Date: October 30, 2003 01:43 PM
Author: Brennan(HighPark)
That Was very cool
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:47 PM
Author: Brennan(HighPark)
> That Was very cool
thank you
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:43 PM
Author: Brennan(HighPark)
That Was very cool
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:43 PM
Author: Brennan(HighPark)
That Was very cool
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:42 PM
Author: Brennan(HighPark)
Subject: Clues
Im going to discribe to you the clues of by Mystery House, Jean Booker.
The Clues: 1.Lena's locket – when we looked on the back of the locket, it was engraved to a girl named Victoria. 2.A book of antique cars – we found this book in Lena's suitcase. We also found two wigs. One was blonde and one was red. 3.A Newspaper clipping – A newspaper clipping was found in Chris's dad's book. There was a picture of a man with a mustache much similar to the man in Lena's precious locket. 4.Cigarette butt and ashes – We found cigarette butts and ashes in several different places. For instance, we found some in the Volkswagen beetle, Chris's tree house, the Baggot house, etc.
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:42 PM
Author: Brennan(HighPark)
> Im going to discribe to you the clues of by
> Mystery House, Jean Booker.
>
> The Clues:
> 1.Lena's locket – when we looked on the back of
> the locket, it was engraved to a girl named
> Victoria. 2.A book of antique cars – we found
> this book in Lena's suitcase. We also found two
> wigs. One was blonde and one was red. 3.A
> Newspaper clipping – A newspaper clipping was
> found in Chris's dad's book. There was a picture
> of a man with a mustache much similar to the man
> in Lena's precious locket. 4.Cigarette butt and
> ashes – We found cigarette butts and ashes in
> several different places. For instance, we found
> some in the Volkswagen beetle, Chris's tree
> house, the Baggot house, etc.
i liked your clues
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:45 PM
Author: Brennan(HighPark)
Im going to discribe to you the suspects of Mystery House,Jean Booker.
The Suspects: Lena:Is a supposed relative to Mrs. Baggot. Lena is overheard on the phone talking nastily to a man or woman about a large sum of money. The Man in Front of the Smoke Shop: There is not much information on him but he is always staring at Chris and Glen. It looks like he is waiting for someone.
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:47 PM
Author: Brennan(HighPark)
Im going to discribe to you the crime of Mystery House, By Jean Booker.
The Crime: A 1936 McLaughlin car was stolen from the garden shed of the Baggot house. It was then replaced with an old style Volkswagen Beetle.
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Date: October 30, 2003 01:57 PM
Author: Nina(HighPark)
Subject: how mytery was solved?
I am describing how the mystery was solved in the book mystery house,Jean Booker.
How was the mystery solved? Victoria abducted Glen and David is Eleanor's ex-husband. David is now married to Victoria. They wanted Glen because when David and Victoria had a boy that soon after died at the age of four David and Victoria caught by Chris; Victoria was snooping around in the garage looking for her locket. When Chris and Judy came in and pushed Victoria in the cellar. Judy got Chris's dad. The dad pinned down. And soon after David and Victoria were arrested for theft and abduction.
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Date: October 30, 2003 02:04 PM
Author: Sandy(HighPark)
Subject: Sandy's super setting
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Date: October 30, 2003 02:06 PM
Author: Sandy(HighPark)
Subject: This is really my setting
This is the setting for the Spray Paint Mystery by Angela Shelf Medearis.
Crime scene: The crime took place in the western country in a small elementary school. It happens near 107 streets at the west end of the hall. The school looked very new and was pale maroon.
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Date: October 30, 2003 02:04 PM
Author: Sandy(HighPark)
Subject: Sandy's super setting
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Date: October 30, 2003 02:04 PM
Author: zack(HighPark)
Subject: spray paint mystery
Location/setting: the location is Pecan Springs Elementary School in Austin, Texas,U.S.A.
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Date: November 03, 2003 03:15 PM
Author: william(High Park)
Subject: spooky settings
I liked Zackarys story it was great! Best story I/ve ever heard of! Good job Zack!
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Date: October 31, 2003 09:45 AM
Author: nikole(HighPark)
Subject: the spooky setting
When I entered the haunted house and I stepped on the floor it creaked and cracked and the floor caved in on me. I was in an unformiler place in the basement of the house. Then I seen some big ugly rats scattering all over. I got scared and I was really nerveos about this house it was spooky. I felt a gust of some really cold air rush through my body.
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Date: November 17, 2003 02:59 PM
Author: taylor (High Park
Subject: what I lilke about your story
I liked your discirption of the house.
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Date: November 17, 2003 03:01 PM
Author: Haley(HighPark)
Subject: The Spooky Setting
Nice story Nikole. I loved the descriptive words.You did great on your story I bet when everyone reads it they will think it was wonderful and scary.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:38 AM
Author: AL SHERWOOD
I liked how you Said when I enter the house, that is very good.I think that you can do a better job then this one.
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:39 AM
Author: AL SHERWOOD
I liked how you Said when I enter the house, that is very good.I think that you can do a better job then this one.
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Date: January 05, 2004 11:37 AM
Author: Alexa and Jacqui (Donna.Daniel@epsb.ca)
Subject: Haunted house setting
Dear Nikole,
We liked the way you said, "cold air rushed through my body." It made us feel chilly! Your setting is great. Your setting makes a good start for a spooky story. We were curious to know if your haunted house preview was at the beginning or in the middle of your story. We have a question. Did the floor above you cave in? Or did you fall through?
Alexa and Jacqui
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Date: October 31, 2003 09:50 AM
Author: Tanaya(HighPark)
Subject: All about Elizabeth Swan
A twenty-two year old girl named 'Elisabeth Swan", was a princess. She had long blond hair and a red dress with sparkles.
She likes sunsets and moonlights. She does not like mud and dirty people either Halloween. The thing she hates is zombies and skeletons. She is able to a do tic won do. She really does not like pirates. The more she seas them the more frighten she gets. She does hate hooks hand as well. But she lives all above
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Date: November 17, 2003 03:04 PM
Author: Hannah (High Park)
Subject: awsomly cool
Your story is totaly cool. I liked how you put quotation marks around the name, and how you added the detales it was totaly ccccccccccccccoooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllll.........
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Date: November 17, 2003 03:05 PM
Author: Hannah (High Park)
Subject: awsomly cool
Your story is totaly cool. I liked how you put quotation marks around the name, and how you added the detales it was totaly ccccccccccccccoooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllll.........
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Date: October 31, 2003 10:01 AM
Author: Dalton(High Park)
Subject: Character Description
I have a neighbor named Lil DJ. He's 14 years old. He's cool he likes cool kids. He doesn't like uncool kids. He's popular his talents are biking, dirt biking, moto cross biking, and quading. Plus he has hormones.
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Date: November 17, 2003 02:43 PM
Author: keith (High Park)
Subject: nice job
that is a cool story it is very CoOl like totally it is so coOl i like the detales it is totaly CCCCCCCCCCooooooooooooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllllllll i like it little ddddddddddjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj i like the mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm dirt.
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Date: January 13, 2004 11:51 AM
Author: Kyle[Talmud Torah]
Subject: Great Story!
Great Story!
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Date: October 31, 2003 10:11 AM
Author: Hannah(High Park)
Subject: Setting
Colin is a very nice girl, she's 10 years old. Nobody knows what she looks like, because she always stays indoors, She has a lot of blue shirts and blue baggy jeans. She has glasses just like me, she always wears her blue and white sneakers. Her hair is beautiful its blonde with brown streaks in it. The only thing she drinks is juice, and she likes pop music. She loves school and reading too. She knows teachers are cool because she likes them a lot. Colin loves her family a lot she is family lover.
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Date: November 26, 2003 04:35 PM
Author: Hannah's mom(High Park)
Subject: replying
Good description Hannah!! I pictured Colin in my mind while I was reading your character description. Thank you for showing me your work.
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Date: October 31, 2003 10:11 AM
Author: Taylor.A(High Park)
Subject: the dare setting
"I dare you to go into that anchent hanted house ". Said Dan with a small smile. Hi I'm tim Elsen and that is dan he is trying to get me into the the haunted house well so called hanted house well back to the story. "Come on are you chicken buc buc chiken" said Dan with a snicker . "No way absolutely not , not a chance in the world"I said." Okay then I guess that you don't want to get twenty five bucks " "come again" I said sputtering . "you heard me twenty five bucks" Dan said not even looking at me more looking at his nails. " well okay " I said scratching my head . I wasen't so sure about going into this old house. I walked over and pushed open the gate and steped inside the yard .The gate was so squeckey I don't think oil could even fix it. I steped inside a huge cloud of dust apered when I steped inside . the mold scent stung my nose I tried to breath through my mouth but the hevey air and dust burnt my throat.Once my eyes adjusted to the light I walked in . I coughed so hard I thought I was going to cough up a lung.
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Date: November 17, 2003 02:57 PM
Author: dylan (High Park)
great story taylor.I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: December 18, 2003 09:35 AM
Author: AL SHERWOOD
I think that it was a vantastice story Taylor.but I know you can do a better job then this one.
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Date: October 31, 2003 10:13 AM
Author: Taylor.A(High Park)
Subject: The Dare problem
Once I stoped coughing I looked down to see the floor cracking under my feet."AAAAAH" The floor snaped under my weight .I was haning on by one hand I didn't know how much of a fall it was it just might be five feet or it might be one hundred feet . Meanwhile out side Dan went around back and sat down on a marble bench and closed his eyes. "Man I got to get out of here " I said pulling my self out and rolling away from the hole where I just was…
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Date: October 31, 2003 10:15 AM
Author: calvin(High Park)
Subject: character description
My character name is Jake he's 18 years old. He has three earnings on each ear, he some times getting ear infection he has dark mean eyes like a jag wire and he has orange spiky hair he likes being alone most of the time. He likes sating worms and likes killing people He's very mean and hats being nice most of the time. He has no talents because he thinks he's so cool. He also lives in a log. His parents are in jail because they tried to robe other family's. And he has one pet . It used to be is dads. So that's hoe he lives his life.
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Date: November 17, 2003 03:03 PM
Author: Marie(High Park)
Subject: Great Job.
Your story is totaly cool because you had lots of descripchin in it.
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Date: January 05, 2004 10:52 AM
Author: Matthew and Mackenzie
Subject: re:character diecription
We liked the way you described his apperance and inner qualites,and how they affeced others. We liked he was exactly like his parents. It's cool how you described where he lived. We would like to know what is his pet and does he steal to stay alive. This beginning is a lot like a book we read called The Thief Lord by Cornelia Funke.
from,
Matthew and Mackenzie
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