Grade 3/4's Sensational Opening Sentences

These sentences were written by Grade 3/4 students at High Park Elementary School during the month of October.

One afternoon Taylor A and I were exhausted from BMX biking off of jumps and courses.

By D.

After a very long school day doing lots of activities it was dinner time.

By T.

After an exciting afternoon at my best friend Nikole’s house I wanted to sleep I crawled into my warm and cozy bed and as I was falling asleep I heard a very spooky scary noise, I got the shivers.

By H.

After I came home from school I was so tired I walked all the way to California I ate my dinner and I got a drink of pop also I brushed my teeth I got my pyjamas on.

By P.

“Ha Ha” Cheyanne was pretending to snore she was so hilarious. We fell to the ground laughing then we got up and made up a dance, had a concert everybody came but my brother Cody (of course).

By K.

After a superb afternoon of milking a cow I wanted to go to sleep I was pooped I got a gallon of milk.

By K.

It was a chilly day for me so I went inside and I told my mom I got an aching jaw and I was out of breath.

By A.

“I can’t believe that we are home alone for an hour and a half” my best friend Neil said excitedly!

By T.

I am tired after school so I go home but I go to sleep.

By M.


After an exciting summer of quading I dragged my aching dirty body upstairs. I had a shower I brushed my teeth I finally went to bed I knew my body really needed it. As I finally closed my eyes I heard a mysterious sound I wondered what it was.

By A.

It was a dark and cold night. Me and my dad went hunting out in the scary woods.

By T.


One night at the old farm in my creepy home I was really really tried and I couldn’t go to sleep because it was too noisy.

By C.

Kelisha, Nikole, and I went camping with my mom and dad for the weekend. We had a fire and had some marshmallows for a midnight snack. When I went to bed I heard a noise.

By C.

After a long flight and a tour in the Laurasis (?) we saw a giraffe and a rhino. At the abandoned hotel we unpacked and tried to go to sleep but I heard a noise.

By T.

Hi my name is M. and I am trying to find my cat. I was snoozing on my bed covered with my cozy blanket when suddenly I heard my cat.

By M.

My cat ran out when I opened the door I ran after her but I couldn’t get her.

By C.

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