Date: October 30, 2003 09:44 AM
Author: Jewels(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Haunted House Description By JD
We crept up the stairs. I saw broken windows and mice tiptoeing across the wood floor. The old cupboard smelled rotten. I felt the soggy, sticky and wet walls. Then I heard heavy breathing close by, winds thundered roughly.
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Date: October 30, 2003 09:59 AM
Author: Jewels(HighPark)
Subject: Very creepy
Jewels - Iloved your poem! The description of the sticky walls was fabulous. I would not go into this house, would you?
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:13 AM
Author: Jewels(HighPark)
I would not like to go in a house like that. Wouldn"t you like to hear heavy breathing close by. Writing description are my favourite. By for now.
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Date: November 12, 2003 02:54 PM
Author: tyler,leah(High Park)
Subject: Reply wried
dear Jewles,
We like your honted house discripson.
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Date: November 12, 2003 02:55 PM
Author: SHAYLA(High Park)
Dare Jeles your setting was osom
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:37 PM
Author: Stephanie[Talmud Torah]
Subject: great job
I really liked your story or whatever it is. Great discription.
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:44 PM
Author: Romy[Talmud Torah]
Subject: very good
I liked your story(it was short)
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Date: January 23, 2004 01:43 PM
Author: Ronnie Sherwood
Subject: Reply To Jewls
Hi Jewls. I Relly Liked Your Story About The Lightling And Thunder. From Ronnie.
Hope You Like Your New Story.
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Date: January 23, 2004 01:43 PM
Author: Ronnie Sherwood
Subject: Reply To Jewls
Hi Jewls. I Relly Liked Your Story About The Lightling And Thunder. From Ronnie.
Hope You Like Your New Story.
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Date: October 30, 2003 09:44 AM
Author: Hannah(High Park)
Subject: setting
Haunted House Description By HW
The windows where cracked the door had bars on it. The wood on the house was falling apart. We went inside the broken window. There were skeletons hanging from the ceiling and on the floorboards. The floor creaked. We got so scared we ran out of the house as fast as we could.
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:13 PM
Author: Christian(High Park)
Subject: great setting
I really liked your story because it had lots of description about the old crikity house good job
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:44 PM
Author: Stephanie(Talmud Torah]
Subject: whatever
WHATEVER.
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Date: October 30, 2003 09:48 AM
Author: codey percheson(High park)
Subject: setting
Jungle setting By CP High above, the birds chirped from the canopy. There were waves splashing against the sand. The wet leaves were dripping water on the ground. Bushes waved on the warm wind. The snakes slithered across the ground.
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Date: January 05, 2004 02:55 PM
Author: RY sherwood
Jungle setting By CP High above the birds chirped from the canopy. There were waves splashing against the once dry sand. The wet leaves were dripping water on the flith of the ground. Bushes waved on the warm wind. The snakes slithered across the ground to there nest.
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:40 PM
Author: Stephanie [Talmud Torah]
Subject: wow
GREAT STORY or whatever it is its good anyway.
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Date: October 30, 2003 09:49 AM
Author: Duane(High Park)
Subject: setting
Classroom setting By DC
The desks were put neatley.The class room smelled like te nice frech air,as the sun shon thouhg the window.when I was working it felt like the sun was burning on top of my back.
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Date: November 01, 2003 03:32 PM
Author: Miss McLeod (High Park)
Subject: Nice Job!
I liked how you used sensory imagery to create a picture in my mind of what your classroom is like. I felt like I was there!! Well done!
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:56 PM
Author: AL SHERWOOD
I think that your story is very BORING why you did not do a good job and you can do a better job that you did.
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Date: October 30, 2003 09:53 AM
Author: Mrs. Wildemann(HighPark)
Subject: Let's get started
Hi everyone! I am glad that we are ready to start posting our work on the message board. You have done some wonderful writing and it's exciting that others will get to read it. Let's get started!
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Date: October 30, 2003 09:53 AM
Author: Jewels(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Field Setting In the field there were two furry, brown and cuddly pups. They like to jump all over the place, even on each other.
They feel dry dirt, pokey pine trees and soft grass. The leaves shone, because it was summer and the sun was shinning. Big, dry wood and logs piled on each other
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:14 PM
Author: Cheyanne(High Park)
Subject: Good Job
Good job Jewels,where did you get that idea.
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Date: October 30, 2003 09:54 AM
Author: Laticia(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Haunted House Description By LB
The house was a lot darker than I remembered. The steps creaked as we tiptoed up the stairs leading towards the front door. We went inside, trembling in fright. I could see bats hovering above us. We heard sounds, but we didn't know where they were coming from. We went in a big living room that was like an obstacle course. There were disgusting looking rats and mice and cobwebs everywhere. One big cobweb with a spider on it, was in front of me and I walked into it. There was a table with stuff to feel, the stuff felt like brains and guts!
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:20 PM
Author: Hannah and Karla(High Park)
Subject: I loved it
Daer Liticia
I liked it a lot,it is very good. I liked how you described the livingroom
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:02 PM
Author: Laticia(High Park)
Subject: Thank you
Thank you Hannah and karla four replying to me. from laticia
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:45 PM
Author: AL SHERWOOD
I likes your writing alot..I think that you can do much more writing that you can do.
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Date: December 15, 2003 03:00 PM
Author: AL SHERWOOD
I love how you've did the words in the sentences.I think that you can do an even better then you did.
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Date: October 30, 2003 09:54 AM
Author: Duane(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Haunted house description By DC
The house was a lot darker the I remembered. I slowly opened the door not knowing what to expect. The windows had cobwebs hanging from them. I slowly went up the stairs and opening the door to see what was there. I slowly inched my way way to the foot of the stairs. Just then I heard a whisper as I was going down the stairs. Just when heard that I ran out as fast as I could
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:09 PM
Author: keith(High Park)
Subject: nice story
i like the part when it was crazy about the cob webs by keith
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Date: October 30, 2003 09:55 AM
Author: Leah(HighPark)
Subject: setting
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Date: October 30, 2003 09:56 AM
Author: Duane(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Winter setting By DC The wind howles,as I was walking though th forest.snow began to fall as it grew colder and colder.the trees were covered with big blantes of snow.I heard the rustling of the bushes besied the trees.snow was falling on my head like rain.
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:04 PM
Author: rabea (High Park)
I really like described yourstory by rabea
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:41 PM
Author: Kyle[Talmud Torah]
You stoy great,neat and exiting. I have just one thing to say blantes is not a word. What were you trying to say.
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Date: October 30, 2003 09:57 AM
Author: Leah(HighPark)
Subject: setting
Haunted House Description By LV
We crept up the stars. We could hear the wind coming through the cracked window. It was a blustery night. Every thing was covered with spider webs. Spiders would vanish into the cracks in the floor. The borders on the windows were falling off. You could see the bats flying around and the light were dim and spooky. If you looked high above your head, you can see that people were hung there and only their bones remained.
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:14 PM
Author: tarynHigh Park)
Subject: great story
I like it when you said cracked windows taryn
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:19 PM
Author: taryn(High Park)
Subject: great story
i liked the part when u said cracking windows. taryn
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:19 PM
Author: taryn(High Park)
Subject: great story
i liked the part when u said cracking windows. taryn
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Date: October 30, 2003 09:57 AM
Author: Jewels(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Jungle Setting By JD
In the Jungle you can hear birds chirping loudly, whispering to each other. Tigers growl after catching their prey. Tigers are hunting to eat other animals. Monkeys are climbing up the slimy vines. Snakes are crackling the leaves while slithering over them. Water is rushing through the river banks.
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Date: October 30, 2003 09:58 AM
Author: Hannah(HighPark)
Subject: setting
Character Description
The alpha female had beautiful healthy pups. They were all very hyper but the most hyper was a boy pup. He was always awake and always wrestling with his brothers and sisters. Of course he always won. He thought that he was the alpha pup.
By HW
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Date: January 09, 2004 03:12 PM
Author: angela(sherwood)
Subject: reply to hannah.
The alfha female has a lot of fat pups. They were very slow in walking with their mother. the fattest one was a boy.
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Date: October 30, 2003 09:59 AM
Author: Laticia(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Winter Setting By LB
A blanket of misty snow covered the bumpy earth. When they walked, the shnow crunched under their paws. It was a blizzard when the attack began. The wolves ran across the icy river and slid into the pack.
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Date: November 27, 2003 07:53 PM
Author: laticia
Subject: setting
dear laticia what a great seting.
from leah.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:01 AM
Author: Codey p(HighPark)
Subject: setting
Field Setting
By cp
The rushing wind was howling across the open field. Deer dashed around the meadow. The birds were chirping and the owls were hooting. I saw wolves threading their ways through the trees.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:05 AM
Author: Courtney(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Hunted house description By CS
As I was walking though town, I saw a creepy house. Just then I got very curios! Right when I got to the door, I walked in, I heard a slither. When I looked a little thing disappeared. While I walked the creaking got louder and louder I whispered to myself get out!
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:07 PM
Author: friend(High Park)
Subject: reply
dear courtney I liked the words you used like, slither. You made it creepy.
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:39 PM
Author: Aaron Friedland[Talmud Torah]
Subject: perfect story
Your story sounds great!! Fantastic job on your description of your story!!
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:06 AM
Author: Wildemann(HighPark)
Subject: Spooky Trees art project
Spooky Trees
Spooky Trees Swaying in the breeze Burnt night sky Witches flying by Creak Crack The Ghouls creep back! Laying Waiting Among the Spooky Trees.
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:01 PM
Author: duane(High Park)
Subject: nice writing!!!
i like your description!i hope im not in that place!!!
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:41 PM
Author: Zev(Talmud Torah]
it is very short.
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:44 PM
Author: Roney[Talmud Torah]
Subject: spooky pees
spooky pees rocks can you put another one of your story.
your worst nightmare.
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Date: January 21, 2004 01:44 PM
Author: samanthasandpaige(sherwoood)
Subject: replying to wildemann
To wildemann i am going to chage your story abite so i hope you will like it. spookey trees areswinging in the wind.Withes are on flying in the sky. Ghost are skaring the pepole.
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Date: January 21, 2004 01:44 PM
Author: samanthasandpaige(sherwoood)
Subject: replying to wildemann
To wildemann, I am going to chage your story abite. I hope you will like it. Spookey trees are swinging in the wind.Witches are on flying in the sky. Ghost are skaring other pepole is skared of ghost. Other pepole are not afraid of ghost they like ghost. They dont think that ghost are skary.I dont think that ghost are skary nether anway pepole who are afraid of ghost are frady cats and that is not good. I think that slepping in the dark is cool. Anyways i think that it is cool that i am not afraid of the dark.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:06 AM
Author: Courtney(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Prairie Setting
The grass was long and thin. A baby nail could crack the ground. When you take the step it crunches. The more you step the more you get addicted to it. When I come hereto investigate, it felt like a vacation. The lake moves swiftly and silently. It's warm enough you would want to take a nap there. But you can't because the alligators move like a waterfall, but as quiet as a library!
By CS
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:22 PM
Author: nikole(High Park)
Subject: good setting
I liked your setting it is great you did a awsome job.
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:22 PM
Author: nikole(High Park)
Subject: good setting
I liked your setting it is great you did a awsome job.
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:22 PM
Author: nikole(High Park)
Subject: good setting
I liked your setting it is great you did a awsome job.
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:22 PM
Author: nikole(High Park)
Subject: good setting
I liked your setting it is great you did a awsome job.
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