Date: November 03, 2003 03:22 PM
Author: nikole(High Park)
Subject: good setting
I liked your setting it is great you did a awsome job.
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:22 PM
Author: nikole(High Park)
Subject: good setting
I liked your setting it is great you did a awsome job.
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:22 PM
Author: nikole(High Park)
Subject: good setting
I liked your setting it is great you did a awsome job.
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:22 PM
Author: nikole(High Park)
Subject: good setting
I liked your setting it is great you did a awsome job.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:08 AM
Author: Courtney(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Forest setting By CS
Once long, long ago deep in the woods lived a pack of wolves. The trees were tall and bushy at the top. There were lots of birds. The wolves lived close to the river. Just outside the woods there was a town full of people.
Forest setting By CS
Once long, long ago deep in the woods lived a pack of wolves. The trees were tall and bushy at the top. There were lots of birds. The wolves lived close to the river. Just outside the woods there was a town full of people.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:11 AM
Author: james(HighPark)
Subject: settting
African Setting
In the wildness just off the coast of Africa, there lived a pack of wolves. Their den was located near a rushing river in the mountains. It was a beautiful sight with flowers everywhere, water pushing against the rocks and the beautiful smell of different kinds of flowers.
By.jj
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Date: November 12, 2003 01:41 PM
Author: nikole(High Park)
hey - I thought your setting was very good but I have a few ideas to make it even greater. Here goes...
In the wilderness, just off the coast of Africa, there lived a pack of wolves. Their den was located near a river that crashed against the rocks as it sped through the mountains. It was a beautiful sight. There were flowers of every colour peering from behind bushes and rock. The smell was intoxicating like a mothers perfume. The wolves walked as though it belonged to them - the beauty.
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Date: November 12, 2003 02:54 PM
Author: james(High Park)
dear nikole I really like your story. It was better then mine
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:15 PM
Author: Linda(High Park)
Subject: descriptive
Dear James, I liked your descriptive words. From Linda
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Date: November 27, 2003 10:02 AM
Author: linda
Subject: setting
I really like your description
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Date: November 27, 2003 04:48 PM
Author: hazel
Subject: setting
& I enjoyed the short story on the wolves in den. The setting of the story in the mountains is beautiful imagery.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:13 AM
Author: james(HighPark)
Subject: setting
Winter Setting
It was a beautiful calm evening. I hear the birds chirping. Because it is winter, footsteps are frozen in the snow. You can hear howling in the distance. The sky is a beautiful baby blue.
By. j.j
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:04 PM
Author: Jewels(High Park)
Subject: Reply to the setting
I think that your descriptive is very good. I liked the way you put your sky ababy blue.
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:05 PM
Author: friend(High Park)
Subject: nice
this is my favorite out of the class!see you in class
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:14 AM
Author: Linda(HighPark)
Subject: setting
Prairie Setting By LS
It was warmer than a day without clouds. The grass swayed as the wind blew a warm sigh. You could see the water going high overhead and the pouncing of the foxes trying to get the fish but not prevailing. It was all calm
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:21 PM
Author: kelisha.(High Park)
Subject: amazing
Iloved your story it was wonderful
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:21 PM
Author: kelisha.(High Park)
Subject: amazing
Iloved your story it was wonderful
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:14 AM
Author: Bryan(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Haunted House Description By BJ
The house was a lot darker than I remembered, not to mention spookier, creakier and a lot of broken things. The signs were broken, the doors and windows were hanging on with one screw. It could only mean one thing; the house was haunted
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:02 PM
Author: shayla(High Park)
nicejob
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Date: January 23, 2004 01:57 PM
Author: Alex
Bryan I hope you like the change. There was a haunted house and the sign by the haunted house said The Blooded Haunted House. We saw zombies."I feel scary," said Rex.I tasted hotdogs.I hear ghosts.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:14 AM
Author: Linda(HighPark)
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:14 AM
Author: james(HighPark)
African Setting
In the wildness just off the coast of Africa, there lived a pack of wolves. Their den was located near a rushing river in the mountains. It was a beautiful sight with flowers everywhere, water pushing against the rocks and the beautiful smell of different kinds of flowers.
By.jj
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:31 PM
Author: Amber(HighPark)
Subject: den
awesome i could just get a picture of it!
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:05 PM
Author: Hannah(High Park)
Subject: Replying
Daer James
I liked your peice of writing, it was very cool.I liked everything about it. You are a very good writer. I liked how you added the smelling of the flowers and how you haered the water pushing against the rocks.
sincerincly, Hannah Gr. 4
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Date: December 15, 2003 02:52 PM
Author: AL SHERWOOD
i liked how you did your sentences.But you can do more then you've did?
P.S I hop[e you read this note?
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:05 PM
Author: Hannah(High Park)
Subject: Replying
Daer James
I liked your peice of writing, it was very cool.I liked everything about it. You are a very good writer. I liked how you added the smelling of the flowers and how you haered the water pushing against the rocks.
sincerincly, Hannah Gr. 4
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:05 PM
Author: Hannah(High Park)
Subject: Replying
Daer James
I liked your peice of writing, it was very cool.I liked everything about it. You are a very good writer. I liked how you added the smelling of the flowers and how you haered the water pushing against the rocks.
sincerincly, Hannah Gr. 4
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:04 PM
Author: Hannah(High Park)
Subject: Reply
Dear James I thought Your story was cool. I like the way you described it.IT WAS SOOOO COOL
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:04 PM
Author: Hannah(High Park)
Subject: Reply
Dear James I thought Your story was cool. I like the way you described it.IT WAS SOOOO COOL
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:15 AM
Author: Bryan(HighPark)
Subject: setting
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Date: December 15, 2003 03:05 PM
Author: AL SHERWOOD
I do not like what I've seen you did not write anything and I hope you do something on the paper that you did write more this time?????????????????
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:17 AM
Author: Bryan(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Winter Setting By BJ
The open field is wet from the snow. All you see is white and a pack of exhausted wolves traveling through the cold. When you walk through the rustling field, the wind pounds in your face. When we open our eyes, all we see is trees and piles of snow.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:17 AM
Author: Ceidre(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Jungle Setting By CK
All was noisy. The leaves fell from the tree. Snakes, deer, birds and bears made their home in the ground, den, bushes and trees. The birds were chirping to their young as the sun was coming up.
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:06 PM
Author: taylor(High Park)
Subject: setting
your setting was very discriptev I could see it in my mind.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:18 AM
Author: Linda(HighPark)
Subject: setting
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:19 AM
Author: Linda(HighPark)
Subject: setting
Arctic Setting
By LS In the Arctic, the cold of the freeing winds blow through the cold of the evening. The animals were all asleep, shivering in their dens. The only thing that would wake them up was the howling of the wolves, saying it was time to hunt.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:20 AM
Author: Bryan(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Alberta Setting
Once upon a time there lived a little pack of wolves in the woods beside a blue sparkling river. They lived in a den in a place called Alberta. The nearest town was 20 miles away.
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:14 PM
Author: Haley(High Park)
Subject: Setting
Nice setting. It was very cool when you said sparkling river.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:27 AM
Author: Rabea(HighPark)
Haunted house Description By REZ
The house was a lot darker than I remembered. Shingles were broken off and the windows were busted. I silently tiptoed inside with fear in my eyes. The door slammed shut behind me. When I looked upstairs, I saw someone writing PREPARE TO Die! I ran back and tried to open the door but it was locked.
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:38 PM
Author: David[Talmud Torah]
Subject: haunted house
your story was awesome and it gave me goosebumps
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:47 PM
Author: Ariella
Subject: Hunted house
The story was very interesting if I were to rate it I would give you distinction. I think your piece of writing is misterious.Great story!
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:48 PM
Author: Ron[Talmud Torah]
That was great you used lots of description I think you should be the number one writer of the year.Are you going to write more?I think you should.Did you write any other stories?If you did I want to read them.Is the person on the stairs a zombie,mummy,vampire what is it?What are shingles I know what shingles are but I forgot.From who did you learn how to write with so much discription?I wish I could write like you.I hope you liked my comments.
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Date: January 21, 2004 01:58 PM
Author: alex(sherwood
Subject: reply to Rek
i like your story rek.iwish i could make a story like that.I like scary stories.I hope you can make another story. bye for now. have a great day.
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Date: January 21, 2004 02:00 PM
Author: shanissa [sherwood]
Subject: reply to rabea
To Rabea,
I am going to change your story because I liked it. One day a girl went in a house and saw writing on the wall. That said, "To die". She got so scared that she ran home to her mom and told her.
Then she went to bed.
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Date: January 21, 2004 02:01 PM
Author: shanissa [sherwood]
Subject: reply to rabea
To Rabea,
I am going to change your story because I liked it. One day a girl went in a house and saw writing on the wall. That said, "To die". She got so scared that she ran home to her mom and told her.
Then she went to bed.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:30 AM
Author: Linda(HighPark)
Subject: Character
Character By LS
She had long brown hair with black eyes but there was something different about her. When she cried, no water came down on her cheeks and she had a cut right beside her eye.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:31 AM
Author: Rabea(HighPark)
Subject: wintersetting
Winter Setting by REZ
The winds howled across the open field. The snow swirled in the wind. Leaves dropped from the trees. The river was frozen like solid rock.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:31 AM
Author: Rabea(HighPark)
Subject: wintersetting
Winter Setting by REZ
The winds howled across the open field. The snow swirled in the wind. Leaves dropped from the trees. The river was frozen like solid rock.
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:33 AM
Author: Rabea(HighPark)
Subject: jungle setting
vJungle Setting REZ
The birds were chirping in the tree. The rushing river splashed against the rock. I could hear all the birds singing in a group. Water dripped from the leaves.
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Date: January 13, 2004 10:01 AM
Author: Leanne[Dovercourt]
Subject: Jungle Setting
your story is great Rabea I can just think of the jungle when I read your setting just in two lines I can already feel like I'm walking in the jungle. But you should write a little bit more so that maybe much more people will want to read it and reply to your setting!
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Date: October 30, 2003 10:33 AM
Author: Rabea(HighPark)
Subject: jungle setting
vJungle Setting REZ
The birds were chirping in the tree. The rushing river splashed against the rock. I could hear all the birds singing in a group. Water dripped from the leaves.
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:03 PM
Author: Tyler(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Deserted town setting By TL
The wind was howling through the deserted town. The windows were boarded up and door were too. The moon was high above the deserted town. The wind was blowing so hard, it broke the boards and then took off
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:00 PM
Author: Leah(High Park)
Subject: replye
dear tylre I liked your description and your title.
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:00 PM
Author: Leah(High Park)
Subject: replye
dear tylre I liked your description and your title.
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:05 PM
Author: Tyler(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Forest setting By Tyler Lund
The wind was howling in the forest and the bush was rustling. You can smell the pine trees. You see brown on the trees and black on the ground.It feels so natural. It feels so real.
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Date: January 13, 2004 01:40 PM
Author: Kyle[Talmud Torah] Aaron B
Subject: The Wind in the Forest
Hi, Tyler, Your description of the forest and the windy weather is very beautiful! Take care. Aaron B
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:11 PM
Author: Tyler(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Haunted House Description The house was a lot darker then I remembered. The roof was not shingled at all so inside it was wet. Inside it was a disaster. The windows were broken, the floor boards were missing and the railings were gone. I began to feel shivers run up my spine.
By T L
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:15 PM
Author: Chelsea(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Field setting By.CH
Once in the hot summer the pups were playing in the open fields. You can hear the wind howling, pushing the trees for from side to side. The leaves were blowing in the whistling birds faces. When the animals of the forest made a loud move, the birds zoomed straight up in the air.
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Date: January 09, 2004 02:46 PM
Author: Tracy(Sherwood)
Subject: Reply to Chelsea
Hi Chelsea,
I read your story and it was amazing. It was the goods story that I wanted to change it into a different story. So listen up, and see if you think its good. Once it was a very hot day, and a girl was bringing her puppy out for a walk. The girl was very sad because her puppy was gone when she was walking to the park. Then she found her puppy and would always make sure that the puppy would never get lost!
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:17 PM
Author: Leah(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Haunted House Description By LV
We crept up the stars. We could hear the wind coming through the cracked window. It was a blustery night. Every thing was covered with spider webs. Spiders would vanish into the cracks in the floor. The borders on the windows were falling off. You could see the bats flying around and the light were dim and spooky. If you looked high above your head, you can see that people were hung there and only their bones remained
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:18 PM
Author: Chelsea(HighPark)
Subject: setting
Jungle Setting By CH
As the leopard sleeps in the high viny willow trees, the birds chirp, making a big sound. A snake squeezes the life out of the Cuckoo bird. Monkeys swing from wine to vine. Frogs are croaking to their family. You can hear the crackling of the leaves as the elephants come through the animals home. The animal's home was never quiet.
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:19 PM
Author: Leah(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Winter Setting By LV
The snow banks are piled up against the trees. You can hear the wind howling in the night. When it is dark, you can hear more and more wolves howling letting other wolves know where they are. You can see the moon lighting the sky. The trees stand still like giant statues. The snowflakes blow all around like a cool blizzard, it blows long and loud like a sad, sad, song.
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:20 PM
Author: Leah(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Fall Setting By LV
It was a beautiful sight, a flowing river surrounded by trees. Since it was fall, the trees were all sorts of colors: green, red, yellow and orange.
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:20 PM
Author: Cody(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Haunted House By CM I could hear the frightening footsteps of the people who lived in the house and when I turned around there was nobody there except for old spider webs. The broken windows kept on opening and shutting so I crept up the stairs and made this creaking noise. So I ran up the stairs and saw a light in one room. Then I heard some more footsteps in the house again.
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:20 PM
Author: Cody(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Haunted House By CM I could hear the frightening footsteps of the people who lived in the house and when I turned around there was nobody there except for old spider webs. The broken windows kept on opening and shutting so I crept up the stairs and made this creaking noise. So I ran up the stairs and saw a light in one room. Then I heard some more footsteps in the house again.
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:22 PM
Author: Chalsea(HighPark)
Subject: setting
Haunted house description By CH
My friend and I went to look at this house. The windows were smashed like it had been broken into. Crows flew around the house. The door creaked as it opened and closed.
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Date: November 12, 2003 02:55 PM
Author: Hannah(High Park)
Subject: reply
I liked your story it was good
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:22 PM
Author: Cody(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Winter Setting By CM
Trees had been covered with snow like the white fluffy feathers in a blanket. The trees were tall like they could reach the sky. Wolves were like owls hunting their prey down. It was as cold as if you opened a freezer. The fur of the wolf was like a soft wool blanket.
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:22 PM
Author: Cody(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Winter Setting By CM
Trees had been covered with snow like the white fluffy feathers in a blanket. The trees were tall like they could reach the sky. Wolves were like owls hunting their prey down. It was as cold as if you opened a freezer. The fur of the wolf was like a soft wool blanket.
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:22 PM
Author: Cody(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Winter Setting By CM
Trees had been covered with snow like the white fluffy feathers in a blanket. The trees were tall like they could reach the sky. Wolves were like owls hunting their prey down. It was as cold as if you opened a freezer. The fur of the wolf was like a soft wool blanket.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1363)
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:22 PM
Author: Cody(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Winter Setting By CM
Trees had been covered with snow like the white fluffy feathers in a blanket. The trees were tall like they could reach the sky. Wolves were like owls hunting their prey down. It was as cold as if you opened a freezer. The fur of the wolf was like a soft wool blanket.
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Date: January 27, 2004 01:17 PM
Author: Jesse(Talmud Torah)
Subject: winter setting
It was a very creative setting. It would make the begining of a story come alive!
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:22 PM
Author: Cody(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Winter Setting By CM
Trees had been covered with snow like the white fluffy feathers in a blanket. The trees were tall like they could reach the sky. Wolves were like owls hunting their prey down. It was as cold as if you opened a freezer. The fur of the wolf was like a soft wool blanket.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1365)
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:23 PM
Author: Cody(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Island Setting
By CM
In the distance, on a large island with no leaves, there lived a pack of wolves and four pups. The island had hundreds of deer, moose, rabbits, coyotes and fox. It had just turned winter.
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:23 PM
Author: Chelsea(HighPark)
Subject: setting
Haunted house description By CH
My friend and I went to look at this house. The windows were smashed like it had been broken into. Crows flew around the house. The door creaked as it opened and closed.
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Date: January 09, 2004 03:07 PM
Author: ashley[sherwood]
Subject: reply to chelsa.
chelsa,i saw your story.it was wonderful.one day chelsa was going for a walk and she was going to the park. and a builey came so she wonderd off and ignored the builey.she played on the swings and the builey fallowed. chelsa was getting scared so she went to her moms and she asked if she could stay thier for a hour or two okay said her mother can i have a nap. okay. thanks. honey time to go okay bye so she was walking home and her windows were smashed daddy are you here yes over here why are are windows smashed what ya ok we will worry about it ok i will watch t.v. the end.
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:38 PM
Author: Ceidre(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Forest Setting By CK
All was quiet. I could hear the winds howling through the woods. The snow crunched. The trees stood still with snow and icicles hanging from their branched. Forest Setting By CK
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:40 PM
Author: Ceidre(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Haunted House Description By CK
I saw something in the tree so I ran to see where it was going. It went into an old house. I walked to the door. The door opened. I ran and hid. A breeze shaped like a hand took my hand and brought me into the house. It was very dark and I saw a white thing. It was like a person but with white paint.
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Date: November 12, 2003 03:01 PM
Author: shayla(High Park)
cool job
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:52 PM
Author: Trisha(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
Prairie Description By TM
Once there was a pack of wolves. They lived in the prairies, by a rushing river, it was quiet and peaceful. The birds were singing, the flowers were blooming
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:53 PM
Author: Trisha(HighPark)
Subject: setting
Winter Setting By TM
Once there was a woods, it was cold as cold can be. The wind blew into my face. It felt like someone was following me but it was only an owl flying in the moonlight that hit my face. I saw a pack of wolves, it was going hunting but the pack of wolves looked like a train pushing by me
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Date: October 30, 2003 12:56 PM
Author: Michelle(HighPark)
Subject: mystery setting
I am going to describe the setting in the novel, Mystery House, by Jean Booker. This story took place at the Baggot's house, which was located in Canada and was really creepy. It was placed in between Chris's and Judy's house. The Baggots house was gray and every one though it was haunted because the woman who had owned it was found dead on Halloween by trick- or - treaters.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1372)
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:03 PM
Author: Trisha(HighPark)
Subject: Setting
The haunted house By TM
The house was a lot darker then I remembered. A bat flew down and it almost hit me in the face. Then a spider landed on my head. I screamed, then I ran out of the house. I tripped on a tombstone. I was in a graveyard, then I saw someone. I yelled, "Wait!" I never saw him again.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1373)
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:04 PM
Author: Trisha(HighPark)
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1374)
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:04 PM
Author: kyle(HighPark)
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1375)
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:07 PM
Author: Amber(HighPark) (doglover_122@hotmail.com)
Subject: haunted setting
I am going to describe the setting of the novel, Mystery House.
Setting:
The Main setting takes place in a small community in North America. The two main houses in the setting can see each other from across the ravine. Where everybody knows everybody and no enemies can be found. The crime began and was solved in this small North American community. Everyone thought the Baggot House was haunted because the owner was found dead on Halloween.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1376)
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:09 PM
Author: Amber(HighPark) (doglover_122@hotmail.com)
Subject: prime suspect
I am going to describe a character from the book, Mystery House by Jean Booker Prime Suspect:
Our prime suspect is Lena. Lena's two children died and her husband, David wants another child but they are unable to have anymore. We also believe that Lena took the model car so she could have enough money to adopt another child or benefit Glen. Lena is the prime suspect because she showed up unexpectedly wanting to get rid of the stuff when she already made a deal that she would come when the house is sold. Lena was believed to get up at midnight and make phone calls or talk to strange men in Chris's tree house. Lena is the prime suspect because she has the most motive out of anybody to need these.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1377)
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:10 PM
Author: Michelle(HighPark)
Subject: The crime in mystery house
I am describing the crime that happened in the book Mystery House, By Jean Booker.
Glen was a little boy who didn't know his dad to well and his mom, Eleanor, married Chris's father. Chris and Glen didn't get along to well but Chris still loved him. Eleanor was trying to sell the Baggot's house because the owner had died. The Baggot's house was left to the Baggot niece, Lena. When they had the garage sale at the Baggot's house to sell the old stuff, Lena took glen to help count the money then he disappered and no one knew where he went.
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:19 PM
Author: Paige/HighPark
Subject: Reply
That was kind of a sad because Eleanor got marriedand chris and Glen won't get along.
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Date: November 12, 2003 01:23 PM
Author: nikole(High Park)
You messed up!!!
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:10 PM
Author: kyle(HighPark)
Subject: kyle's mystery setting
I am discribing the setting from the book Mystery house by Jean Booker.
Scene of the crime: The crime was held at the Baggot house. The Baggot house is an old house. The house was left to a woman named Lena who is the niece. The crime is set in the present time.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1379)
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:12 PM
Author: Amber(HighPark) (doglover_122@hotmail.com)
Subject: mystery solution
I am going to describe the solution of the book, Mystery House.
Conclusion: Chris and her best friend, Judy were at Chirs's house when they saw a light on in the Baggot House, suspecting it was Lena they took their chance. They ended up locking her in the basement and calling for help. Chris's father came and Lena was arrested. Later they find out that Lena wasn't the Lena she said she was. The Baggot House owner, Lena was still in England waiting for the house to be sold.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1381)
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