Date: January 09, 2004 03:14 PM
Author: Kyle[Sherwood]
Subject: Reply
Hollo,Talar Im kyle remember.Im going to chang your story abite Ok?.one time I walked in a dark spocky, house when sudinly the wood brock under my feet.AAAHHH, Im ''ilive'' I think I fell 50 or100 feet. I just wish I could get out of this place.
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Date: October 31, 2003 10:29 AM
Author: cynthia(High Park)
Subject: character
Kel was 7 years old. He wore blue pants, a red cap with a gold star, a light green shirt and yellow Nikes. Last but not least blonde hair with red streaks. Kel liked baseball cards, he also played the game. He didn't like big Tom or his friends. See Kel had a talent he would take on dares. Kel was a orphanage child.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1419)
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Date: October 31, 2003 10:30 AM
Author: cynthia(High Park)
Subject: character
Kel became a orphanage child when his mother left him on the streets in 1928. His mother was a witch as some people say. Not your ordinary witch that dresses up on Halloween. She really was a big, mean, spell-casting, brain sucking witch you can't deny it.He blamed her for not being here. But it was better than living with her. He never knew what happened to her. He dreamed of her coming to the orphanage to claim him.
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Date: November 12, 2003 02:40 PM
Author: MrsEbbers(High Park)
Subject: reply to the character
Dear Cynthia, I really liked your description. you used some very interesting words. I would not like to meet that brain sucking witch! FROM Mrs Ebbers
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Date: October 31, 2003 10:38 AM
Author: connor(High Park)
Subject: problem/solution
I walked on the sidewalk and I saw the old mansion so I steeped inside. The doors went slam, the doors got covered with bricks. I said "Uh oh" I got my flashlight, I saw a white BIG SPOOKY ghost. I ran to the kitchen where I found a golden watch. So I took it but I found out it was a trap. I ran away from the kitchen, the tiles were falling. I ran quickly. I saw the ghost. It said, " GIVE me that watch!" I said, " NO". I ran through the ghost up the stairs and got pushed out of the chimney.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1421)
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Date: October 31, 2003 10:47 AM
Author: dylan(High Park)
Subject: John character discription
Hi my name I john is I'm 18 and I have black and blue hair, orange t-shirt and red pants. I like to vandalize and break the law. I don't like cops and school and my talents are breaking the law. When I was little I was a bad kid so they kicked me out of school. I have been a bad kid because I had to get the people that got me in trouble and made fun of me.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1422)
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Date: November 17, 2003 03:11 PM
Author: cynthia(High Park)
Subject: cool
It was a good story.I think it's going to be a world wide sucsses. I like it very much.Good job.
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Date: January 06, 2004 05:37 PM
Author: Kyle
Subject: John Character Description
Sounds great to me!
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Date: January 06, 2004 05:37 PM
Author: Kyle
Subject: John Character Description
Sounds great to me!
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Date: October 31, 2003 10:47 AM
Author: Christian(High Park)
Subject: Character description
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Date: October 31, 2003 10:48 AM
Author: Christian(High Park)
Subject: Character description
This boy has no name. But some people know how old he is he is ten. He stays in the basment, he wears old dirty shorts. Ge likes spiders he also likes the cold that's that's weird, her eats grose stuff off the ground. He dosent like light or the warmth even candy. He lives all him self and he likes it. But you should see wwhat happens to people when they try and break in his old creeky home.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1424)
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Date: November 17, 2003 03:03 PM
Author: DJ(High Park)
Subject: Response
I love your story alot.I like your description and the grose stuff.
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Date: October 31, 2003 10:55 AM
Author: Tylor(High Park)
Hello I have a vary old nabor his name is Mr. big he is 100 years old. He has long gray bread like Santa claws. Also a wrinkled face .he Likes to sit on the toilet and read the news paper .he doesn't like to Shave his beard because he would like to be in the Ginus Book of Records for the biggest breed. He does not like his cane but he has To use it. And the thing he drives is an old put car.
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Date: November 17, 2003 03:03 PM
Author: Karla high park
Subject: Reply
dear Tylor,I liked your story it was realy funny. I liked when you said that mr.big liked to sit on a toilet and read the news. it was a great story keep up the good work. sinsely Karla
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Date: December 15, 2003 01:37 PM
Author: ryan (Sherwood)
Subject: reply to story
I like your story it was good. I think you can improve your story by puting more things in like interesting thinks what he does for fun or what it like being old!
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Date: October 31, 2003 10:55 AM
Author: Karla(High Park)
Subject: Nice old man
Nice old man was going home when he saw a dog who a cat scratched his paw. Then the nice old man found him and took him to the vet then he would be better. The nice old man took the dog so he could keep him. when he got home his child ran down stairs and saw a dog she was so happy to have a dog. How nice old man he is 90 years old he has white skin hates to be disturbed. He has all his teeth and he's bold he likes children and babies.
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Date: November 17, 2003 02:52 PM
Author: Haley (High Park)
Subject: Nice Old Man
Nice Old Man story Karla! I liked when you took the dog home and he took it to the vet.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1540)
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Date: November 17, 2003 02:58 PM
Author: taryn(High Park)
Subject: nice story
I like when you said the nice old man took the cat to the vet.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1543)
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Date: October 31, 2003 10:58 AM
Author: Paige (High park )
Subject: Scary setting (p.z.)
I saw a haunted house so I walked in the haunted house then I heard the door shutting behind me. I saw a shadow walking back and fourth then I started to shack I walked up the stairs and then I heard the stairs squeaking. It was really loud. Then I smelled rotting food lying on the floor. I tasted slim in my mouth. I felt spider webs all over my hands also I felt air going through me I thought it was a ghost flying around and it went through me.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1427)
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Date: October 31, 2003 11:02 AM
Author: Keith Boer(High park )
Subject: halloween setting
When I went in the scary Haunted House. There was stairs cracking I was freaked I was getting goosebumps. I smelt a fragrant smell but it was just me cause the upstairs smelt like rotten eggs. I saw a shadow following me so I ran downstairs but the shadow was still following behind my back. I felt force-feed,it was freaky.I tasted dust it tasted spoiled I had to hold my breath for a long time.
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Date: October 31, 2003 11:02 AM
Author: Keith Boer(High park )
Subject: halloween setting
When I went in the scary Haunted House. There was stairs cracking I was freaked I was getting goosebumps. I smelt a fragrant smell but it was just me cause the upstairs smelt like rotten eggs. I saw a shadow following me so I ran downstairs but the shadow was still following behind my back. I felt force-feed,it was freaky.I tasted dust it tasted spoiled I had to hold my breath for a long time.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1430)
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Date: November 17, 2003 03:03 PM
Author: [k.cHigh Park)
Subject: hallween
it was the best story I read he had gossbumps
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1549)
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Date: November 17, 2003 03:03 PM
Author: [k.cHigh Park)
Subject: hallween
it was the best story I read he had gossbumps
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1550)
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Date: November 17, 2003 03:03 PM
Author: [k.cHigh Park)
Subject: hallween
it was the best story I read he had gossbumps
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1551)
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Date: November 26, 2003 05:13 PM
Author: yvonne (Sherwood)
Subject: nice job
good story keith.it must have been pretty scary. I'm glad you survived the whole ordeal because i would miss you if you were gone.
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Date: November 26, 2003 05:13 PM
Author: yvonne (Sherwood)
Subject: nice job
good story keith.it must have been pretty scary. I'm glad you survived the whole ordeal because i would miss you if you were gone.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1564)
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Date: November 26, 2003 05:13 PM
Author: yvonne (Sherwood)
Subject: nice job
good story keith.it must have been pretty scary. I'm glad you survived the whole ordeal because i would miss you if you were gone.
(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1565)
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Date: October 31, 2003 11:03 AM
Author: William(High park )
Subject: scary story setting
I entered the haunted house and I heard the door and gate slam like this BANG. Then I saw a pair of stairs creaking. Then I went up the stairs and crashed into an Invisible wall it felt hard! Then I smelled spoiled food! Then I saw some food rotting. Then I heard the fridge fall. Then I got trapped between four invisible walls. I tried to beat the wall by hammering it with an axe and one only broke! Then I slammed the walls and I was free!
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Date: November 17, 2003 02:49 PM
Author: taryn (High Park)
Subject: exelent problem setting
I like when you said the door slamed great job
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(http://forums.epsb.net/forums/Index.cfm?CFApp=2&Message_ID=1538)
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Date: January 09, 2004 03:10 PM
Author: sonya sherwood
Subject: message
Dear William I really like your story.One night I entered a spocy house. There were spiderweb all over.I fell into a trap and I could not getout. I yelled and yelled nobody came. I so a hole to the backyard.I Jumped in and gotout. Then I went some were faraway and did'et come back.
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