October 31, 2003 11:06 AM
Author: marie(High park )
Every body knows how old she is. She plays fair with others she as lots of friends. She likes to watch TV. With others. She plays outside she is very nice she is funny in some ways. But she as lots of talent with others. Kaly's parents travel her around to others places that are faraway.
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Date: November 17, 2003 03:08 PM
Author: Paige(HighPark)
Subject: Iliked your story
I like when you used kindness and nice words.also I liked whenyou used wndrful sentens
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Date: October 31, 2003 11:07 AM
Author: maggie (high park )
Subject: character description (m.c. )
One day while sitting in my classroom a big fat funny old man came into the classroom and gave me a spelling test. He had crazy black hair, brown eyes and was missing his front tooth. He was also dressed funny. He made a apple pie for our classroom and the children liked the apple pie. The funny fat man told us about his dog. He likes to play with his dog. The dogs name is candy. The children had to write a story about the dog.
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Date: November 17, 2003 02:50 PM
Author: cynthia(High Park)
Subject: very good
I like your decription of words.It had good pucuwation.It was nice
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Date: October 31, 2003 11:09 AM
Author: cheyanne (high park )
Subject: haunted house setting
The Scary Haunted House
When I went into the Scary Haunted House I got scared cause there was bats on the roof. I heard creaky floors when I took a step. I seen spider webs. There was dust as thick as two inches. I felt cold air rushing through my body and my spine and made it shiver. I could smell rotten wood and moldy air. Spoiled food dripped from the kitchen above. I went upstairs. The stairs were creaking.
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Date: October 31, 2003 11:14 AM
Author: cheyanne (high park )
Subject: haunted house problem
The stairs turned flat and I fell into a trap I herd some footsteps I got scared. I wanted to get out. The footsteps were getting louder and louder. I found a trap door and it lead down to the basement. The footsteps were getting louder and louder.
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Date: November 17, 2003 02:47 PM
Author: Dylan (High Park)
Subject: Hanted house problem
Good job I loved your story. It was great!!!! You had a great problem.
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Date: January 21, 2004 02:06 PM
Author: Anthony (sherwood)
Subject: Reply to Dylan
Helllo, my name is Anthony. Iam going to chage your story a bet. Ocne upon a time, there was a boy named Tony. He went into a house. So the boy walked down a flight of stairs. They just went flat. I sled down the stairs into a pond of yellow hair. Some mosters came from no where. Tony had to get out of there. So he did . He had to find the exit. It took Tony a very long time to find the exit. Then Tony finally found the exit. Tony jumped out of the house. He ran home.He never went to that house again.
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Date: November 17, 2003 03:06 PM
Author: AMIT(High Park)
Subject: i LIKED YOU R STORY.
i LIKED THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED YOUR STORY.
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Date: October 31, 2003 11:15 AM
Author: Haley(HighPark )
Subject: Character Description
Haley lives in Edmonton, she's nine years old. She loves going shopping with her friends and mom and dad. She talks to her mom and dad when she has problems and with her friends. She loves Reading Harry Potter books with her mom because both of them love reading. She goes camping with her grandma and grandpa and her other grandma and grandpa. Me and my mom go horse back riding on my birth-day party. I have two dogs named Goldy and kassy and a hamster named Hammy Jr. I love having friends over when I am bored. I love drawing with my family members cause it is fun.i play soccer with my mom and play soccer with my team.I don't like mean people and boring games. My personality is I love visitors to play with. I love being nice to people so they don't get mad at me. Getting mail for my mom cause I am nice.Helping people if they are hurt. My talent is soccer because I like it and it is fun.
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Date: November 17, 2003 03:12 PM
Author: william(High Park)
Subject: nice story
I liked the story because its funny
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Date: October 31, 2003 11:18 AM
Author: cynthia(HighPark )
Subject: setting
I was on my way home. When I saw a house that wasn't there yesterday . So I took anther bite of my bread and walked up the stairs. There in front of me was a great big door stood in front of me. I opened the door with all my might . I swung open my door . There pecular smell driffed in the air. Even though it was hot outside, it was cold. I had goosebumps . But I probably knew it wasn't a haunted house.
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Date: January 09, 2004 03:11 PM
Author: ronnie Sherwood
Subject: Reply to selvin
Your story is kind of STUPIED yo BY
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