004 02:57 PM
Author: Co SHERWOOD
Ilove to eat pumkin pie with white fluffy whipped cream and with three cherries on the top. It is so sweet and taste I'd wont to eat it again and again. The soft flavvour inside, the hard cruat outsite, and the soft whipped cream at the top gives it a little taste of heaven. It will make any body happy. It
tastes so good you will wont to eat it again and again. The first time I tried it I had 3
slices in a row. I love to eat pumkin pie because it is so good.
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Date: January 05, 2004 02:58 PM
Author: An sherwood
Ilove to eat pumkin pie with whipped cream on the topo. It is so goodIwont to eat it again and again. The wsoft flavvour inside, the hard cruat outsite, and the soft whipped cream at top gives it a little taste of heaven. It will make any body happy. It
tastes so good you will wont to eat it again and again. The first time I tried it I had 3
slices in a row. I love to eat pumkin pie because it is so good and sharet and delisand jose good.
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