Date: January 13, 2004 10:06 AM
Author: Cindy[Dovercourt]
Subject: countryside setting
Good Job Jenny! This countryside setting is really intresting, you should write another one!
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Date: January 06, 2004 10:15 AM
Author: Leanne(Dovercourt)
Subject: Rainforest Setting
Rainforest Setting
As I enjoy my way down the path of the beautiful rainforest, I see nature all over, I see animals feeding on their little ones, I see snakes hanging from the vines, I also see a group of birds flying around the sky, I see quicksand everywhere. I can smell the fresh air in the rainforest, I can smell the mud all over, I can smell the sweet sent of the grass, I can kind of smell the fur of the animal. I hear the birds chirping, snakes hissing, I can hear the sound of the bugs flying, I can hear animals running, tigers growling, I can also hear the wind blowing the grass, I can hear my own footsteps tapping on the ground. I can feel the breeze blow on to my face, I can feel the moisture in the rainforest, and last of all I feel wonderful!
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Date: January 07, 2004 10:03 AM
Author: reply Leanne
Subject: rainforest setting
your setting is very good Leanne I think that you should try to write abook some time! from Lena
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Date: January 07, 2004 10:17 AM
Author: reply Selina
I really like yuour story, but it's kinda scary Leanne.
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:50 AM
Author: Patricia[Dovercourt]
Subject: I love your setting Leanne!!!!
Hey,Leanne!I really think that your setting was really good because when you started discribing your setting I felt like I was walking in the rainforestand I couldalmost taste the freshness of the air and that is how I feel about your setting so I agree with Lena maybe you could write as book someday!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:05 AM
Author: Anh[Dovercourt]
Subject: Rainforest setting
I loved your story Leanne! But how about taste? I know it's hard, but try something that you would like to taste as you walk inside the rainforest.But, anyways, your story is great!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:12 AM
Author: Alvina[Dovercourt]
Subject: Rainforest setting
Your setting is great!!!! Fantastic!!! Unbeleivable!!!! I'm speechless!!!! You should be an Author!! Keep up the good work!!
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Date: January 07, 2004 09:59 AM
Author: reply Jenny
Subject: countryside setting
your setting is very good !I like it a lot I can see a picture in my head write know. Icant wate to see what you come up with next from Michaela p.s ever think of writing a book!
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Date: January 07, 2004 10:05 AM
Author: reply patricia
Subject: summer night
dear patricia your setting is very relaxing and poeaceful I wish I could write like that from Michaela Thamwong
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Date: January 08, 2004 12:50 PM
Author: Michelle(HighPark)
Subject: reading response
In the beginning Chris is recognized a man standing in front of the smoke shop. This man had been doing this for the past 3 days. Chris has a step mom who is trying to sell the baggots house. Everyone believed that there were ghosts living in there. Everyone also believed that the women who owned the house died and was found on Halloween. Eleanor was so excited because she found who was interested in buying the baggots house. Eleanor took Chris and glen, her for year hold son, to help her with showing the house. They were waiting for Mrs.Vaughon to show up. They saw a car pull up then suddenly vanish. They checked everywhere and could find the car. Chris was reading in the tree house when she saw a cigar on the floor. She heard someone coming up the tree house. She shined the flashlight down the ladder but no one was there. She still heard the sound so she ran up stairs, she was frightened. Eleanor called the lady that didn't show up to see the house. The person there said there was no one there by that name. The next day glen came in the house yelling that he saw a ghost. Chris checked the street and some one disappeared around the corner. Then Judy, Chris's friend had a crazy idea of going in the baggots house to find some Halloween clothes. Chris brought glen along because her dad was out. They saw a car there that they thought it belonged to the women who used to own the house. The clothes in the house were old and smelly so they went to Judy's. While they were the Chris's dad called and asked if she knew where the baggots key was. She forgot to put it back. Chris said she didn't know where it was. When she got home the niece of the woman who owned the baggots house was there with Eleanor.
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Date: January 08, 2004 01:00 PM
Author: Nina(HighPark)
Subject: My response journal
Brian was off to the middle of the lake on a raft creation like a
weave of a handmade sweater. Brian ran as fast as he could into the water with the raft and his hatchet [whom his
mother gave to him] and collided into the misty lake. Squishy water
swooshed and swam from underneath him.
Two hours later Brian was out in the middle of the lake. The sun had left Brian felt lightheaded. Brian tied the raft to the elevators
of the plane, Brian pounded on the plane after
dropping the hatchet. After most passing out, trying to retrieve the hatchet. He went into the plane, soon finding the survival kit and the dead pilot. In horror and exhaustion. Brian left and after two and almost three hours, got to his site. With the survival kit in hand, Brian fell in a deep sleep.
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Date: January 08, 2004 01:04 PM
Author: Darcy(HighPark)
Harry potter and the Order of the pheonix
Professor Dumbledore. And the rest of the wizards went to Harry potter And brought him to their headquarters to meet Ron and Hermoine .and then they had to tell him about order of the phoenix. I would like to be Harry potter because he is the best young wizard in the book.
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:54 AM
Author: Patricia[Dovercourt]
Subject: Very good!
I think that your setting was really strong even though it was really short because when I read it I think about watching my Harry Potter DVD's again!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:08 AM
Author: Darcy[Dovercourt]
Subject: harry potter
i think your story is very good you should ask j.k rolling to helpyou write a book about magic
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Date: January 08, 2004 01:15 PM
Author: Dylan (HighPark)
Subject: response jornal
This is a response jornal about Moby Dick. In the book Moby Dick there is a man named Ishmael who wants a more exciting life at sea. He goes to a hotel to spend the night with a stranger roommate and had to share a bed with him. The stranger worshiped an idol and gave him bread and put him back in to his pocket. Then pulled out a pipe with a tomahawk end. This stranger is a whaler Quequeg was his name Ishmael became good friends with Quequeg . They both sigh up to travel on a whaling ship. The captain of the ship was named Ahab he was a one legged demon. Who never gave up on a hunt for the great white sperm whale named Moby Dick. Ahab wanted revenge because Moby Dick had bit off his leg. On there expedition they found Moby Dick and set out to kill him. Moby Dick dived down and comes up mouth opened and under Ahab's boat. He knocks over ever boat expect Ishmael and Ahab's. Ahab gives Moby Dick three strikes of pain with his harpoon and leaves it in him and gets tangled in the harpoon rope as Moby Dick dives down. Ishmael out of his boat and gets caught in a whirlpool. Quequeg who had died earlier of sickness and was buried at sea. His coffin burst out of the whirlpool and Ishmael was able to climb on it and the Rachel Ishmael's boat came to his rescue
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Date: January 08, 2004 01:19 PM
Author: josh(HighPark)
Subject: reading response log
DATE: OCTOBER 24 2003 TITLE: MYSTERY HOUSE AUTHOR: JEAN BOOKER ILLUSTRATOR: GINN PUBLISHING
I learned in this book that you should always trust your instincts .I learned This lesson in many ways .One of those ways was when Glen thought he seen a ghost (which was David). Chris thought something was up but ignored it. Another way it taught me was that when Chris heard Lena and something in the tree house she hesitated to get her dad. That is when she should of used her instincts and got her dad because they got away. Her dad did not believe her. The last reason is Lena TOOK glen she wanted to follow but she didn't because she didn't listen to her instincts.
That is what the book Mystery House taught me
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Date: January 08, 2004 01:34 PM
Author: RJ(HighPark)
You write good!
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Date: January 08, 2004 01:20 PM
Author: shorty(jon) (HighPark)
Subject: response
THE BEST CHISTMAS PADGENT EVER
In this book there are kids that they were the worst kids in the history of the world. So far in this book they burnt down their neighbour's tool house and burned it to scratch. When there is a fire theirs donuts they eat them because they like donuts
By Jon
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:48 AM
Author: Jenny [Dovercourt]
Subject: The Best Christmas Pagent Ever
Hey Jon, your story is okay, but you made a few mistakes.Keep on writing and you'll improve sooner or later.
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Date: January 08, 2004 01:31 PM
Author: ( Rj ) (HighPark)
Subject: Response Journal
I've learned so much from this book For example I can make beds out of leaves and that many roots can be salty. I've also learned that living in the woods can be hard. You'll have to catch your own food, you'll have to make your own house, clothing and get enough food to survive winter. You'll also have to make a fire, which is hard. Sam Gribley, the main character in this book, has lived in a tree for 8 months! She has a bird called frightful and she trains him to hunt. Sam has built many things like hooks out of wood and traps to catch animals. She made the hook by whittling an angle of a twig. Then she cut a smaller twig and sharpened it to a point. Then she whittled the end and bound the two angles face to face with a strip of green bark. That's how Sam made the fishing hook out of wood. She had a pocketknife to her. She made the trap two different ways. The first trap had bait on it. She bent a long twig and hook it to a "u" shape twig. Then she used a rope to catch the animals while it's eating the bait.
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:53 AM
Author: Jenny[Dovercourt]
Subject: Response Journal
What's the title of the book? It sounds really interesting.You shouldn't use so much she,she, she,and she. But other than that you're a pretty good writer.
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Date: January 08, 2004 01:34 PM
Author: brennan (HighPark)
Subject: reading response
DATE: NOV 17 2003 TITLE: MEIKO + THE FIFTH TEASURE
After reading this book I wonder if Meiko ever won the word picture contest. The contest was the person with the best paint strokes and flow. They get their picture engraved on a rock put in front of the schoolyard.
The book ended with Meiko getting the fifth treasure back. She was just beginning the picture "friendship" when she realized she had done it, she had gotten the treasure back
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Date: January 08, 2004 01:36 PM
Author: tank(kyle0(HighPark)
Subject: wings
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Date: January 08, 2004 01:39 PM
Author: Kyle (High Park)
Subject: reading response
Wings My favorite stories are about hockey because I play hockey. This book is about a kid named zip who is a goalie for the wings. His friend Kenny leaves the wings to go play with another team. This causes some hard feelings between the two boys and the wings lose Kenney who is a good defense. Action packed hockey games throughout the book. The boys became best friends again.
By Kyle
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Date: January 08, 2004 01:41 PM
Author: Derek (High Park)
Subject: CAPTAIN UNDERPANTS
THE ADVENTURE OF CAPTIN UNDERPANTS
One of the setting in captain underpants is funny because gorge beard and Harold Hutchins principle Mr. Krupp is really mean to them He hates all kids he wont let them smile or laugh but they play jokes and pranks but one day all that got them into big trouble one day there was a football game going on. aroid put pepper in the cheerleaders pompoms and they put bubbles in the band players interments and the sign that said football game today was changed to BOY ARE FEET SMELL BAD the next day there principle called them into his office when they got to his office Mr. kurrp was holding video tape in his hand a cool breeze floated through the room he put the video tape in the VCR and they watched it they watched it play until they were sweating and shivering Mr. kurpp said I think I will give one to the foot ball team and cheerleaders then gorge and Harold said they would do anything then Mr. kurpp said you can start by washing my car then you can mow my lawn then paint my house then I have a pile of homework you can do follow these rules no more jokes or laughing or smiling or comic books ever that's all you have to do
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Date: January 09, 2004 02:38 PM
Author: Anthony(Sherwood)
Subject: Capten Under pants
Derek I liket your story.Because it was funny.Now lets begen the story.Once upon a time.THERE WAS two cool kids.Named Horold and Goriod.They had a mean pricable.Mr.Kurpp.BECAUSE he made them clen up .So they made a plan .To gethim out of the school.They bet him.Beacse they punchet and kicket him.
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Date: January 21, 2004 01:51 PM
Author: shawn andSTEVEN
Subject: anthony
There were two cool kids named Gorge and Horald, they hypnotised Mr.krupp into captain underpants.
THAT IS HOW CAPTAIN UNDERPANTS CAME TO BE REAL !!!
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Date: January 09, 2004 03:08 PM
Author: shawn and steven(Sherwood)
Subject: CAPTIAN UNDERPANTS
I am reaplying to your captain underpants story.I am going to change your story a bit.Oops! I mean alot.I hope you like it.One day two guys name Gorge,and Haorld went to school.They had a mean princaple named Mr. Kupp.Theysabatosht the team and Mr. Krupp canget them in trouble so they hypnotised him and turn him into captain underpants. THAT IS HOW CAPTAIN UNDERPANTS CAME TO BE
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:09 AM
Author: jordan[Dovercourt]
very nice but could you tell me the entire story
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Date: January 27, 2004 01:26 PM
Author: jonathan(Talmud Torah)
Subject: grrat choice
i love your choice of book.
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Date: January 08, 2004 01:42 PM
Author: Selvin(HighPark)
Subject: Hank and the Aliens
Hank and the Aliens
The same thing happened to me one-day only it was a little different ill till you. One-day hank was on his way home on till they came the
aliens. They were up to no good
Looking for people or dogs like hank. Hank new something was wrong he looked back but
Nothing was there so he kept on walking. The sound was
coming closer he looked back Again but nothing was there. Then out of no were the aliens came the got hank he tried
To escape and he did. The aliens got away. Now I will tell you my story. One long night I was going to get a glass of milk.
When I went to the kitchen, I saw a dog howling at the
moon. I saw a light in the moon when out of nowhere a mother ship arrived. I was scared so I ran to my mom's
bed and called her up, we ran to the kitchen. The mother ship was gone. This was a true story.
The End
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Date: January 09, 2004 03:10 PM
Author: Alex and Roman (sherwood)
Derek I hope you like the changes.once Hank a new kid in town lived in a mansion.When he got inside his bedroom he thought he heard a noise.
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Date: January 08, 2004 01:47 PM
Author: Bobbi-jo(HighPark)
Subject: Response Journal
I was impressed by the way Imorege acted at the Christmas pageant. She didn't do anything wrong or mean she just stared to cry. I think that the people of the church and their parents were very proud of her because she was Mary and she didn't mess up. If her parents weren't proud of here I sure was. I think that this is the best book I read all year
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Date: January 08, 2004 01:48 PM
Author: Rj(HighPark)
your good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:42 AM
Author: Cindy [Dovercourt]
Spring Setting Such a nice day it smells so good outside in springtime. Spring was like heaven to me it was like I was in a whole new different world. I could hear birds singing and some birds that came back from the South. In springtime you could mostly smell fresh blossoms that grew back because of the winter. Oh you could feel raindrops while it's raining. I could see a lot of kids playing. I could taste the delicious creamy apple pie that lead me back home.
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:47 AM
Author: Selina[Dovercourt]
i really like your setting story, especially about the raining part and the kids playing part, keep up the good work.
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:42 AM
Author: Michaela[Dovercourt]
The ocean I can smell the ocean waves I can smell the baby turtles I can smell the fish in the ocean I can smell the whales eating Ican smell the sand. I can hear the baby turtles crying Ican hear the ocean waves Ican hear the whales swallowing Ican hear the fish in the sea Ican hear the crabs walking in the sand. I can taste the salty water, I can taste the crabs, I can taste the fish in the ocean, Ican taste the whale's food, but I can't taste the baby turtles and the sand. Ican see scared baby turtles Ican see whales eating I can see crabs walking I can see the ocean waves I can see the sand between my toes and Ican see the fish in the ocean.
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:56 AM
Author: Lena[Dovercourt]
Subject: The Ocean
Michaela I really like your story but I think you should put comamas in the sentences because if somone else reads it would be out of breath i don't mean it but I think you should.
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:01 AM
Author: Jimmy[Dovercourt]
Subject: Reply
Great ocean setting,it makes me feel that I am actually in the ocean when I am on the computer.
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:12 AM
Author: Anh[Dovercourt]
Subject: Ocean setting
Your story is great! But you should put the periods after your done. And when you wrote "Ican", you should put a space in between.
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:43 AM
Author: Jimmy[Dovercourt]
Subject: Summer setting
Summer setting I can see people going swimming, people riding their bikes. I can see people sweating, I can see people buying ice cream from the ice cream man. I can see people watering their gardens and plants. I can feel the hot air in my face, I can feel a fly on my arm. I can feel sweat in my hair. I feel that I am in a dessert. I feel the burning ground. I can taste the pop that I am drinking, I can taste the ice cream that I am eating. I can taste the smoothie I am drinking. I can smell pool water when people are swimming, I can smell the stinky sweat on my skin.
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:54 AM
Author: Selina[Dovercourt]
Subject: Summer Setting
hey jimmy, i really like your summer setting story, but why are you drinking pop, eating ice cream, and drink the smoothie at the same time? anyway, your story is very neat and COOL, so keep up the good work.
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:00 AM
Author: Patricia[Dovercourt]
Subject: Very nice Jimmy!
I think instead of ice cream man you should say ice cream parlor,and you can stop reapeating I feel ,I taste, and all those stuff. But otherwise it is good!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:15 AM
Author: Elizabeth[Dovercourt]
Subject: summer seting
your story is great but it needs a few inprovments, it seems silly but great!
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Date: January 14, 2004 09:36 AM
Author: Leanne(Dovercourt)
Subject: Summer Setting(reply)
your setting is very intresting Jimmy. I really enjoyed reading it, and it was a good thing that I chosen to read it.If your setting is good then maybe you could write a Spring setting or Winter setting maybe even a Autumn setting. Your setting is so good that it makes ne want to read it again.
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:44 AM
Author: Irene[Dovercourt]
Rainforest I was in the rainforest, I can see water dripping from leaves, I can see birds in the sky flying everywhere, I can see the insects over here and over there. I can hear the birds cheeping in the sky, and hear water dripping, drip, drop. I can smell fresh air in the sky, and I can smell the flowers on the ground. I can feel the wind blowing everywhere; I can feel the water on the leaves, I can feel the flowers with lots of petals, and I can feel myself in the wonderful rainforest.
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:50 AM
Author: Irene[Dovercourt]
Subject: Rainforest Setting
hey irene, i like your story. especially the part about the fresh air and the smell of flowers from the ground. keep up the good work!
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:53 AM
Author: Felix[Dovercourt]
I really like your story and it is like real,and you really did a good job I think if you have time you should write more,of these storys.
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:44 AM
Author: Felix [Dovercourt]
Winter Setting As I walk down the snowy streets, I see children's building snow mans, and people getting Christmas trees home. And I hear people laughing and I hear children's talking. I feel that the snow is cold, and my friend said that he was a little toad, but that was not real and it is not true. I tasted the snowflakes and it tasted not really good, but my mom's cookies are really good, and when my moms give candy cane to me I said that is wonderful but my stomachache is not so full. At the streets I smell yummy donuts and sweet candies, and I like building snowman the best.
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:53 AM
Author: Irene[Dovercourt]
I really like your story,good job Felix! keep up the good work!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:13 AM
Author: Selina[Dovercourt]
Subject: Winter Setting
hey felix. when i read your story, i feel like i'm in your story, it's like that i'm you. But i have a few comments, if you made this into chritmas evening, then maybe you can talk about people on teh streets caroling, and that you joined in to their songs. Anyway, keep up the good work felix!
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:47 AM
Author: Lena[Dovercuort]
Subject: Ocean Blue
Ocean Blue I could hear the waves splashing, and the dolphins splashing, swimming too! I could see the whales, and sharks tooth I could see the crabs going by. I could feel the sand the turtles too! I could feel the Ocean nice and blue! I could see Ocean oo so clean! I could not see my brother loud and scream! I could taste the fish so nice and clean.
I smell the air so fresh! I could smell the water so salty, I could smell the sand!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:05 AM
Author: Selina[Dovercourt]
Subject: Ocean Blue Setting
Hey lena, i think your story's okay, it's would be a perfect piece of art, don't you think. Anyway, i like the splashing parts of the stroy, and the swimming of the dolphans. Keep up the good work!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:10 AM
Author: Leanne[Dovercourt]
Subject: Ocean Setting
Lena i just love your story! It is unlike other setting because it is so intresting.You could maybe make a few changes so that your setting will be perfect.
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:10 AM
Author: Leanne[Dovercourt]
Subject: Ocean Setting
Lena i just love your story! It is unlike other setting because it is so intresting.You could maybe make a few changes so that your setting will be perfect.
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:51 AM
Author: Alvina[Dovercourt]
Subject: Pioneer setting
Pioneer setting
I could hear the leaves floating down from the trees. The faraway wood chopping reached my ears. Children running around playing, laughing non-stop. The cool breeze of autumn made soft whispering sound, firewood cackling, casting the smoke, drifting towards my nose. I could see the pioneer houses, also seeing people lighting up fireplaces, people hanging up their laundry, I also see children playing tag, running around panting. I could smell the fresh scent of pine from the pine trees. The strong smell of smoke drifted towards me…. I could taste the dust from the road; I also could taste the fresh bread from a nearby bakery, which made my stomach growl. I could feel the tree's sharp branches scratch the side of my face as I pass by. I could also feel the soft comfortment around me
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:04 AM
Author: Patricia[Dovercourt]
Subject: I really liked your setting
Maybe you should try adding a little more detail like "The children were running around panting with sweat".
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:09 AM
Author: Jenny[Dovercourt]
Subject: Pioneer Setting
Your setting is good, I like it. The setting reminds me of some of the books written by Laura Ingalls Wilder.Did you ever read one?
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:16 AM
Author: Anh[Dovercourt]
Subject: Pioneer setting
I just love your story Alvina! It's so interesting!
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Date: January 14, 2004 09:32 AM
Author: Cindy[Dovercourt]
Subject: Pioneer setting
Good Job Alvina I really liked your pioneer setting it's really intresting!
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:52 AM
Author: Anh[Dovercourt]
Subject: Rainforest setting
Rainforest setting I can see an animal hiding in the bushes. I can see lots of monkeys swinging from vines to vines. I see all kinds of bugs, leaves and trees in the rainforest. I can hear monkeys swinging on the vines. I can hear the trees swishing its long leaves. I can hear a monkey jumping on me. I can hear the monkey being so happy and making monkey sounds. I can feel something following me from behind. I can feel the monkey's tail smacking my face. I can feel the monkey's hair on its body. I feel the monkey playing with my hair. I can taste the monkey's hair as it went in my mouth. I can also taste my hair as it went in my mouth. At last the monkey jumped off. I can smell the rain coming. I can smell the fresh air. I can smell the monkey's smell as it ran away.
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:57 AM
Author: Selina[Dovercourt]
Subject: replying
i kinda liek your story, and i when ever i think about a monkey jumping on your head, i laugh to myself. I think you would be a very good joke author. anyway, keep up the good work anh!
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:52 AM
Author: patricia[Dovercourt]
Subject: summernight
your setting makes me happy and I can see thepicture in my headfrom Michaela p.s maybe try writing a book
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:57 AM
Author: Bobby[Dovercourt]
Subject: Rainyday
Rainy day
I can see the rain drops splashing, and a big puddle, cars racing through the puddles, I can see I am stepping on a puddle too, people running back home, rain drops thumping down on the grass, I can see a big mist. I can see people using umbrellas, raindrops clattering on the garbage can, I can taste raindrops on my tongue, I can feel that I am all wet and cold; I can hear raindrops thumping on my head. And at last I can smell the air it smells like hot water.
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:02 AM
Author: Selina[Dovercourt]
Subject: Rainy Day Setting
that was a very good story bobby, but i think you shouldn't have taste the rain drop, cause the water might be dirty. I especailly like the ending. Anyway, keep up the good work bobby!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:07 AM
Author: Patricia[Dovercourt]
Subject: good job Bobby!
I really liked your setting but maybe you could add al little joke like " I think I am going to have hypothermia!"
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Date: January 21, 2004 08:28 PM
Author: Michaela (Dovercourt)
Subject: good job
I think your setting is nice relaxing and soothing from, Michaela
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Date: January 13, 2004 09:57 AM
Author: Bobby[Dovercourt]
Subject: Rainyday
Rainy day
I can see the rain drops splashing, and a big puddle, cars racing through the puddles, I can see I am stepping on a puddle too, people running back home, rain drops thumping down on the grass, I can see a big mist. I can see people using umbrellas, raindrops clattering on the garbage can, I can taste raindrops on my tongue, I can feel that I am all wet and cold; I can hear raindrops thumping on my head. And at last I can smell the air it smells like hot water.
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:01 AM
Author: Steven[Dovercourt]
Subject: Summer
Summer When its summer I always smell fresh air all over, I hear lots of people being happy and free, at summer I'm always happy and I always feel free I can go everywhere by myself and only myself no one with me! I see so much birds flying at in the backyard of mine I also can touch the birds they fell so soft. I go lots of places for my vacation. Summer is great!
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:46 PM
Author: Elli[Talmud Torah]
Steven,your story is very wonderful! Guess what,summer is my favorite season
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Date: January 14, 2004 09:58 AM
Author: natalie(Dovercourt)
Subject: summer
steven your story was o.k no offence, but you should make it more interesting. from natalie!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:03 AM
Author: jordan[Dovercourt]
Subject: autumn setting
On a cold autumn night I could see the spooky tree my neighbors yard, children holding bags of candy, children in all kinds of costumes. I could hear people yelling and screaming trick or treat and saying thank you, kids screaming at houses, kids crying, kids chasing each other. I could smell costumes, bowls full of candy and chips.
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:07 AM
Author: [Dovercourt]
Subject: Reply
Very good, but instead I think you should call your Title Halloween night.
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:13 AM
Author: jordan[Dovercourt]
whatis your name dude!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:10 AM
Author: Patricia[Dovercourt]
Subject: not bad!
I think that you are getting better at your typing! and good setting but too short
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:16 AM
Author: jordan[Dovercourt]
Subject: reply
thank you!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:13 AM
Author: J[Dovercourt]
Subject: Autumn Setting
Hey Jordan, How can someone scream at houses? It's pretty silly if you ask me. I also have a second suggestion, call your setting a Halloween setting, because it definitely sounds like Halloween.
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:04 AM
Author: Natalie[Dovercourt]
Subject: The dessert
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:05 AM
Author: Natalie[Dovercourt]
Subject: the dessert
The dessert I can smell the burning of the hot sand; it smells so dry the air you can't believe that anything lives here. I see sand turtles in the day and occasionally some snakes. At night it is like a zoo there are so many animals such as jackrabbits or deer. I'll hear cries of coyotes. In the air I taste the dry dust and sand. I touch the ground but it is ruff as alligator skin. The good thing is that the animal fur is soft as the sky.
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Date: January 14, 2004 09:58 AM
Author: Natalie (Dovercourt)
Subject: Desert
your setting makes me very thersty. and you should write a story from Michaela (dovercourt)
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Date: January 14, 2004 10:03 AM
Author: eric (Dovercourt)
Subject: the dessert
your story is okay but you should make it more interesting. from eric
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:06 AM
Author: Elizabeth[Dovercourt]
Subject: sping setting
Spring Outside I can see people watering plants, birds flying back and forth, and children running around, now I can see rain clouds coming this way people going into their houses. I can hear birds chirping then disappearing in their little houses, doors slamming cars speeding past I can hear rain dropping and now I hear thunder. I can feel the rain on my face; I can feel the doorknob as I go in the house. I feel the carpet when I take off my shoes; I feel my dog's shaggy fur when he jumps up on my pant legs. I can smell food spaghetti, meatballs, and chocolate cake. I now taste my moms cooking it tastes good especially the chocolate cake, mmm!!!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:12 AM
Author: Patricia[Dovercourt]
Subject: very good!
very nice setting! I really liked it!
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Date: January 23, 2004 01:33 PM
Author: Shawn and Steven
Subject: reply to Elizabeth
One day there was a little boy named Eric. It was a sunny day. He was playing , then he went to eat chocalote cake. It was a great day. He tasted chocalote cake, the cake was delicias!(burp)Oops! Eric saw a bird chirp'in. He smelled the flowers, they smelled fragrant. He felt great.The sun was hot while he jumped rope!!!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:09 AM
Author: Steven[Dovercourt]
Subject: Summer
Summer When its summer I always smell fresh air all over, I hear lots of people being happy and free, at summer I'm always happy and I always feel free I can go everywhere by myself and only myself no one is with me! I see so much birds flying at in the backyard of mine I also can touch the birds they fell so soft. I go lots of places for my vacation. Summer is great!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:15 AM
Author: Patricia[Dovercourt]
Subject: nice setting Steven!
I wish that I could be like the person you were talking about because i almost never get to go on vacation!
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:14 AM
Author: Tyler[Dovercourt]
Subject: Rainy Day
Rainy day
I can see water falling from the sky; people are getting wet and damp. Some people don't have a umbrella, but some people has a umbrella, they are trying to shield their body from getting wet. I am seeing lots of kids playing joyfully in the puddles. Cars coming by and splashing water. I can hear raindrops clattering on the sidewalks; I also can hear raindrops chirping on the garbage can. I stick out my tongue to taste the water. It taste a little salty too. While I was walking I can feel gentle raindrops on me, I felt cold and damp. When I walk on the wet pavement I can smell the wet pavement smell.
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:15 AM
Author: Tyler[Dovercourt]
Subject: Rainy Day
Rainy day
I can see water falling from the sky; people are getting wet and damp. Some people don't have a umbrella, but some people has a umbrella, they are trying to shield their body from getting wet. I am seeing lots of kids playing joyfully in the puddles. Cars coming by and splashing water. I can hear raindrops clattering on the sidewalks; I also can hear raindrops chirping on the garbage can. I stick out my tongue to taste the water. It taste a little salty too. While I was walking I can feel gentle raindrops on me, I felt cold and damp. When I walk on the wet pavement I can smell the wet pavement smell.
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Date: January 22, 2004 11:15 AM
Author: Bridget (Greenfield)
Subject: Character
Character Peter is the name of one of the characters in my book, Superfudge. He is going into grade six. His younger brother, Fudge, is in Kindergarten and he drives Peter crazy. By Bridget
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Date: January 23, 2004 02:05 PM
Author: MeghanGreenfield)
I thought you had smart ideas. By Meghan
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Date: January 22, 2004 11:16 AM
Author: Sarah (Greenfield)
Subject: Character
Character My favourite character is Nancy Drew because she is a sleuth. She is eighteen and has a car. Her best friends are Bess and George. George's real name is Georgia. Nancy has solved a lot of mysteries. She is brave, nothing scares her. By Sarah
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Date: January 23, 2004 01:59 PM
Author: Janine(Greenfield)
Dear Sarah, I like your story. Nancy sounds like a nice person!I want to read a Nacy Drew book one time! See you soon.
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Date: January 23, 2004 02:01 PM
Author: Janine(Greenfield)
Dear Sarah, I like your story. Nancy sounds like a nice person!I want to read a Nacy Drew book one time! See you soon. From, Janine
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Date: January 23, 2004 02:05 PM
Author: Janine(Greenfield)
Dear Sarah, I like your story. Nancy sounds like a nice person!I want to read a Nacy Drew book one time! See you soon. From, Janine
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Date: January 23, 2004 02:07 PM
Author: Jocelyn(Greenfield)
Sarah, I like your thought keep the good woork up!
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Date: January 22, 2004 11:16 AM
Author: James (Greenfield)
Subject: Characters
Character My favourite character in my book, is Tom Little. He is very brave and excited all the time. His best friend in the book is Glory. By James
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Date: January 22, 2004 11:16 AM
Author: Emery (Greenfield)
Subject: Characters
Character In the first book of, The Magic Tree House, Jack is my favourite character. He is always scared. He has a sister who he thinks is not very smart. By Emery
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Date: January 23, 2004 01:50 PM
Author: Martin(Greenfield)
Subject: great
I really liked yours emery yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo
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Date: January 22, 2004 11:16 AM
Author: Brett (Greenfield)
Subject: Characters
Character My two favourite characters in my book are Godzilla is a guinea pig that is always getting out of his cage and eats paper. When the kids call their Dad, he says, "Is anyone bleeding, is anyone dieing?" He's funny. By Brett
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Date: January 22, 2004 11:17 AM
Author: Matt (Greenfield)
Subject: characters
Character Harry Potter is one of the characters
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