Date: January 21, 2004 01:45 PM
Author: samantha(sherwood)
Subject: reply to Helen
Hi!
Very good person.I will make a story from it. One day there was a girl named Michelle she was 16 and was good at math. She had a friends named Jenny,Cayla,Stacy,Jane and her best friend was Helen. They went evrey were together but one day Helen had to move far away Michelle was vrey sad and said can I come over once more for 2 hours after school tommorow? Helen used her new beautiful silver and gold cellephone and her mom said, "Why not today because we leave tommorow morning on the plane." Then they had the best day at the mall they had ever had. Hope you liked it. Bye!
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Date: December 07, 2003 09:28 AM
Author: Sams (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
By Sams
My character is Misses Hilery. She is a girl who likes to clean the house all the time. She can sometimes be nice. She has long brown hair. She usually likes to skip rope. She hates to work so much. She hates cats. She loves dogs.
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Date: December 07, 2003 09:33 AM
Author: Paigepa (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
By Paigepa
Amanda is a girl and she is very nice and cool. She is nice to different kinds of children. Amanda is very very heathy and she is clean. Amanda is very very very good at secrets and she has lots of friends. Every report card she gets A and she has brown hair and with light skin. she wears a pink shirt and a purple sweater. It says pissese. She wears blue pants and she also has pink pants.
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Date: December 07, 2003 07:44 PM
Author: Ashley (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Responding to Paigepa's Character
Responding to Paigepa's Character By Ashley Grade 3
Amanda is a girl and she has dark eye lashes. She has a different color of eyes-black and she's very nice. She has long, black hair with red striks in it. She has a pink tie, a diamond necklace. She has a blue T-shirt and black silky pants. She has tall black high heel shoes. Amanda is very healthy. Amanda has tons of friends. Amanda is clean. Amanda lives in a big house. She has a child named Casey. Casey likes her so much. Amanda loves to go to the park or the water park. Amanda is good at making juice. At school Amand gets an A on her reportcard. Her teacher gets proud of her more and more.
Amanda was getting proud of herself. All of a sudden Mrs. Carly came in and said, "Hey, Amanda, your car broke down."
"What?" Shouted Amanda, "Oh no, what are we going to do?"
"Call your mom I guess."
"No, She's at work. OK I'll get my brother to fix it. What's wrong?"
"It broke down."
"That was easy. It just needed gas."
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Date: December 07, 2003 11:51 AM
Author: Sonya (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a character
By Sonya (Grade 4)
This girl in my school was a special kind of girl. She had blond hair, brown eyes, and golen earrings. She was very nice whenever somebody need help she was there. When somebody get hurt whe was there. Dava is a very kind person.
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Date: December 10, 2003 05:36 PM
Author: Sonya (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Story edited and changed by Sonya
Hi, this is a true story about a very good friend.
One day in the year 2002 a girl came to our shcool she had one brother that is in grade six.
She was from Russia one day she was hanging around by herself so me and my cousin went to her and asked her if she wanted to play with us.
She couldn't speak to much English so she just said yes.
Then she found kids her own age that would play with her and be friend with her. Then she started to speak English. Her brother became friends with my cousin Raymond and Dava became friend with my cousin Rose. Then she started to talk English.
Dava is in grade four but now Dava is ain grade five.
Dava plays soccer with me in the summer and plays with fer friends in the summer too.
Dava loves to play soccer in the summer.
When I need something Dava is there for me.
She is a very nice girl.
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Date: December 07, 2003 05:26 PM
Author: Samirah (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
By Samirah (Grade 4)
Ali is a boy. He can do magic. He wants to be a teacher. He wants to show his magic to the student when he got a job like a teacher. Once he showed his magic for some of his friends and they like it. Later more people like it. He doesn't like Art. He doesn't like painting. He doesn't like some girls. He doesn't like to be a principal.
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Date: December 07, 2003 07:11 PM
Author: Anthony (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Responding to Samirah's Character
By Anthony Grade 3
Once upon a time there was a wizard. He wanted to be a teacher. But when he got his job, all he would teach was magic. All the kids were getting sick and tired of it so they told him, "We are getting sick of it." So that day they only did art, painting and started to like girls. And said hi to the principal. At the end of the day he said, "Goodbye. See you in the morning." That very next day he said, "Yesterday was the most funest day of my life. Santa Claus is funny."
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1646)
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:06 PM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: rewply to wizzard
I think your story was great becuase it had how they felt sick. I think you can improve your story by putting more discription.
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Date: December 07, 2003 05:36 PM
Author: Chris (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
By Chris (Grade 5)
My character looks like a bat. He is black. He likes to eat bugs. He is good at catching bugs and seeing in the dark. He likes to do a lot of stuff like playing and flying. He is unusual because he likes the dark and sees in the dark. He sleeps in the day and flies around at night. He is small and black.
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Date: December 09, 2003 08:56 PM
Author: Ronnie (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Responding to Chris' Character
Responding to Chris' Character
By Ronnie
My charactr is Batman. He is black he can fly 50000000,000 miles in one sec and he can lift 6000000000 pound cars with one finger he is amazing I'm as tough as him because we drink the toughest man bop he can run faster than a show car and show cars are the fastest car in the world he yells so loud the whole world will be cracked in half if he gets shot infinity times he will be still strong and alive he plays hockey and in four seconds he gets 900000000000000000000 goals he swims fast he gives Santa 20,000 presents for Santas elves cause all the hard work from the eleves he is nice Now we are brothers I get to see my family each week I stay at my house on Sunday and Saturday.
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Date: December 07, 2003 05:42 PM
Author: Navaneet (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
By Navaneet (Grade 4)
Tyson
One day there was a boy named Tyson. Like the normal people Tyson was wearing a hat, a vest, a T shirt, pants and shoes. Well, Tyson had a lot of problems with his friend. They kept on fighting until they wern't friends anymore . They will not talk any more. Tyson has new friends. His friend had to be all alone by himself and Tyson and his other friends will never fight any more.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1635)
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Date: December 09, 2003 08:48 PM
Author: Roman (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Responding to Navaneet's Character
Responding to Navaneet's Character
By Roman
Tyson
One day thre was a boy named Tyson he looked like the normal person. He had a top called a beyblade an ancient creature called a bitbeast was in his beyblade. It came from a sword past from generation to generation. Ever since Tyson got that bitbeat he's been a fierce beyblader and has never lost a beybalade battle. Now the only person who can save the earth is Tyson. Fom the evil beybladers the demolition boys! Then Tyson had to battle tala the battle was intense but the winner was Tyson! Champion beyblaade and his team!
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Date: December 15, 2003 01:54 PM
Author: ME (Sherwood)
Subject: beybland
I think that you use very dissceripsh words.BUT i think you can do much better then thatbut you did agood job.
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Date: January 21, 2004 02:04 PM
Author: raj nav (sherwood)
Subject: reply to Roman
I am going to change your story. One day there was a boy na- med Tyson. He had a beyblade named Dragoon and his beyblade was the ultimite beyblade in the world. One day Tyson had to go to the world tournament then he beat tala. Tyson won the world tournament.Let It rip.
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Date: January 21, 2004 02:04 PM
Author: raj nav (sherwood)
Subject: reply to Roman
I am going to change your story. One day there was a boy na- med Tyson. He had a beyblade named Dragoon and his beyblade was the ultimite beyblade in the world. One day Tyson had to go to the world tournament then he beat tala. Tyson won the world tournament.Let It rip.
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:47 PM
Author: Caleb(tumud torah)
great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but it needs to be more discriptive
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Date: December 07, 2003 05:47 PM
Author: Ronnie (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
By Ronnie (Grade 3)
Crash Bandi Coot
A creature called Crash he is Bandi Coot who can talk. He looks like a fox. Blue pants, two ears and wears shoes. Something about Crash is he can jump high as a trampoleen. Can run faster as a car. Crash can spin a tornado strong. And finally he has a bazooka. Crash can jump over a building can body slam so hard the world would shake!!!
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:43 PM
Author: Daniel [Talmud Torah]
Subject: A Story
I think you need to make more of a story .
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Date: December 07, 2003 05:50 PM
Author: Dean (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
By Dean (Grade 5)
Once upon a time there was a man named Dean and he is as strong as an ox and he can lift the world. He can go through walls. He can breathe under water. he can break walls. He can clim on walls. he can turn into leck wood metal.
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Date: December 09, 2003 08:31 PM
Author: Ilyas (SHERWOOD
Subject: Responding to Dean's Character
Responding to Dean's Character By Ilyas
Once upon a time three was a boy named Ilyas and he is strong as an ox and he can lift two cars is one finger he can go through people pet he had problem with coming back from samebody is stomach and he can't break down somebody was missing his teeth is name was war is den. Ilyas came from his mouth.
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Date: December 07, 2003 05:54 PM
Author: Obaid (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
By Obaid (Grade 3)
My charactr is Spiderman and Hulk and Venom. He is good at fighting. I like to do play because I love him. He is strong and he can fly and he is cool and he is very strong and his name is Spiderman. I see his books and movies and I see his movies lots of times and book and I like him.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1638)
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Date: December 09, 2003 08:25 PM
Author: Steven (SHERWOOD
Subject: Responding to Obaid's Character
Responding to Obaid's Character By Steven Grade 4
Spiderman was in a battle against green-goblin pow Spiderman dodged. Then Spiderman launched his sword and that goblin dodged, then he launched again what a hit swung him to te ground then goblin got up, called the levetation thing and got on without remembering he had the wepon pow to the floor he was knocked out. When he woke up he was hanging down from the top of the building he struded then fell and the green goblin was never seen again.
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Date: December 07, 2003 05:58 PM
Author: Shanissa (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
By Shanissa (Grade 4)
Santa was getting ready for Christmas. He liked Christmas. It was his favorite thing. He is good at delivering presents. He doesn't like sports. He is interested in Christmas. He has a beard and he is chubby.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1639)
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Date: December 07, 2003 06:20 PM
Author: Roman (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
By Roman (Grade 4) Crash Bandi Coot
A creature called Crash he is Bandi Coot who can talk. He looks like a fox. Blue pants, two ears and wears shoes. Something about Crash is he can jump high as a trampoleen. Can run faster as a car. Crash can spin a tornado strong. And finally he has a bazooka. Crash can jump over a building can body slam so hard the world would shake!!!
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1640)
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Date: December 09, 2003 08:40 PM
Author: Navaneet (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Responding to Roman's Character
Responding to Roman's Character By Navaneet
Crash Bandi Coot
Crash Band a Coot was on a mission to find the legendary gold key and the silver key well Crash had to defeat a lot of evil villian, power laser gun. Crash laser gun was so powerful break a building down. Crash heard something in the jungle. It was a gorilla. The gorilla was so strong that Crash to took out his laser gun that it destroyed the gorilla. His gun killed the villans were dead he ran fast and he made it. Crash had to beat the boss in one shot the boss was killed he got the gold key and the silver key Wille Crash was walking he had a heart vinese he did not know how to solve the problem in ten days he will die the ten days were over he died and that's how he solved his mission.
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Date: December 15, 2003 03:04 PM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: Reply to character
I think your character was cool because there was action. I think you can improve your story by putting dicriptive words
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Date: December 07, 2003 06:37 PM
Author: Ronnie (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
By Ronnie
Once upon a time there was a boy named Alex and had a brother named Nav. they were my friends. They went to the same school as me. There were weird. We went on a fieldtrip. We got bit by. I turned into spiderman. Nav turned into Hulk. Alex turned into a huge spider but not spiderman. It was cool. We got back to school. Our teacher told us to go home because she was scared. It was so fun. We lived together.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1641)
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Date: December 07, 2003 06:47 PM
Author: Jolene (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
By Jolene (Grade 4)
Hi my name is kitten AA. the two As stand for Ashley Anderson but my friends just say AA. Let me tell you a little about em. OK?
I have blue eyes and blond hair. But I have blue steaks in it. I was about 69 pounds and foot 3. I am 13 years old and I am in the 7th grade. I love to hang out at the mall with Tacha, Kate. Ashley and Angel and I like to get into trouble at school . I am more of a boy than a girl sometimes. My mom says I am a boy because I am good at socccer storst and I like bugs. Well I have to go to class now. Bye.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1642)
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Date: December 07, 2003 06:52 PM
Author: Alex (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
By Alex (Grade 3)
Mat could do math. He could even count to one billion. But most of all he loved tricks. For Christmas he sent a letter to Santa and he wished for a pokemon trainer kit. There were two kinds, pokemon trainer and master trainer.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1643)
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:03 PM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: reply to mat
I think your chracter was great because it told us what mat could do. I tihnk you improve your story by putting more discription
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Date: December 07, 2003 06:55 PM
Author: Paigepro (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
By Paigepro
My character is Mrs. Ellet. She is a girl who cleans houses to make money. She can sometimes be rude. She has green hair, purple dress and she is a mermaid. I use the word mermaid because she's a maid. Now you might think it's real but this story is fake.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:50 PM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: Reply to character
I think your character was awsome. I think you can do better by putting more discriptive words Thank you for writing.
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Date: December 07, 2003 07:49 PM
Author: Tracy (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Descriptions of a Character
My character is Misses Hilery. She is a girl who likes to clean the house all the time. She can sometimes be nice. She has long brown hair. She usually likes to skip rope. She hates to work so much. She hates cats. She loves dogs.
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Date: December 07, 2003 07:59 PM
Author: Sams (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Responding to Tracy's Character
Responding to Tracy's Character by Sams Grade 4
Pop Star Hilery Dawf
One day Hilery Dawf was going to sing on stage live. She was going to the stage . When she practices the telephone rang, it was a familiar voice. She said, "Nice try Matt." She hung up. She was cleaning the house when the phone rang. She answered. The person said that she was late for singing. She said, "I will be there right away." She dyed her bair blond but left brown steaks. She locked up her dog and left the house.
When she got there, they said, "Here is Hilery Dawf." She sang and kicked her leg. There was fire works at first. She thought she was a bad singer . At the end everyone loved her and said, "Can I have your autograph?"
She said,"Yes." She left and went home and let her dog out and listened to music.
On the radio, she loved 104.9 and hated 92.5. The dog kept on barking. She put on the TV (television). There was her picture on the TV.
She ws going on TV in two minutes. She had nothing to wear. So she solved that she went to the store and bought a dress. So that is one reason not to wear a dress because you will fall down the stairs.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1649)
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Date: December 10, 2003 05:44 PM
Author: (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Problem or Conflict for a story
Problem or Conflict for a story By Sonya Grade 4
There was a girl she was on a hike on the biggest mountain but she got lost.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1697)
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Date: December 10, 2003 05:52 PM
Author: Lucia (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Responding to Sonya's Story Problem
Responding to Sonya's Story Problem By Lucia
One day when Amanda woke up she got all excited. Amanda is 16 years old. Amanda was excited because she was going hiking. She was camping. When everyone was done eating breakfast they set off. It was so cloudy on the mountain. It was so cloudy that Amanda didn't notice her parents and her little brother Mike taking a break. Then when she turned around she saw her family was gone. "Oh no what do I do," she said. "Help! Amanda yelled. "Mom dad!" said Amanda. she was lost. Amanda started to cry when she heard someone call her name. "Amanda!" Amanda started to get cold. Out of the clouds came her mother. Amanda's mom saw her. She picked up Amanda and told them she found Amanda. They all went back to the cabin. Amanda was all right. She told her friends at home what happened.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:08 PM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: amanda
I think your story was great because it telled her emontions. I think you can improve your story by puttig more discription
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Date: December 10, 2003 06:05 PM
Author: Ashley (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Problem for a Story
Problem for a Story By Ashley (Grade 3)
Once upon a time there was a little girl named Magon she was going downstairs to eat dinner she was having spaghetti She loved spaghetti she had a new clean dress and a brother oh look Magon's at the table a splat of spaghetti went on her new dress. You are a brat brother.
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Date: December 10, 2003 06:11 PM
Author: Jolene (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Responding to Ashley's Story Problem
Responding to Ashley's Story Problem
By Jolene Grade 4
One day Magon went down to the supper table but when she got to the table no one was there so she made herself some maccoroni the same thing happened every night Then one night she wanted to go look for diamond she found her diamonds frozen in the ice She came home and got a hammer and aizle and got her mom and dad out.
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Date: December 13, 2003 08:12 PM
Author: Ilyas (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Problem for a Story
Story Problem by Ilyas Grade 3 Once upon a time there was a boy named OB. He was leaving from this school and they were moving from Sherwood School. I will miss him, that is the problem.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1701)
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Date: December 13, 2003 08:20 PM
Author: Kyle (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Responding to Ilyas's Story Problem
Responding to Ilyas's Story Problem
By Kyle Grade 4
One day Ilyas's best friend Ob moved away from Sherwood community and then Ilyas was really sad and he was crying. Then Ilyas went home after school. On his way home he walked by Ob's house and he wanted to see if Ob was still there. Ilyas knocked and there was no one there and then Ilyas was really sad. the next day Ilyas and his mom went to the mall and at the mall Ob was there. Ilyas said, "Hey Ob". And then they spend the rest of the day with each othere laughing and playing with each othere and the moms talked and then said, "Every weekend we will all apend time with each other." Ilyas was really really happy about that.
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Date: December 13, 2003 08:23 PM
Author: Sams (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Problem for a Story
Problem for a Story
By Sams Grade 4
One day the spider was hugry but there was no bugs to eat.
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Date: December 13, 2003 08:30 PM
Author: Ronnie (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Responding to Sams Story Problem
Responding to Sams Story Problem By Ronnie
Another day the spider was about to die but thireen bugs got stuck in the web. so the spider ate them. It was hngry still So I was about to eat it. It came up and bit my arm. Two days later I was spiderman. It was cool I was like so fast that I was amazing. I got printed in the paper. I was like Tarzan but I was red and blue and I could draw very good. I drew myself spinning my web.
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Date: December 15, 2003 03:01 PM
Author: RY SHERWOOD
Subject: Reply to problem
I think you can solve your problem by leaving your self the way you are because you can be a hero and being a hero is cool.
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Date: December 13, 2003 08:33 PM
Author: Tasha (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Problem for a Story
Problem for a Story by Tasha Grade 3
A girl had a fish named Angel but the next day the fish was hungry but the girl had no food for the fish.
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Date: December 13, 2003 08:42 PM
Author: Tyra (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Responding to Tasha's Story Problem
Responding to Tasha's Story Problem by Tyra Grade 3
A girl had a fish named Angel but the next day the fish was very hungry. But the girl had no food for the fish and then she went to the store and then she forgot to feed the fish and the fish almost died. So she went and dropped a piece of bread in the fish tank by accident. But the fish was still alive and then she dropped another piece of bread in the fish tank by purpose so the fish would stay alive. So then she stopped dropping things in the tank. But the fish was still hungry. So she was all alone but she just wasn't all alone. She had her fish as her pet and she was never alone by herself. But the fish was still hungry. So she kept on feeding up till he was very very full from eating all that bread and the fish was very full. When he ate lots already and the girl was very hungry. So she went to get somethings to eat and then when she went to bed,the fish was so fat and in the morning she saw the fish was so very very fat. She thought she gave Angel too much food to eat last night and she thought she gave Angel her fish just a little bit food to eat. But she was very wrong. She gave her fish Angel a lot of food to eat and so she went and feed the fish and the fish was still full and then she was very sad.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1706)
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Date: December 13, 2003 08:48 PM
Author: Raj (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Story Problem
Story Problem by Raj Grade 3
There was a big problem and there were three bionic boogers chasing Geroge Harold, Captain Underpants and Melvin. They had been chased by three bionic boogers but Melvin's hamster put the three bionic booger in his mouth and spit the three bionic boogers to space.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1707)
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Date: December 13, 2003 08:52 PM
Author: Anthony (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Responding to Raj's Story Problem
Responding to Raj's Story Problem
There was a big war against Captain Underpants and the bionic boogers. It was all Melvin's fault because he got mad at Harold and George. So he made a icecream with buttons on it. Melvin turned himself into a giant booger. Then Captain Underpants beat the giant booger into many parts.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:32 AM
Author: AL SHERWOOD
I liked how you told the story. I think that you can do a better job that you've did.
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Date: December 13, 2003 09:04 PM
Author: Samm (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Problem for a Story
Problem for a Story by Samm
Lights Out
One day Liza and her mom were watching T.V., the lights flickered and the whole house was pitch black. No other houses in the city..
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Date: December 13, 2003 09:08 PM
Author: Shanissa (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Responding to Samm's Story Problem
Responding to Samm's Story Problem
by Shanissa Grade 4
One day Liza and her mom were watching T.V., the lights flickered. Now the city was dark they could not watch T.V. so they went to check the switches. They were all off. Her mom turned them on and the lights and T.V. went back on. I thought I would never gt to watch T.V. any more.
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Date: December 14, 2003 09:40 AM
Author: Ronnie (SHERWOOD)
Subject: Problem for a Story
Problem for a Story
By Ronnie Grade 3
Once upon a time there were two cats and five dogs. But there was a problem, the dogs picked on the cats and they had no food. They lived in a trailer that was broken.
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Date: December 14, 2003 09:45 AM
Author: Paigepal (Sherwood)
Subject: Responding to Ronnie's Story Problem
Responding to Ronnie's Story Problem
By Paigepal
Once upon a time there were two cats and five dogs. But there was a problem the dogs did not have food. and the cats had food and the cats shared the food with the dogs. and the two cats and five dogs lived in a broken trailer.
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Date: December 14, 2003 11:45 AM
Author: Tracy (Sherwood)
Subject: Problem For Story
Problem For Story by Tracy Grade 3
There was a girl named Mrs. riddle and Captain Underpants gave her a wedgy.
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Date: December 14, 2003 06:29 PM
Author: Steven (Sherwood)
Subject: Responding to Tracy's Story Problem
Responding to Tracy's Story Problem by Steven Grade 4
One day there were two boys named George and Harold. They were really bad and they did something to the football team and the fooball team did not know and Mr. Krupp, their mean principal got proof. So they got a hypro ring and hynotized him into Captian Underpants. Then they destroyed the evidence and then the said everytime someone snaps their fingers you turn into Captain Underpants and they said give Mrs. 'r'iddle a wegie. She said. "What's that?" Just as Geroge snapped his fingers, Mr. Krupp! So they said no more school until tomorrow because I have to have a word with Mr. Krupp. So whenever someone snaps their fingers, you know it's going to come.
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Date: December 14, 2003 06:33 PM
Author: Shanissa (Sherwood)
Subject: Problem for a Story
Problem for a Story by Shanissa Grade 4
Once upon a time, there was a girl named Samirah. One day she had to leave her school but she did not want to.
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Date: December 14, 2003 06:38 PM
Author: Sams (Sherwood)
Subject: Responding to Shanissa's Story Problem
Responding to Shanissa's Story Problem by Sams
Once upon a time there was a girl named Samirah was a new girl in the school. She wanted to go to her old school. She did not want to go to her new school but she moved anyways. She did not know anyone but when Tyra came and Tyra said,"Hi, I am Typra. You must be new."
Then Samirah said, "Yes, I am new to this schol."
Then she wanted to stay at that school and did not want to leave.
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Date: December 14, 2003 06:44 PM
Author: Obaid (Sherwood)
Subject: Story Problem
Story Problem by Obaid Grade 3
My dog got caught by some bad hunters.
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Date: December 14, 2003 06:49 PM
Author: Alex (Sherwood)
Subject: Responding to Obaid's Problem
Responding to Obaid's Problem by Alex Grade 3
I tried to save my dog becuase hunters are coming. I said I think think I hope this works I put money in the phone but no what should I do I've got it I whistle and he know what to do but the hunters are here. The hunters said, I want to shoot im. I got a flash light. He pointed it at the hunter and said please don't shoot him but he could not hear. He had disc music on. Maybe I tell the other hunter to don't shoot him. I did and he said yes.
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Date: January 21, 2004 01:36 PM
Author: Ilyas and lucia (sherwood)
Subject: obaid
My friend's name is obaid and his dog is lost. And I hlep him find his dog. In 5 more miuntes we find him in a girl's hand named Lucia. And we take the dog home.
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Date: December 14, 2003 06:52 PM
Author: Lucia (Sherwood)
Subject: Story Problem
Story Problem by Lucia Grade 4
a girl named Sarah has a problem. She has somehting under her bed and someone is stealing her things like jewellery, candy, make-up and jewellery box.
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Date: December 14, 2003 07:00 PM
Author: SAmm (Sherwood)
Subject: Responding to lucia's Problem
Responding to lucia's Problem by Samm Grade 4
The Thief
One hot Summer day Sarah went out to J.P. outdoor pool. She was the best swimmer because she liked to practice. Her mom always said to her practie makes perfect so that's what she did. But while she was gone someone broke in and stole her jewelry, money, candy, make-up,jewelry box and her most pride possession her marriage ring! When she got home everything was a mess. When she went to get her marraige ring from her secret drawer, it was gone! She sat up on her bed and started to cry. Then she picked up her phone and dailed 911. She told them everything they said they would watch 6 months later they caught the theives but they hd murdered on of her friends Emily. But at least they caught the thieves so they can't murder anyone else.
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Date: December 14, 2003 07:03 PM
Author: Alex (Sherwood)
Subject: Story Problem
Story Problem by Alex Grade 3
Max could do math it was his computer. It would not turn on the push the switch but it did not work. He had lunch but it still won't work. Max said, "Darn when does it gokng to work? maby I will return it."
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Date: December 14, 2003 07:08 PM
Author: Alex (Sherwood)
Subject: Responding to Alex's Problem
Responding to Alex's Problem by Tracy Grade 3
Max had a problem and his problem was that Max's computer didn't turn on. But Max didn't know why his computer wasn't working. So after they had supper Max was mad because when nobody does their homework they will be sent to the detention room. When Max was sleeping he had a dream that the detention room was taken care by Mrs. Riddle the crazy woman. So the next day when he went to school the nicest teacher in Sherwood Elementary was going to teach them for the day. When Mrs. Sisi the nice teacher started taking homework everybody who did not do homework won'thave to go to the detention room any more!
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Date: December 14, 2003 07:13 PM
Author: Navaneet (Sherwood)
Subject: Story Problem
Story Problem by Navaneet Grade 4
Tyson Ray Max and Ka had a big problem. The problem was they had to beat team Spiders. The bigger problem was they had to beat their bitchip by using thier final attack. And they beat them and they won.
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Date: December 14, 2003 07:19 PM
Author: Shawn (Sherwood)
Subject: Responding to Nav's Problem
Responding to Nav's Problem by Shawn Grade 3
Tyson, Ray, Max and Kai had a big problem. They had to vers the paskic. They wanted to beat their bitchip. They had strong bitchips. Max was first to battle. Max tried to hang in but their bayblade was too strong and then Max lost. Kai was up next he has good skills but I don't think Kai could beat his next battle. Kai used his bitchip and he won. Ray was up next he used all his strength and then it was a tie. Tyson is the world champion and his bay blade went so fast that he knocked out the bayblade out of the stadium and then they won. Tyson was real happy that he won.
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Date: December 14, 2003 07:24 PM
Author: Jolene (Sherwood)
Subject: Story Problem
Story Problem by Jolene Grade 4
When Victoria woke up she was so happy she went to shcool she was happy but when she got to school her friend told her that she was moving but Victoria did not believe her until her teacher said she was moving Then she started to cry and then when she went home she lost her brother . She went everywhere to find her brothr when it was begin to get dark she went home her mom said, "We will look for your brother tomorrow OK."
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Date: December 14, 2003 07:28 PM
Author: Ashley (Sherwood)
Subject: Responding to Jolene's Problem
Responding to Jolene's Problem by Ashley Grade 3
When Victoria woke up she was so happy because she was going to school but she couldn't because she was sick but her friend told her that she was moving but Victoria did not believe her until her friend told her that she was moving.
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Date: December 14, 2003 07:31 PM
Author: Steven (Sherwood)
Subject: Story Problem
Story Problem by Steven Grade 4
Hurry up, quickly through the jungle, protect the head ahhh oh no hairy yikes we have to get to the gate house, ahhh, not you Fred, ahhh oh no we might have to jump into the lava, no we can't, we don't have a choice Your're right ahhhh!!!
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Date: December 14, 2003 07:34 PM
Author: Roman (Sherwood)
Subject: Responding to Steven's Problem
Responding to Steven's Problem by Roman Grade 4
Hurry up, quickly through the jungle, protect the head ahhh oh no hairy yikes we have to get to the safe house, ahhh, not you Fred, ahhhoh no we maight have to jump into the lava, no we can't we don't have a choice youre right ahhhh!!!
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Date: December 14, 2003 07:37 PM
Author: Paigepal (Sherwood)
Subject: Story Problem
Story Problem by Paigepal Grade 3
I was going to the store and I oh no there is Jame and his gun he was the bully of the school. Once he told me to do bad things. But I did not do it and I told my mom and she told his mom and he got into very big trouble.
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Date: December 14, 2003 07:42 PM
Author: Ilyas (Sherwood)
Subject: Responding to Paigepal's Problem
Responding to Paigepal's Problem by Ilyas Grade 3
I was going to my friend's house and I saw somebody klaing a box name Ob and I saved him and the girl who killed is name was Sa and she was trying to kel me the problem was she was trying to as and keh as and I fall and she call me.
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Date: December 14, 2003 08:08 PM
Author: Kyle (Sherwood)
Subject: Story Problem
Story Problem by Kyle Grade 4
One morning Ryan got up and wnet to school. After the morning it was lunch time. At lunch there was a problem there were rats in the food. Everyone was wondering where they came from. Ryan said he will get to the bottom of this.
Will Ryan get to the bottom of thei? Will Ryan have to eat anchovese? Stay tuned...
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Date: December 14, 2003 08:13 PM
Author: Sonya (Sherwood)
Subject: Responding to Kyle's Problem
Responding to Kyle's Problem by Sonya Grade 4
Ryan quickly run home made his lunch and ran back. Then when he got to school he took out his note book and started to investigate. He knew the person with the rat food in the kids pocket. So he ran to the cafeteria and found rat food crumbs. But the crumbs ended at room 6 door so Ryan knew somebody from room 6. So he went in and saw Anthony feeding rat. Then Ryan told the principal and he had D.T. for a whole month and helping the janitor.
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Date: December 14, 2003 08:16 PM
Author: Shawn (Sherwood)
Subject: Story Problem
Story Problem by Shawn Grade 3
It was somebody's birthday he had to take a cab home they had so much fun and forgot a cab had to pick them up when they went outside the cab left.
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Date: December 14, 2003 08:20 PM
Author: Rajneel (Sherwood)
Subject: Responding to Shawn's Problem
Responding to Shawn's Problem by Rajneel Grade 3
One day there was a boy and it was his birhtday he took a taxi so he could go home but the boy was too shy to tell the taxi driver where to go and he whispered to the taxi driver and when the taxi dropped him him he saw all of the house light and the inside and the door was not locked and went inside he looked back and the cab was gone and he looked inside and their family and friends said happy birthday and the boy went inside.
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Date: December 14, 2003 08:22 PM
Author: Roman (Sherwood)
Subject: Story Problem
Story Problem by Roman Grade 4
Once upon a time a guy named Spiderman was a hero who fights crime. Shocker was zapping Spiderman. Pow bam aaaaaa Shocker threw Spiderman in the water.
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Date: December 14, 2003 08:25 PM
Author: Navaneet (Sherwood)
Subject: Responding to Roman's Problem
Responding to Roman's Problem by Navaneet Grade 4
Once upon a time Peter Packer who was spiderman. Spiderman was looking for Shocker. Shocker was behind Spiderman threw his web. Shocker missed Spiderman and then he threw a web at Shocker. Spiderman threw Shocker in the water. Spider man went home.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:54 PM
Author: AL SHERWOOD
I ddo not like your sentences why I think you can do more interusting sentences.
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:39 PM
Author: Romy[Talmud Torah]
I liked your story it was good......
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Date: October 03, 2003 01:26 PM
Author: mrs. ebbers (High Park)
Subject: our new project
Hello everyone! Welcome to the message board. We are going to use this as a tool to respond to the work of other students. Other students will also be looking at some of your work. Imagine that, working with other students that you don't even know. I hope that you get as much enjoyment out of this project as I do!
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Date: November 12, 2003 02:51 PM
Author: c.s(High Park)
Subject: good inerduchen
this is the bestintro because its one i never heard you say before. Later days. bye!
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Date: October 28, 2003 11:40 AM
Author: Chelsea(High Park)
Subject: poem
Wolf by CH
Small, cute, furry They were just born. Little tiny fur ball. Pups
Role model, play fighting, fun Take care of pups. Shows them how to fight. Babysitter
Howls, yelps, barks Pups growl at butterflies Pack howls at the moon Communicators
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Date: November 12, 2003 02:52 PM
Author: SHAYLA(High Park)
Daer Ch your poom wsa nice and semd lkie was there with the wolf it was good.
From.Shayla
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Date: November 12, 2003 02:57 PM
Author: Trisha(High Park)
Subject: Reply
Dear, Chelsea
Chelsea your pome was very good I liked it. It seemed like I was writing it but I wasn't. By Trisha
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Date: January 21, 2004 02:03 PM
Author: angela(sherwood)
Subject: reply to Chelsea.
Hello Chelsea,
I will change your story a bit. Three little pups so fury and brown, played in the field while their parent's watch them. Then all of a sudden,the youngest pup got hurt. And then the parents called out, it was time to go home.
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Date: October 28, 2003 11:40 AM
Author: Trisha(High Park)
Subject: Poem
Wolves
Strong, wise, brave Keep the pack alive Keep trespassers out. Leaders
Speedy, growing, mighty Smart moves Wise thinking. Fighters
Helpful, nice, kind Protect pups Play with pups Baby sitters
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:08 PM
Author: Haley(High Park)
Subject: poem
You did a nice poem. I like your descriptive words and it's exciting.
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Date: January 27, 2004 01:20 PM
Author: toban(Talmud Torah)
Subject: wolves poem(reply)
your poem was unique and I enjoyed it.
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:58 PM
Author: AL SHERWOOD
I think that you did a good job and I hope you keep the good job up and work even harder.
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Date: January 09, 2004 03:08 PM
Author: Tracy(Sherwood)
Subject: reply to Trisha
Hi Trisha, I read your poem and it was good. your poem was so good that I wanted to also make a poem just like yours. Roses are red, vilets are blue, I'll smell like candy and some day you will to.
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Date: October 28, 2003 11:40 AM
Author: Hannah(High Park)
Subject: poem
Wolf Strong, brave, fierce Stand mighty tall Jumps on top of his prey Not afraid Leader
Protects, confident Night and day protects the pups Role model toward the pups Babysitter
Caring, loving, warming Protects her pups Cares for them Mother
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:05 PM
Author: ceidre (High Park)
Dear hannah I really liked your writing. I wouldn't want to be by that wolf or it will take a big bit out of me.
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:18 PM
Author: ceidre (High Park)
Dear hannah I really liked your writing. I wouldn't want to be by that wolf or it will take a big bit out of me.
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:46 PM
Author: winona(Talnmud Torah)
Subject: The poem was pretty good bad!
The poem didnt rhyme that much but it was pretty good. but I did like that the person put words before you put the sentenes.
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Date: October 28, 2003 11:41 AM
Author: Jewels(High Park)
Subject: Poem
WOLF By JD
Mighty, powerful, fearless Makes the decision First one to eat LEADER
Sad, Yelping, Whimpering Watches the baby pups Stays during the hunts Baby Sitter
Scared, alone, thirsty No one is with him It's hard to hunt Lone Wolf
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Date: November 12, 2003 02:55 PM
Author: courtney(High Park)
Subject: best poem
this is the best poem because its excitingand wonderful. good luck on next poem.
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Date: October 28, 2003 11:41 AM
Author: Cody(High Park)
Subject: poem
Wolf By CM
Mean, strong, fast Is really stealthy Sight is really good Hunter
Camoflauged, tall, proud Kills anybody who trespasses the territory He leads the pack Leader
Strong, dominate, proud He has a powerful pack He has a family Alpha male
Powerful, agility, big Kills only its prey Eliminates anybody that he sees except his family Leaders
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:17 PM
Author: dylan(High Park)
Subject: good work
nice good
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Date: October 28, 2003 11:41 AM
Author: (Tyler)HighPark
Subject: poem
Wolf by TL
Quick, dominate, powerful Takes his prey down Fast to catch Hunter
Fearless, powerful, terrified Wins every battle Proud to win Fighters
Controls , tall, strong Controls the pack Make their own decision Leader
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:01 PM
Author: Dalton(High Park)
Subject: poem
Good job Tyler that was awesome.I like the whole thing and i am not lying.I like how you used all the descriptive words.
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Date: November 12, 2003 02:58 PM
Author: courtney(High Park)
Subject: good job
good job no your poem. i was so eagerto finish!
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Date: November 12, 2003 02:59 PM
Author: shayla(High Park)
nice goob
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:43 PM
Author: Ricky[Talmud Torah]
Subject: poem
your poem was very very very good!!!! thank you for letting me to listen to your poem
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Date: October 28, 2003 11:41 AM
Author: Rabea(High Park)
Subject: poem
Wolf By REZ
QUICK, quiet, strong Hunting down a deer Following the leaders command. Hunting
Weak, scared, sick Always loses every battle Babysitter.
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:15 PM
Author: cynthia(High Park)
dear,Rabea I like your poem because it had some powerful words.
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:37 PM
Author: Daniel [Talmud Torah]
Subject: The Poem
I think your poem needs a bit of work and effort.
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:38 PM
Author: Daniel [Talmud Torah]
Subject: The Poem
I think your poem needs a bit of work and effort.
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